[T.A] Rewrite

S

seta_soujiro

Dear Peter,
1. I / be / very surprised / get / letter
\Rightarrow I was very surprised to get your letter.
2. I / not know / you arrive back / London
\Rightarrow I didn't know that you arrived to LonDOn
3. You have good time / New York ?
\Rightarrow Did you have good time in New York.
4. I look forward / hear / about it.
\Rightarrow I am looking forward to hearing about it.
5. Thank you / invite / me / dinner next week
\Rightarrow Thanh you for inviting me to the dinner next week.
6. I / be afraid / not able / come / Sunday.
\Rightarrow I am afraid I can't be able to come on Sunday.
7. But / be / free / following weekend
\Rightarrow But I will be free at following weekend.
8. Why / you call me / next / days?
\Rightarrow Why don't you call me next days?
yours,
Mary.


Xin chào, xin chào~ :Rabbit34
Ghé xem một số nội dung tâm đắc của team Anh chúng mình nhé
[Hướng dẫn] Tìm kiếm nội dung box Ngoại Ngữ
[Chia sẻ] Kinh nghiệm ôn thi HSG tỉnh và đỗ trường chuyên Anh
Luyện từ vựng và ngữ pháp nâng cao | Ôn Chuyên và HSG Tỉnh
[TIPs] Bài tập viết lại câu (Rewrite the sentences)
Luyện tập phrasal verbs
[Tổng hợp] Study Idioms
[Chia sẻ] 33 cách trở thành "chiến thần" trong phòng thi IELTS
Reading made easy
[Tổng hợp] Hướng dẫn viết luận theo chủ đề
How to write right
Academic vocabulary used in essays
Chúc bạn một ngày vui vẻ!
 
D

diema3

seta_soujiro said:
Dear Peter,
1. I / be / very surprised / get / letter
\Rightarrow I was very surprised to get your letter. [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
2. I / not know / you arrive back / London
\Rightarrow I didn't know that you arrived to LonDOn X
3. You have good time / New York ?
\Rightarrow Did you have good time in New York? [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
4. I look forward / hear / about it.
\Rightarrow I am looking forward to hearing ....... about it. X
5. Thank you / invite / me / dinner next week
\Rightarrow Thanh you for inviting me to the dinner next week. X
6. I / be afraid / not able / come / Sunday.
\Rightarrow I am afraid I can't be able to come on Sunday. X
7. But / be / free / following weekend
\Rightarrow But I will be free at following weekend. X
8. Why / you call me / next / days?
\Rightarrow Why don't you call me next days? X
yours,
Mary.
Bấm để xem đầy đủ nội dung ...

cám ơn em nha!
chị cũng vừa sửa lại hco em 1 số câu rùi đấy !
mấy câu sai thì chị đánh dấu chỗ sai rồi ! em sủa lại nha! :D:D:D
 
T

trangbien

Thử sức xem thế nào! :D

Những câu khác biết rồi ko làm lại nhé! Còn có câu ko biết làm - chịu!
Dear Peter,
2. I / not know / you arrive back / London
\RightarrowI will not know you arrive back to London
4. I look forward / hear / about it.
\RightarrowI looking forward to hearing about it.
5. Thank you / invite / me / dinner next week
\Rightarrow Thanh you for inviting me to dinner next week
6. I / be afraid / not able / come / Sunday.
\Rightarrow I am afraid I dont able to come on Sunday.
7. But / be / free / following weekend
\RightarrowBut I will be free on following weekend.
8. Why / you call me / next / days?
\RightarrowWhy don't you call me the next days
yours,
Mary.

 
D

diema3

trangbien said:
Những câu khác biết rồi ko làm lại nhé! Còn có câu ko biết làm - chịu!
Dear Peter,
2. I / not know / you arrive back / London
\RightarrowI will not know you arrive back to London X
4. I look forward / hear / about it.
\RightarrowI looking forward to hearing about it. X
5. Thank you / invite / me / dinner next week
\Rightarrow Thanh you for inviting me to dinner next week [TEX]\bigvee[/TEX]
6. I / be afraid / not able / come / Sunday.
\Rightarrow I am afraid I don't able to come on Sunday. X
7. But / be / free / following weekend
\RightarrowBut I will be free on following weekend. X
8. Why / you call me / next / days?
\RightarrowWhy don't you call me the next days X
yours,
Mary.
Bấm để xem đầy đủ nội dung ...
cảm ơn nhiệt tình nha!
nhưng mà cõ nhiều câu vẫn sai lắm!
+ 4. sao lại dùng Ving sau I ???
+ 7. không dùng on following days
+ 6. người ta dùng tobê + able to chứ hok ai dùng TĐT + able to cả?
với 1 số chỗ nữ về cách kết hợp từ chưa đúng
 
T

trangbien

hihi, chỉ thử sức vậy thôi. Năm nay mới lên lớp 8, chưa hiểu biết gì nhiều cả. Dù sao cũng cảm ơn rất nhiều nhé.
Thank you verry much.
Thân
 
A

albee_yu

Dear Peter,
1. I / be / very surprised / get / letter
\Rightarrow I was very surprised to get your letter.
2. I / not know / you arrive back / London
\Rightarrow I didn’t know you had arrived back in London.
3. You have good time / New York ?
\Rightarrow Did you have a good time in New York ?
4. I look forward / hear / about it.
\Rightarrow I’m looking forward to hearing all about it .
5. Thank you / invite / me / dinner next week
\Rightarrow Thank you for inviting me to dinner next week.
6. I / be afraid / not able / come / Sunday.
\Rightarrow I’m afraid I won’t be able to come on Sunday.
7. But / be / free / following weekend
\Rightarrow But I’ll be free the following weekend.
8. Why / you call me / next / days?
\Rightarrow Why don’t you call me in the next days ?
yours,
Mary.
 
K

kothechiuduoc

Dear Peter,
1. I / be / very surprised / get / letter
\Rightarrow I was very surprised to get your letter.
2. I / not know / you arrive back / London
\Rightarrow I didn’t know you had arrived back into London.
3. You have good time / New York ?
\Rightarrow Did you have good time in New York ?
4. I look forward / hear / about it.
\Rightarrow I’m looking forward to hearing about it .
5. Thank you / invite / me / dinner next week
\Rightarrow Thank you for inviting me to dinner next week.
6. I / be afraid / not able / come / Sunday.
\Rightarrow I’m afraid I won’t be able to come on Sunday.
7. But / be / free / following weekend
\Rightarrow But I’ll be free the following weekend.
8. Why / you call me / next / days?
\Rightarrow Why don’t you call me the next days ?
yours,
Mary.
@chị Diễm: thanks chị nhìu lắm :D
 
D

diema3

albee_yu said:
Dear Peter,
1. I / be / very surprised / get / letter
\Rightarrow I was very surprised to get your letter. [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
2. I / not know / you arrive back / London
\Rightarrow I didn’t know you had arrived back in London. [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
3. You have good time / New York ?
\Rightarrow Did you have a good time in New York ? [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
4. I look forward / hear / about it.
\Rightarrow I’m looking forward to hearing all about it . [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
5. Thank you / invite / me / dinner next week
\Rightarrow Thank you for inviting me to dinner next week. [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
6. I / be afraid / not able / come / Sunday.
\Rightarrow I’m afraid I won’t be able to come on Sunday. [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
\Rightarrow có thể thay bằng shall not
7. But / be / free / following weekend
\Rightarrow But I’ll be free the following weekend. [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
8. Why / you call me / next / days?
\Rightarrow Why don’t you call me in the next days ? X
\RightarrowWhy don’t you call me in the next few days ? yours,
Mary.
Bấm để xem đầy đủ nội dung ...

Đây gần được coi là đáp án hoàn chỉnh của bài viết thư này !
mọi người coi lại nha!
câu này sai thêm bớt gì tớ sửa hết lại roài đó
:D:D:D:D
 
T

tuyetroimuahe_vtn

Câu 8 của nó sai cái gì hở mày,cái này dùng ở hiện tại đơn là đúng rùi mà
 
D

diema3

kothechiuduoc said:
Dear Peter,
1. I / be / very surprised / get / letter
\Rightarrow I was very surprised to get your letter. [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
2. I / not know / you arrive back / London
\Rightarrow I didn’t know you had arrived back into London. => in
3. You have good time / New York ?
\Rightarrow Did you have a good time in New York ? [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
4. I look forward / hear / about it.
\Rightarrow I’m looking forward to hearing about it .
5. Thank you / invite / me / dinner next week
\Rightarrow Thank you for inviting me to dinner next week. [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
6. I / be afraid / not able / come / Sunday.
\Rightarrow I’m afraid I won’t be able to come on Sunday. [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
\Rightarrow won't = shall not
7. But / be / free / following weekend
\Rightarrow But I’ll be free the following weekend. [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
8. Why / you call me / next / days?
\Rightarrow Why don’t you call me the next few days ?
yours,
Mary.
@chị Diễm: thanks chị nhìu lắm :D
Bấm để xem đầy đủ nội dung ...

hi hi không cần khách sáo thía mà :D:D:D
em làm gần đúng roài đó
cố lên nha!
 
R

raspberry

diema3 said:
nếu muốn biết lí do có thể vào trang này xem nha!
http://diendan.hocmai.vn/showthread.php?t=84364
thiệt tình để không làm loãng Box nên tớ phải DEl
I'm sorry !
Bấm để xem đầy đủ nội dung ...

Ta thấy xoá như vậy k đc hay cho lắm, ta vừa tham gia 4rum <mặc dù đăng kí từ năm ngoái> nên ta k biết, mà cũng k ai nhắc nhở là bài đấy đã có rồi, hơn nữa đã có rồi thì bạn Mod j đấy cũng post lại làm j đúng là khó hiểu cho mấy Mod ở đây.
Ta làm mod bên 4rum TA và ta thấy sẽ k có cái vụ loãng Box đến như vậy, vì ta xử lí khá chặt chẽ
 
D

diema3

raspberry said:
Ta thấy xoá như vậy k đc hay cho lắm, ta vừa tham gia 4rum <mặc dù đăng kí từ năm ngoái> nên ta k biết, mà cũng k ai nhắc nhở là bài đấy đã có rồi, hơn nữa đã có rồi thì bạn Mod j đấy cũng post lại làm j đúng là khó hiểu cho mấy Mod ở đây.
Ta làm mod bên 4rum TA và ta thấy sẽ k có cái vụ loãng Box đến như vậy, vì ta xử lí khá chặt chẽ
Bấm để xem đầy đủ nội dung ...

hahahah !
thành thử xin lỗi nha!
có gì giờ mink post bài
mời mọi người tham gia!
:):):):):)
 
D

diema3

Làm típ đi mọi người ơi!
Dear Mr Smith,
1. Thank you/ letter/ offer me/ job.
\Rightarrow
2. I/ be / very glad / you choose / me
\Rightarrow
3. But I / be afraid / be unable accept / offer
\Rightarrow
4. I / take up / similar position / another company soon.
\Rightarrow
5. As / conditions / better there / I / turn / offer.
\Rightarrow
6. Thank you / time / you / give/ my application
\Rightarrow
7. I / be sure / find / suitable applicant / fill / vacancy
Your sincerely,
Charles Brown .
 
Last edited by a moderator:
K

kothechiuduoc

Dear Mr Smith,
1. Thank you/ letter/ offer me/ job.
=> Thank you for your letter to offer me the job
2. I/ be / very glad / you choose / me
=> I'll be very glad if you choose me
3. But I / be afraid / be unable accept / offer
=> But I 'm afraid to be unable accepted that offer
4. I / take up / similar position / another company soon.
=> I am taking up at similar position in another company soon.
5. As / conditions / better there / I / turn / offer.
=>As the conditions are better there, I turn to that offer
6. Thanks you / time / you / give/ my application (thank hổng có s)
=>Thank you for the time you give for my application
7. I / be sure / find / suitable applicant / fill / vacancy
=>I'm sure that you've found a suitable applicant so i filled the vacancy
Your sincerely,
Charles Brown .
khó thế hichic, chắc chẳng đúng đc câu nào chị Diễm ah :(
 
D

diema3

kothechiuduoc said:
Dear Mr Smith,
1. Thank you/ letter/ offer me/ job.
=> Thank you for your letter to offer me the job X
2. I/ be / very glad / you choose / me
=> I'll be very glad if you choose me X
3. But I / be afraid / be unable accept / offer
=> But I 'm afraid to be unable accepted that offer X
4. I / take up / similar position / another company soon.
=> I am taking up at similar position in another company soon. X
5. As / conditions / better there / I / turn / offer.
=>As the conditions are better there, I turn to that offer X
6. Thank you / time / you / give/ my application
=>Thank you for the time you give for my application X
7. I / be sure / find / suitable applicant / fill / vacancy
=>I'm sure that you've found a suitable applicant so i filled the vacancy X
Your sincerely,
Charles Brown .
khó thế hichic, chắc chẳng đúng đc câu nào chị Diễm ah :(
Bấm để xem đầy đủ nội dung ...

sửa lại rùi !
chấm xong bài roài!
kekeke chẳng đúng câu nàp!
thế mí là giỏi!
:):)
 
O

olympuslord

Dear Mr Smith,
1. Thank you/ letter/ offer me/ job.
thank you for the letter which offered me to a job
2. I/ be / very glad / you choose / me
I am very glad that you choosed me
3. But I / be afraid / be unable accept / offer
but I am afraid I won't be unable accept your offer
4. I / take up / similar position / another company soon.
I will take up a similar position in another company soon
5. As / conditions / better there / I / turn / offer.
As the conditions are better there, I have to turn your offer
6. Thank you / time / you / give/ my application
thank you for the time when you gave me me application
7. I / be sure / find / suitable applicant / fill / vacancy
I am sure I can find a suitable applicant to fill all the vacancy
Your sincerely,
Charles Brown .:-SS
 
T

tranthuha93

olympuslord said:
Dear Mr Smith,
1. Thank you/ letter/ offer me/ job.
thank you for the letter which offered me to a job\Rightarrowchỗ này chị nghĩ k có to đâu offer st, offer to V
2. I/ be / very glad / you choose / me
I am very glad that you choosed me\Rightarrowchose ^^
3. But I / be afraid / be unable accept / offer
but I am afraid I won't be unable to accept your offer
4. I / take up / similar position / another company soon.
I will take up a similar position in another company soon
5. As / conditions / better there / I / turn / offer.
As the conditions are better there, I have to turn your offer
6. Thank you / time / you / give/ my application
thank you for the time when you gave me me application
7. I / be sure / find / suitable applicant / fill / vacancy
I am sure I can find a suitable applicant to fill all the vacancy\Rightarrow you ^^ đọc lại từ đâu tới cuối lại đi ^^
Your sincerely,
Charles Brown .:-SS
Bấm để xem đầy đủ nội dung ...

xem lại mấy chỗ đi em nhé :)..............................................
 
A

albee_yu


Dear Mr Smith,
1. Thank you/ letter/ offer me/ job.
\Rightarrow Thank you for the letter offering me a job.
2. I/ be / very glad / you choose / me
\Rightarrow I am very glad that you have chosen me
3. But I / be afraid / be unable accept / offer
\Rightarrow But I am afraid that I am unable to accept the offer
4. I / take up / similar position / another company soon.
\Rightarrow I will be taking up a similar position with another company soon
5. As / conditions / better there / I / turn / offer.
\Rightarrow As the conditions is better there I am turning down your offer
6. Thank you / time / you / give/ my application
\Rightarrow Thank you for the time you gave to my application
7. I / be sure / find / suitable applicant / fill / vacancy
\Rightarrow I am sure you will find a suitable applicant to fill the vacancy.
Your sincerely,
Charles Brown .
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Top Bottom