[T.A] Rewrite

[diema3]

Dear Mr Smith,
1. Thank you/ letter/ offer me/ job.
\Rightarrow Thank you for the letter offering me a job.[TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
2. I/ be / very glad / you choose / me
\Rightarrow I am very glad that you have chosen me [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
3. But I / be afraid / be unable accept / offer
\Rightarrow But I am afraid that I am unable to accept the offer [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
4. I / take up / similar position / another company soon.
\Rightarrow I will be taking up a similar position with another company soon [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
5. As / conditions / better there / I / turn / offer.
\Rightarrow As the conditions is better there I am turning down your offer X
6. Thank you / time / you / give/ my application
\Rightarrow Thank you for the time you gave to my application [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
7. I / be sure / find / suitable applicant / fill / vacancy
\Rightarrow I am sure you will find a suitable applicant to fill the vacancy. [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
Your sincerely,
Charles Brown .

cái này gần đúng roài1
chỉ cần sửa mỗi câu 5 là hoàn chỉnh thui!
=> As pay and conditions are better there I am turning down your offer

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[diema3]

Bài mới! tiếp về viết thư nhé!
Dear Peter,
1. i / feel/ very happy / get / letter / after / such / long time .
\Rightarrow
2. It / be / absolutely ages / since / I hear you.
\Rightarrow
3. You like / come / stay / me / countryside
\Rightarrow
4. You all be / very welcome / want / visit
\Rightarrow
5. What / come / end / next month?
\Rightarrow
6. My wife / miss you / often speak / you
\Rightarrow
7. Don't think / children / love / visit / countryside ?
\Rightarrow
8. Write soon/ let / know / when / you / come

Fondly,
Alan.

 

[tranthuha93]

Dear Peter,
1. i / feel/ very happy / get / letter / after / such / long time .
\RightarrowI felt very happy when I got your letter after such a long time
2. It / be / absolutely ages / since / I hear you.
\RightarrowIt is absolutely ages since I heard you
3. You like / come / stay / me / countryside
\Rightarrow would you like to come and stay with me in the countryside
4. You all be / very welcome / want / visit
\Rightarrowyou will all be very welcome if you want to visit
5. What / come / end / next month?
\Rightarrowwhat about coming at the end of next month?
6. My wife / miss you / often speak / you
\RightarrowMy wife misses you and she often speaks about you
7. Don't think / children / love / visit / countryside ?
\Rightarrowdon't think to ask your children to love visiting my countryside
8. Write soon/ let / know / when / you / come
you write back soon and let me know when you can come
Fondly,
Alan.[/QUOTE]

 

[diema3]

Dear Peter,
1. i / feel/ very happy / get / letter / after / such / long time .
\RightarrowI felt very happy when I got your letter after such a long time
\Rightarrow rút gọn đi! dài dòng nhiều lúc sai đó
2. It / be / absolutely ages / since / I hear you.
\RightarrowIt is absolutely ages since I heard you X
3. You like / come / stay / me / countryside
\Rightarrow would you like to come and stay with me in the countryside [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
4. You all be / very welcome / want / visit
\Rightarrowyou will all be very welcome if you want to visit
\Rightarrow will = are / would ( mang nghĩa trang trọng hơn là will ) + thiếu X
5. What / come / end / next month?
\Rightarrowwhat about coming at the end of next month? [TEX]\bigvee\[/TEX]
6. My wife / miss you / often speak / you
\RightarrowMy wife misses you and she often speaks about you X
7. Don't think / children / love / visit / countryside ?
\Rightarrowdon't think to ask your children to love visiting my countryside X
8. Write soon/ let / know / when / you / come
\Rightarrowyou write back soon and let me know when you can come
\Rightarrow người ta dùng mệnh lệnh bà đi thêm vào làm chi cho mệt ! với lại còn sai nữa!
Fondly,
Alan.

[/QUOTE]

bà coi lại mấy câu đó rùi sửa lại nha! hihi
...........................................................................................

 

[tranthuha93]

4. You all be / very welcome / want / visit
\Rightarrowyou will all be very welcome if you want to visit me
8. Write soon/ let / know / when / you / come
\Rightarrowplease write back soon and let me know when you can come \Rightarrowoke chứ
mấy câu kia k biết sai chỗ nào, bà đưa đ/a lên đi

 

[diema3]

Dear Peter,

2. It / be / absolutely ages / since / I hear you.
\RightarrowIt is absolutely ages since I heard you
\Rightarrow It is absolutely ages since I heard from you ( chú ý giới từ nè)
4. You all be / very welcome / want / visit
\Rightarrowyou will all be very welcome if you want to visit
\Rightarrowyou are / would all be very welcome if you want to visit me
6. My wife / miss you / often speak / you
\RightarrowMy wife misses you and she often speaks about you ( 2 vế đồng chủ ngữghi lại làm gì nữa bà ???)
\Rightarrow My wife misses you both very much and often speaks of / about you .
7. Don't think / children / love / visit / countryside ?
\Rightarrowdon't think to ask your children to love visiting my countryside
\Rightarrow Don't you think your children would love to visit the coủntryside?
8. Write soon/ let / know / when / you / come
you write back soon and let me know when you can come
\Rightarrow Write soon and let me know when you can come. ( chỉ cần thế này thui )
bà cứ làm cho nó to ra hoài ak?
Fondly,
Alan.

[/QUOTE]

đó tôi chỉnh sửa lại cho bà roài!
dạo nì chăm chỉ làm bài thế?
mình vừa nói chuyện vừa làm bài quay lên đã thấy mấy ng làm trước hết roài ! =))=))=))=))=))=))=))

 

[diema3]

Viết thư tiếp đi !

Dear Paul,
1. At last / arrive / Paris / but / terrible trip
\Rightarrow
2. Train / crowed / ferry / delay / two hours
\Rightarrow
3. When / finally set / weather / awful
\Rightarrow
4. i / sick / time / arrive / feel / very week
\Rightarrow
5. I decide / this / last time / I / travel / ferry
\Rightarrow
6. Next time / I / book / seat / plane
\Rightarrow
7. Although / journey / so bad / must say / enjoy / stay / you / London
\Rightarrow
8. Remember / you / stay / me / any time / you / come / Paris
\Rightarrow
9. i / mean / it / when say / hope / that be / soon.
\Rightarrow
Fondest wishes,
Angela.

 

[symptom]

Dear Paul,
1. At last / arrive / Paris / but / terrible trip
\RightarrowAt last I arrived in Paris but it'd been a terrible trip
2. Train / crowed / ferry / delay / two hours
\RightarrowThe train was crowded and the ferry was delayed for 2 hours
3. When / finally set / weather / awful
\RightarrowWhen i was finally set, the weather was awful
4. i / sick / time / arrive / feel / very week
\RightarrowI was sick at the time I arrive and felt very weak
5. I decide / this / last time / I / travel / ferry
\RightarrowI decided this was the last time I'd travelled by ferry
6. Next time / I / book / seat / plane
\RightarrowNext time I will book a seat on the plane
7. Although / journey / so bad / must say / enjoy / stay / you / London
\RightarrowAlthough the journey was so bad, I must say I enjoyed staying with you in London
8. Remember / you / stay / me / any time / you / come / Paris
\RightarrowRemember that you can stay with me any time you come to Paris
9. i / mean / it / when say / hope / that be / soon.
\RightarrowI really mean it when saying I hope that will be soon
Fondest wishes,
Angela.

 

[diema3]

Dear Paul,
1. At last / arrive / Paris / but / terrible trip
\RightarrowAt last I arrived in Paris but it'd been a terrible trip X
2. Train / crowed / ferry / delay / two hours
\RightarrowThe train was crowded and the ferry was delayed for 2 hours V
3. When / finally set / weather / awful
\RightarrowWhen i was finally set, the weather was awful X
4. i / sick / time / arrive / feel / very week
\RightarrowI was sick at the time I arrive and felt very weak V
5. I decide / this / last time / I / travel / ferry
\RightarrowI decided this was the last time I'd travelled by ferry X
6. Next time / I / book / seat / plane
\RightarrowNext time I will book a seat on the plane V
7. Although / journey / so bad / must say / enjoy / stay / you / London
\RightarrowAlthough the journey was so bad, I must say I enjoyed staying with you in London V
8. Remember / you / stay / me / any time / you / come / Paris
\RightarrowRemember that you can stay with me any time you come to Paris V
9. i / mean / it / when say / hope / that be / soon.
\RightarrowI really mean it when saying I hope that will be soon V
Fondest wishes,
Angela.

đời này lắm nhân tài thiệt!
......................................không biết bao giờ ịch sử sẽ ghi danh ta! =))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))

 

[diema3]

Đáp án !
Dear Paul,
1. At last / arrive / Paris / but / terrible trip
\RightarrowAt last I have arrived in Paris but it was a terrible trip
2. Train / crowed / ferry / delay / two hours
\RightarrowThe train was crowded and the ferry was delayed for 2 hours
3. When / finally set / weather / awful
\RightarrowWhen i finally set off the weather was awful
4. i / sick / time / arrive / feel / very sick
\RightarrowI was sick all the time I arrived feeling very sick
5. I decide / this / last time / I / travel / ferry
\RightarrowI have decided this is the last time I will travel by ferry
6. Next time / I / book / seat / plane
\RightarrowNext time I will book a seat on the plane
7. Although / journey / so bad / must say / enjoy / stay / you / London
\RightarrowAlthough the journey was so bad, I must say I enjoyed my stay with you in London
8. Remember / you / stay / me / any time / you / come / Paris
\RightarrowRemember that you can stay with me any time you come to Paris
9. i / mean / it / when say / hope / that be / soon.
\RightarrowI really mean it when saying / I say I hope that will be soon
Fondest wishes,
Angela.

 

[diema3]

Bài tiếp theo nè!
Dear Hamish,
1. I/ sorry / not / write / so / long .
\Rightarrow
2. I / work / very hard / school .
\Rightarrow
3. My course / finish / two weeks' time, / I / go / Scotland
\Rightarrow
4.If / enough / money / go / Ireland / well
\Rightarrow
5. I think / best / way / practise / English .
\Rightarrow
6. be/ possible / stay / you / couple / nights ?
\Rightarrow
7. i / promise / be/ nuisance
\Rightarrow
8. I / even / some cooking .
\Rightarrow
Love ,
Franz.

 

[symptom]

Dear Hamish,
1. I/ sorry / not / write / so / long .
\RightarrowI'm sorry for not having written you for so long
2. I / work / very hard / school .
\RightarrowI've worked very hard at school
3. My course / finish / two weeks' time, / I / go / Scotland
\RightarrowMy course will finish in 2 weeks' time, then I'll go to Scotland
4.If / enough / money / go / Ireland / well
\RightarrowIf I had enough money, I would go to Irelan as well
5. I think / best / way / practise / English .
\RightarrowI think it's the best way to practise my E
6. be/ possible / stay / you / couple / nights ?
\RightarrowIs it possible for me to stay with you a couple of nights ?
7. i / promise / be/ nuisance
\RightarrowI promise I won't be a nuísance.
8. I / even / some cooking .
\RightarrowI can even do some cooking.
Love ,
Franz.

 

[diema3]

Dear Hamish,
1. I/ sorry / not / write / so / long .
\RightarrowI'm sorry for not having written you for so long V
2. I / work / very hard / school .
\RightarrowI've worked very hard at school X
3. My course / finish / two weeks' time, / I / go / Scotland
\RightarrowMy course will finish in 2 weeks' time, then I'll go to Scotland X
4.If / enough / money / go / Ireland / well
\RightarrowIf I had enough money, I would go to Irelan as well X
5. I think / best / way / practise / English .
\RightarrowI think it's the best way to practise my E V
6. be/ possible / stay / you / couple / nights ?
\RightarrowIs it possible for me to stay with you a couple of nights ? X
7. i / promise / be/ nuisance
\RightarrowI promise I won't be a nuísance. V
8. I / even / some cooking .
\RightarrowI can even do some cooking. V
Love ,
Franz.

ặc ặc ! chỉ sai về mấy cái thì vớ vẩn thui ! c coi sửa lại nha!

 

[diema3]

Đáp án!
Dear Hamish,
1. I/ sorry / not / write / so / long .
\RightarrowI'm sorry for not having written you for so long
2. I / work / very hard / school .
\RightarrowI've been working very hard at school
3. My course / finish / two weeks' time, / I / go / Scotland
\RightarrowMy course finishes in 2 weeks' time, then I am going to go to Scotland ( có trong dự định rùi nha)
4.If / enough / money / go / Ireland / well
\RightarrowIf I have enough money, I will go to Ireland as well. ( có thể xảy ra ở hiện tại mà???)
5. I think / best / way / practise / English .
\RightarrowI think it's the best way to practise my E
6. be/ possible / stay / you / couple / nights ?
\RightarrowIs it possible for me to stay with you for a couple of nights ?
7. i / promise / be/ nuisance
\RightarrowI promise I won't be a nuísance.
8. I / even / some cooking .
\RightarrowI can even do some cooking. ( for you )
Love ,
Franz.

 

[diema3]

Hôm nay đổi hướng không viết thư nữa! Chúng ta chuyển sang viết lại câu dùng từ cho sẵn nha!

1. " You've broken my radio " said Jane . ( accused)
\Rightarrow
2. My car really needs to be repaired soon ( must )
\Rightarrow
3. There is no point in asking Jane to help ( worth )
\Rightarrow
4.[FONT=&quot][FONT=&quot] [/FONT][FONT=&quot]She’ll probably pass the high school entrance examination. (STANDS)
\Rightarrow
5. [/FONT][FONT=&quot][FONT=&quot][/FONT][/FONT][FONT=&quot]She was afraid to scream because she didn’t want to wake up the neighbors. (FEAR)
\Rightarrow
[/FONT][/FONT] [FONT=&quot]6.[FONT=&quot] [/FONT][FONT=&quot]There have been fewer people who consume Chinese products. (DECREASE)
[/FONT][/FONT]
\Rightarrow

[FONT=&quot]7.[FONT=&quot] [/FONT][FONT=&quot]They brought me two laptops, but neither worked satisfactorily. (WHICH)
[/FONT][/FONT]
\Rightarrow

8. [FONT=&quot] Although Richard is competent in his work, he does not know how to deal with this client. ( Competent as )[/FONT]
\Rightarrow

9 . [FONT=&quot] I could hold a big party due to my Mom’s help.( Had )[/FONT]
\Rightarrow

10.[FONT=&quot] Jane seems to come to the performance late ( look )
[/FONT]
\Rightarrow



Oh ! thật đơn giản ! bạn hãy tham gia đi nào!

 

[olympuslord]

1. " You've broken my radio " said Jane . ( accused)
Jane accused me of had broken her radio
2. My car really needs to be repaired soon ( must )
My car must be repaired soon

kiểu này thích làm mấy câu thì làm.đỡ khó xử kakakaka ( ối) nam mô.......

 

[symptom]

1. " You've broken my radio " said Jane . ( accused)
\RightarrowJane accused me of having broken her radio
2. My car really needs to be repaired soon ( must )
\RightarrowMy car must be repaired soon
3. There is no point in asking Jane to help ( worth )
\RightarrowIt's not worth asking Jane to help
4.[FONT=&quot]She’ll probably pass the high school entrance examination. (STANDS)
\RightarrowShe stands a good chance of passing [/FONT][FONT=&quot]the high school entrance examination[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot] 5. [FONT=&quot]She was afraid to scream because she didn’t want to wake up the neighbors. (FEAR)
\RightarrowShe feared to [/FONT][/FONT][FONT=&quot]scream because she didn’t want to wake up the neighbors[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]6.[FONT=&quot]There have been fewer people who consume Chinese products. (DECREASE)
[/FONT][/FONT]
\RightarrowThe number of people who consume Chinese products has decreased

[FONT=&quot]7.[FONT=&quot]They brought me two laptops, but neither worked satisfactorily. (WHICH)
[/FONT][/FONT]
\Rightarrow[FONT=&quot]They brought me two laptops, neither of which [/FONT][FONT=&quot]worked satisfactorily[/FONT]

8. Although Richard is competent in his work, he does not know how to deal with this client. ( Competent as )
\RightarrowCompetent as he is, Richard does not know how to deal with this client

9 . I could hold a big party due to my Mom’s help.( Had )
\RightarrowHad it not been for my Mom's help, I couldn't have held a big party

10.Jane seems to come to the performance late ( look )

\RightarrowIt looks like Jane will come to the performance late
Jane looks like coming to the performance late

Oh ! thật đơn giản ! bạn hãy tham gia đi nào!

)

 

[diema3]

[FONT=&quot]5. [FONT=&quot]She was afraid to scream because she didn’t want to wake up the neighbors. (FEAR)
\RightarrowShe feared to [/FONT][/FONT][FONT=&quot]scream because she didn’t want to wake up the neighbors[/FONT]

=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=)) tôi cho cười lun ! câu này làm sai rùi!

[FONT=&quot]6.[FONT=&quot]There have been fewer people who consume Chinese products. (DECREASE)
[/FONT][/FONT]
\RightarrowThe number of people who consume Chinese products has decreased

tôi cho decrease có d đâu hok được biến đổi cấu tạo nha!

10.Jane seems to come to the performance late ( look )

\RightarrowIt looks like Jane will come to the performance late
Jane looks like coming to the performance late

chưa đúng nè!

 

[symptom]

[FONT=&quot]5. [FONT=&quot]She was afraid to scream because she didn’t want to wake up the neighbors. (FEAR)
\RightarrowShe feared to [/FONT][/FONT][FONT=&quot]scream because she didn’t want to wake up the neighbors[/FONT] =))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=))=)) tôi cho cười lun ! câu này làm sai rùi!

Khó tính thế )
She didn't scream for fear of waking up the neighbors

[FONT=&quot]6.[FONT=&quot]There have been fewer people who consume Chinese products. (DECREASE)
[/FONT][/FONT]
\RightarrowThe number of people who consume Chinese products has decreased

tôi cho decrease có d đâu hok được biến đổi cấu tạo nha!

>"<
There has been a decrease in the number of people consuming Chinese products

chưa đúng nè!

Cái này thì chịu rồi, nhờ c chỉ giáo )



[FONT=&quot][/FONT]

 

[diema3]

Khó tính thế )

=> dễ tính thế mà bảo khó ! )))

She didn't scream for fear of waking up the neighbors

=> She was afraid to scream for fear of waking up the neighbors

10.Jane seems to come to the performance late ( look )

=> It looks as if Jane will come to the performance late