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When learning at school, there are varieties of subjects, however, i still like English the most. There are 4 main reasons why I like English. Firstly, learning English helps me a lot in my daily life. I become more confident when talking to foreigners. I can read English articles, documents, write a letter to my friend in English or watch English video without subtitles. Secondly, there are many popular jobs that require an English degree today, therefore, knowing English is an advantage so that you can have more job opportunities. Thirdly, I can gain more knowledge of culture and tradition of English countries. It will be nice if you know about cultures of your friends’ countries, won't it? Finally, English always intrigues me and makes me want to explore it as an archaeologist mines fossils. It gives me a sense of excitement and newness. In conclusion, with a great many benefits of English, it's necessary for everyone to learn English
 
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Mn xem hộ mình có j cần chỉnh sửa về diễn đạt ko ạ.
Write a paragraph about your favorite subject


When learning at school, there are varieties of subjects, however, i still like English the most. There are 4 main reasons why I like English. Firstly, learning English helps me a lot in my daily life. I become more confident when talking to foreigners. I can read English articles, documents, write a letter to my friend in English or watch English video without subtitles. Secondly, there are many popular jobs that require an English degree today, therefore, knowing English is an advantage so that you can have more job opportunities. Thirdly, I can gain more knowledge of culture and tradition of English countries. It will be nice if you know about cultures of your friends’ countries, won't it? Finally, English always intrigues me and makes me want to explore it as an archaeologist mines fossils. It gives me a sense of excitement and newness. In conclusion, with a great many benefits of English, it's necessary for everyone to learn English
Em thấy ngữ pháp, từ vựng khá ổn, nhưng có một số lỗi và em đã chỉnh sửa, anh chị tham khảo ạ:
When learning at school, there are varieties of subjects, however, I still like English the most. There are 4 main reasons why I like English. Firstly, learning English helps me a lot in my daily life. I become more confident when talking to foreigners. I can read English articles, documents, write a letter to my friend in English or watch English videos without subtitles. Secondly, many popular jobs require an English degree today, therefore, knowing English is an advantage so that you can have more job opportunities. Thirdly, I can gain more knowledge of the culture and tradition of English countries. It will be nice if you know about the cultures of your friends’ countries, won't you? Finally, English always intrigues me and makes me want to explore it as an archaeologist mines fossils. It gives me a sense of excitement and newness. In conclusion, with a great many benefits of English, everyone must learn English
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When learning at school, there are varieties of subjects, however, I still like English the most. There are 4 main reasons why I like English. Firstly, learning English helps me a lot in my daily life. I become more confident when talking to foreigners. I can read English articles, documents as well as writing letters to my friend in English. Also, I can watch English videos without subtitles. Secondly, In this day and age, almost every well-paid job requires a command of the English language. Consequently, The more I know about English, the more job opportunities I can take. Thirdly, I can gain more knowledge of the culture and tradition of English countries. It will be nice if you know about the cultures of your friends’ countries, won't it? Finally, English always intrigues me and makes me want to explore it as an archaeologist mines (for) fossils. It gives me a sense of excitement and newness (mới theo kiểu không biết gì, mình nghĩ bạn nên đổi từ khác cho phù hợp). In conclusion, with a great many benefits of English, it's necessary for everyone to learn English
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