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Mình thấy có mở và kết rồi màđề hay hơn mình nghĩ bạn nên có câu mở và kết cho bài
Mình thấy có mở và kết rồi màđề hay hơn mình nghĩ bạn nên có câu mở và kết cho bài
Thì có rồi mà...câu mở là câu đầu tiên, còn câu kết là câu cuối cùng á!đề hay hơn mình nghĩ bạn nên có câu mở và kết cho bài
Lộn xộn thế nào thế? Bạn nói rõ ra được ko?Hình như bạn chỉ copy vài đoạn từ bài của bọn mình thôi mà. Lộn xộn quá không nhỉ. Nhưng thôi kệ. Mình đọc sơ thì không có lỗi rồi đấy
Oh, nói thật thì mấy cái cách giải quyết bạn đưa ra chưa đầy đủ nhể. Còn cái con đường thì sao, đưa thêm cái hướng xử lí mấy cái con đường xấu cho nó đầy đủ hơn điLộn xộn thế nào thế? Bạn nói rõ ra được ko?
In my hometown now there are some traffic problems that I dislike. Firstly, there are too many people using the roads in the rush hour when people get out to work and go to school or get home from those places. Secondly, there are too many types of vehicles as motorbike, bicycle, car,...etc on the road. But the road are very narrow and bumpy, it's very dangerous for everyone, especially in the rainy season, the roads are easily flooded and become slippery after the rain.So we should repair and open more roads. Finally, a lot of young people ride their bike dangerously. They drag and push other road user, so they are easy to make accident happens. In short, in order to travel on the roads more safely, I think we should obey the traffic rules and traffic signs as well. Moreover, carefulness is very necessary.Oh, nói thật thì mấy cái cách giải quyết bạn đưa ra chưa đầy đủ nhể. Còn cái con đường thì sao, đưa thêm cái hướng xử lí mấy cái con đường xấu cho nó đầy đủ hơn đi
bỏ cái and open moreIn my hometown now there are some traffic problems that I dislike. Firstly, there are too many people using the roads in the rush hour when people get out to work and go to school or get home from those places. Secondly, there are too many types of vehicles as motorbike, bicycle, car,...etc on the road. But the road are very narrow and bumpy, so it's very dangerous for everyone, especially in the rainy season, the roads are easily flooded and become slippery after the rain. We should repair and open more roads. Finally, a lot of young people ride their bike dangerously. They drag and push other road user, so they are easy to make accident happens. In short, in order to travel on the roads more safely, I think we should obey the traffic rules and traffic signs as well. Moreover, carefulness is very necessary.
Thế được chưa?
In my hometown now there are some traffic problems that I dislike. Firstly, there are too many people using the roads in the rush hour when people get out to work and go to school or get home from those places. Secondly, there are too many types of vehicles as motorbike, bicycle, car,...etc on the road. But the road are very narrow and bumpy, it's very dangerous for everyone, especially in the rainy season, the roads are easily flooded and become slippery after the rain.So we should repair and open more roads. Finally, a lot of young people ride their bike dangerously. They drag and push other road user, so they are easy to make accident happens. In short, in order to travel on the roads more safely, I think we should obey the traffic rules and traffic signs as well. Moreover, carefulness is very necessary.
Thế được chưa?
sửa open more roads thành wider roadsbỏ cái and open more
Write a paragraph about the traffic problems where you live.
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