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Since the advent of the internet, some people claim that people's life has changed so much in many aspects both in good and bad ways. In my opinion, I completely advocate this statement. First of all, we have to admit that the internet has a profound effect on the way we communicate. It has made communication easier and faster year by year thank to the rapid development of technology. Through social media such as Facebook or Twitter, we can keep in touch with our family, friends, colleagues,etc and update the news every day wherever we are. However, the dark side of this is that nowadays our personal information is prone to be released, which is really irritating and sometimes, dangerous. Besides, cyberbullying, which means bullying with the use of digital technologies, has become a severe issue ending up in a lot of painful consequences like depression, suicide and growth in crime rate. Secondly, It is essential for our jobs and education as the internet has become the largest source of information, which we can find almost everything just with one click. The problem is that a wealth of information, on the other hand, makes it difficult to figure out whether it is trustworthy or not. Last but not least, it can not be denied that along with the development of the internet, we can experience more interesting kinds of entertainment like online games, e-books, movies, etc even from home. Moreover, those ones also create more new jobs that help us earn money on our hobbies like game players, game streamers, audio-book narrators. In contrast, it also leads to some social problems like game addiction, being afraid of real world, loss of soft skills, which especially often happen in adolescence. As a consequence, a part of the young generation will suffer from lots of difficulties at school as well as workplace. To sum up, that is right that people's life has been changed a lot by the internet but whether it do good or harm to us, it is up to you.
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