Skills 2

[Nguyễn Như Tuyết]

đề hay hơn mình nghĩ bạn nên có câu mở và kết cho bài

Mình thấy có mở và kết rồi mà

 

[Nghinh Duyên]

đề hay hơn mình nghĩ bạn nên có câu mở và kết cho bài

Thì có rồi mà...câu mở là câu đầu tiên, còn câu kết là câu cuối cùng á!

Hình như bạn chỉ copy vài đoạn từ bài của bọn mình thôi mà. Lộn xộn quá không nhỉ. Nhưng thôi kệ. Mình đọc sơ thì không có lỗi rồi đấy

Lộn xộn thế nào thế? Bạn nói rõ ra được ko?

 

[Nguyễn Như Tuyết]

Lộn xộn thế nào thế? Bạn nói rõ ra được ko?

Oh, nói thật thì mấy cái cách giải quyết bạn đưa ra chưa đầy đủ nhể. Còn cái con đường thì sao, đưa thêm cái hướng xử lí mấy cái con đường xấu cho nó đầy đủ hơn đi

 

[Nghinh Duyên]

Oh, nói thật thì mấy cái cách giải quyết bạn đưa ra chưa đầy đủ nhể. Còn cái con đường thì sao, đưa thêm cái hướng xử lí mấy cái con đường xấu cho nó đầy đủ hơn đi

In my hometown now there are some traffic problems that I dislike. Firstly, there are too many people using the roads in the rush hour when people get out to work and go to school or get home from those places. Secondly, there are too many types of vehicles as motorbike, bicycle, car,...etc on the road. But the road are very narrow and bumpy, it's very dangerous for everyone, especially in the rainy season, the roads are easily flooded and become slippery after the rain.So we should repair and open more roads. Finally, a lot of young people ride their bike dangerously. They drag and push other road user, so they are easy to make accident happens. In short, in order to travel on the roads more safely, I think we should obey the traffic rules and traffic signs as well. Moreover, carefulness is very necessary.

Thế được chưa?

 

[Nguyễn Như Tuyết]

In my hometown now there are some traffic problems that I dislike. Firstly, there are too many people using the roads in the rush hour when people get out to work and go to school or get home from those places. Secondly, there are too many types of vehicles as motorbike, bicycle, car,...etc on the road. But the road are very narrow and bumpy, so it's very dangerous for everyone, especially in the rainy season, the roads are easily flooded and become slippery after the rain. We should repair and open more roads. Finally, a lot of young people ride their bike dangerously. They drag and push other road user, so they are easy to make accident happens. In short, in order to travel on the roads more safely, I think we should obey the traffic rules and traffic signs as well. Moreover, carefulness is very necessary.

Thế được chưa?

bỏ cái and open more

 

[minhthu2k5]

In my hometown now there are some traffic problems that I dislike. Firstly, there are too many people using the roads in the rush hour when people get out to work and go to school or get home from those places. Secondly, there are too many types of vehicles as motorbike, bicycle, car,...etc on the road. But the road are very narrow and bumpy, it's very dangerous for everyone, especially in the rainy season, the roads are easily flooded and become slippery after the rain.So we should repair and open more roads. Finally, a lot of young people ride their bike dangerously. They drag and push other road user, so they are easy to make accident happens. In short, in order to travel on the roads more safely, I think we should obey the traffic rules and traffic signs as well. Moreover, carefulness is very necessary.

Thế được chưa?

bỏ cái and open more

sửa open more roads thành wider roads

 

[th.tanlap.pgdsonghinh@phuyen.edu.vn]

Write a paragraph about the traffic problems where you live.

P/s: Giúp mik với!

Nowaday, traffic problem is the biggest problem that many people care about. In VN, I think the city where have the worst traffic is Ha noi.
The first problem is the traffic jam here. Why? In the rush hours of the day, there're too many people using the road. Last year, in 2013, many bridges was built so it happen less but in order to stop this, a kind of small car should be invented, people should go to works by buses instead of going by motorbikes...
The second one, as you know, the roads in VN is not as big and clean as the roads in the big countries. They're narrow, bumpy and some dirty so it’s really hard for the road users to drive safely. I think we should raise money to make the road in VN better and better.
But everyone knows that Vietnamese people are not respect and don’t follow the traffic rules. That’s the biggest reason for everything. They wear the helmet that not strong enough to keep they safe if the accident may happen, they ride too fast on the small roads… The traffic will never can be improve if they keep doing this.
At the end, I hope the traffic in VN will improve more.