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wolf95

Tớ xin lỗi vì post bài muộn quá, nhưng do là tớ bỏ bài kể về trip để thay bằng một bài văn nói về Memory thật sự nên giờ mới post đựơc lên cho mọi người. Sorry nhé! :) Còn bài dưới là tớ gởi thêm cho mọi người chữa giúp và tham khảo luôn nèh ^^
MY MEMORY
Whenever taking about memory, everyone has own diffirent feelings. Because, maybe, it’s a wonderful or a terrible memory… However, in reallity, our life is only meaningful when it’s full of memories because memory is connection the past with the present. Time is time, time lost, never found. So, you should keep your memories in your mind and enjoy them. Then, these memories engrave into your mind, little by little, memories become a indispensable part in our life…And I'm not an exception so I always keep my sweet memories in my mind .

Many of memories were with my family and my friends. These are moments that make me feel stronger and warmer . My family and my friends gave me their hands and helped me stand up when I fell down and felt nothing was true. There is a saying that “sorrow shared sorrow halved, happiness shared happiness doubled” and my friends are who stand by me to share sorrow and happiness make a lot of endless moments. These moments are when …my friends listen and understand what I mean…when they give their hands when I need a help…when they give me many useful advices….and get me through the storms… unconditionally. Beside my memories with my friends are many memories with my cherished family. These memories are when I was protected and defended from the waves of life. My family always make me feel peaceful in my sould. These endless moments make me love my life more and never fade from my mind…

Suddenly I found that knowing how to respect each moment happening in our daily life, will make our life more wonderful just because We live to love and to be loved…

MY IDEA ABOUT HAPPINESS
All of us dream to have a happy life. However, no one can answer exactly how is the feeling of happy? Happiness? What does it mean?

There is a saying that:”Contentment is the philosopher’s stone, which turn all it touched into gold; the poor man is rich with it, the rich man poor without it”. So happiness only comes to the person who knows how to be satisfied with his life. As for me, I think that happiness is not in having or being—it is in the doing. For me it’s living everyday without regret .Knowing you lived life the best way you can and cherished memories. My idea Happiness is feeling complete like nothing in the world can go wrong. Just feeling whole. All seasons are beautiful for the person who carries happiness within.

When we feel love and kindness toward others, it not only makes others feel loved and cared for, but it helps us also to develop inner happiness and peace. And I have just realized that to be able to find joy in another’s joy; that is the secret of happiness.
cám ơn honey nhiều nhưng tuần này bọn tớ bận quá sẽ sửa bài bận sau. Tranh thủ tớ sẽ post bài tớ cho chủ đề tuần này là viết về 1 bộ phim( có thể là phim hoạt hình, phim hài...) mà bạn thick.
I have ever watch a lot of flim and all of them are anime and cartoon. But my best anime is Inuyasha which is writen by Rumiko Takahashi. That anime talk about a half demon-dog is hated by all human and demon. This demon always try to be alive and become a best strong demon in the world not to be despised to be a half demon. This demon name is Inuyasha which mean demon-dog in English. Inuyasha's heart is very cold and he hate human because human is very weak. One day, He met Kikyou a young woman mage who is single human can see Four Soul Jade ( Ngọc tứ Hồn). Four Soul Jade is a magic jade can give man who hold it in hand the best strenght in whole world. So All of human and demon want to have it very much to have the best strenght and become the best strong one. Kikyou have it and hold it clean never to be dirty. Because of her kindness with Inuyasha, so He fall in love with her. And she did , too. But There is a cruel demon who loved Kikyou, too made Inuyasha and Kikyou misunderstanded and feuded each other because of Four Soul Jade . She bind Inuyasha to old tree and then cremated herself with Four Soul Jade and died to inuyasha. Then next 500 years, Kagome- a girl fall off to a well near her house and meet Inuyasha bound in old tree. And a demon run to kill her to hold a jade whose she was gave in her fifteenth birthday.
Then because it is so dangerous that she break down Kikyou's blinding for Inuyasha. Inuyasha killed this demon but in the last he tried rob Kagome's jade because this jade í Four Soul Jade. But he couldn't. Kaeze who is Kikyou's younger sister told that Kagome is The last hereafter's Kikyou who is single can see this jade. Then Kagome's jake was stolen by another demon and when she tried to give it back, she made Four Soul Jade break down many debris. Becau all human and demon want it, so Kagome and Inuyasha ought to go to try to find and collect them. Next, story happened very much and all Inuyasha and Kagome met many friends. It is important that Inuyasha learn many lesson and become kind demon, and Inuyasha and Kagome loved each other^^
 
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wolf95

I try checking in it!

MY MEMORY
Whenever taking about memory, everyone has own diffirent feelings. Because, maybe, it’s a wonderful or a terrible memory… However, in reallity, our life is only meaningful when it’s full of memories and because memory is also connection the past with the present. Time is time, time lost, never found. So, you should keep your memories in your mind and enjoy them. Then, these memories engrave into your mind, little by little, memories become a indispensable part in our life…And I'm not an exception so I always keep my sweet memories and sad memories in my mind . Althought sad memories can make me uncomfortable or unhappy but it is the lessons of past helping me to grow up more and succeed in my life road.
Many of memories were with my family and my friends. These are moments that make me feel stronger and warmer . My family and my friends gave me their hands and helped me stand up when I fell down and felt nothing was true. There is a saying that “sorrow shared sorrow halved, happiness shared happiness doubled” and my friends are who stand by me to share sorrow and happiness make a lot of endless moments. These moments are when …my friends listen and understand what I mean…when they give their hands when I need to help…when they give me many useful advices….and get me through the storms… unconditionally. Beside my memories with my friends are many memories with my cherished family. These memories are when I was protected and defended from the waves of life. My family always make me feel peaceful in my sould. These endless moments make me love my life more and never fade from my mind…

Suddenly I found that knowing how to respect each moment happening in our daily life, will make our life more wonderful just because We live to love and to be loved…

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tớ xin lỗi tớ mới sửa đoạn một thôi hì vì tuần này bận quá tớ sẽ sớm sửa tiếp. chữ đỏ là cậu viết đấy hì còn chữ hồng là tớ ko hiểu hcỗ đó lắm tớ tra ko có, chỗ " in reallity" tớ nghĩ là thay bằng " for real" thì hơn í cậu là "thực sự" chứ gì? còn chữ tím tớ thêm vào đấy tớ thấy thêm và sửa chút vào mong cậu ko giận. còn cậu chữ xanh tớ ko chắc đó viết đúng hay ko nhưng tớ hiểu là cậu muốn nói là: " thời gian trôi nhanh, đã đánh mất rồi sẽ ko bao giờ quay lại đc. đúng ko? cậu giúp giải thick nhé?
 
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o0honeybaby0o

tớ xin lỗi tớ mới sửa đoạn một thôi hì vì tuần này bận quá tớ sẽ sớm sửa tiếp. chữ đỏ là cậu viết đấy hì còn chữ hồng là tớ ko hiểu hcỗ đó lắm tớ tra ko có, chỗ " in reallity" tớ nghĩ là thay bằng " for real" thì hơn í cậu là "thực sự" chứ gì? còn chữ tím tớ thêm vào đấy tớ thấy thêm và sửa chút vào mong cậu ko giận. còn cậu chữ xanh tớ ko chắc đó viết đúng hay ko nhưng tớ hiểu là cậu muốn nói là: " thời gian trôi nhanh, đã đánh mất rồi sẽ ko bao giờ quay lại đc. đúng ko? cậu giúp giải thick nhé?

Những chỗ cậu sửa tớ nhận, ^^
Time is time, time lost never found: là thành ngữ rùi. "Thời gian qua đi thì không bao giờ trở lại", không sai, tớ chắc chắn :D
in reality: là trong thực tế, ý tớ khôg phải là thực sự ^^
fade from my mind: là phai mờ trong kí ức tôi :D
Àh mà wên, câu cậu thêm vào dài quá nên tớ cũng không chắc lắm về mặt ngữ pháp có sai sót gì không, nhưng cảm ơn cậu nhìu, tớ tiếp thu :)
Vậy nhé! ;) Cậu thấy vừa ý với cách giải thích của tớ chưa?
Còn bài dưới, tiếp tục luôn đê :D
 
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wolf95

Những chỗ cậu sửa tớ nhận, ^^
Time is time, time lost never found: là thành ngữ rùi. "Thời gian qua đi thì không bao giờ trở lại", không sai, tớ chắc chắn :D
in reality: là trong thực tế, ý tớ khôg phải là thực sự ^^
fade from my mind: là phai mờ trong kí ức tôi :D
Àh mà wên, câu cậu thêm vào dài quá nên tớ cũng không chắc lắm về mặt ngữ pháp có sai sót gì không, nhưng cảm ơn cậu nhìu, tớ tiếp thu :)
Vậy nhé! ;) Cậu thấy vừa ý với cách giải thích của tớ chưa?
Còn bài dưới, tiếp tục luôn đê :D
chà có cả thành ngữ à hay quá! tớ ko biết về thành ngữ nhiều cậu có thể gửi cho tớ đc ko. còn chỗ reality mới đàu cậu viết 2 chữ l nên tớ tra mãi ko ra nhưng giờ hiểu rồi. bài dưới tớ sẽ cố cám ưon cậu hehe
 
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winter_angel

I love Harry Potter.
That is a great film and I think khoc_cry agree. ^^
It's so attractive. It's right?
But book is better than film. I could imagine everything when I read a book. I love friendship in the Harry Potter. It make me smile and cry. Really, friendship between Harry, Ron and Hermione is very interesting.
So I wish I could have a friendship same as.
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everybody! my english is very poor. So I want to learn by one's mistakes
Let fix my mistakes. Thanks!
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honeybaby!
"Time is time, time lost never found". I like this sentences.
Thank you!
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And wolf...
Next week, I want to write about friendship. OK?
 
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o0honeybaby0o

MY IDEA ABOUT HAPPINESS
All of us dream to have a happy life. However, no one can answer exactly how is the feeling of happy? Happiness? What does it mean?

Tất cả chúng ta đều mơ ứơc có một cuộc sống hạnh phúc. Tuy nhiên, không ai có thể trả lời một cách chính xác cảm giác hạnh phúc là thế nào? Hạnh phúc? Nó có nghĩa là gì?

There is a saying that:”Contentment is the philosopher’s stone, which turn all it touched into gold; the poor man is rich with it, the rich man poor without it”. So happiness only comes to the person who knows how to be satisfied with his life. As for me, I think that happiness is not in having or being—it is in the doing. For me it’s living everyday without regret .Knowing you lived life the best way you can and cherished memories. My idea Happiness is feeling complete like nothing in the world can go wrong. Just feeling whole. All seasons are beautiful for the person who carries happiness within.

Có một câu nói rằng: "sự hài lòng là một hòn đá tạo vàng* (Theo truyền thuyết về một ông vua nào đó của HyLạp mà tớ hok nhớ tên, cứ chạm vào cái gì là cái đó hóa vàng), cái mà có thể biến tất cả những gì nó chạm vào thành vàng; ngừơi nghèo trở nên giàu có với nó, người giàu trở nên nghèo nếu thiếu nó". Cho nên hạnh phúc chỉ đến với ngừơi nào biết cách tự hài lòng với cuộc sống của mình. Đối với tôi, tôi nghĩ rằng hạnh phúc không phải ở sự sở hữu hay là sự tồn tại- mà nó ở sự hành động (Câu này tớ hiểu rõ 100% mà chả biết nói sao cho cậu hiểu nữa!). Với tôi, nó tồn tại hàng ngày cạnh tôi với điều kiện là không có sự hối tiếc. Biết cách sống hết mình mà bạn có thể và giữ lại những kí ức ngọt ngào. Ý kiến của tôi về hạnh phúc chính là hãy tận hửơng những gì có xung quanh mình như là không có gì trên thế giới là sai cả. Hãy tận hửơng tất cả. Tất cả khỏang thời gian bạn có sẽ trở nên tưoi đẹp với những ngừơi luôn mang hạnh phúc bên mình.

When we feel love and kindness toward others, it not only makes others feel loved and cared for, but it helps us also to develop inner happiness and peace. And I have just realized that to be able to find joy in another’s joy; that is the secret of happiness.

Khi chúng ta cảm nhận đựơc tình yêu và lòng tốt qua những ngừơi xung quanh, nó không chỉ làm cho mọi ngừơi xung quanh cảm nhận đựơc tình yêu và đựơc quan tâm, mà nó còn giúp chúng ta có thêm sự hạnh phúc và bình yên trong tâm hồn. Và tôi chợt nhận ra rằng có thể tìm thấy niềm vui từ niềm vui của ngừơi khác, chính là bí mật của hạnh phúc.

Sorry! Sorry! Vì lâu quá mới dịch cho cậu, dạo nỳ tớ bận! ^^
 
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wolf95

I love Harry Potter.
That is a great film and I think khoc_cry agree. ^^
It's so attractive. It's right?
But book is better than film. I could imagine everything when I read a book. I love friendship in the Harry Potter. It make me smile and cry. Really, friendship between Harry, Ron and Hermione is very interesting.
So I wish I could have a friendship same as.
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everybody! my english is very poor. So I want to learn by one's mistakes
Let fix my mistakes. Thanks!
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honeybaby!
"Time is time, time lost never found". I like this sentences.
Thank you!
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And wolf...
Next week, I want to write about friendship. OK?
Thanks so much, winter angle ^^ ! Your paragraph is very meaningful, i really like it ( I have two friends- they are a fan liking Harry so much hehe). And your opinion is great. TOPIC NEXT WEEK: YOUR FRIENDSHIP or YOUR BEST FRIEND ( Tình bạn hạy người bạn thân nhất, cái anỳ có thể về một mẩu chuyện về tình bạn cũng được..) các cậu cứ khai thác hết khía cạnh của cái chủ đề này nhé vì nó rất rộng
And sorry winter angle for your waiting for my answering. And could we become friend? :D AH My knowledge of E is poor, too so please help me so much.
 
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wolf95

hihi

I don't have enough time! But I promise that I will write your topic whenever I'm free! :x
Thanks my honey! This is my paragraph's topic this week:
Probably your best friend is usually one of your classmates or your neighbors. But my best friend is not like that. My best friend is really my sister.
Her name is Minh Hang - a beautiful meanly name of Moon. She is older than me 7 years old. But I am taller than her ( so everyone always confuse that i am older siser and she is younger sister ;)) ). Although she is short, she is very pretty, gracious and gentle. Spacially, her smile is so beautiful that people can like her at the first sight. What self-confident smile! Because of being older than me, now she is studying at an university in Ha Noi. But the long-distance can't make a preventing-wall between me and her. Although she is busy and tired of studying, she still usually remembers spenting some times to phone to encourage me. She always worries for me. It really makes me happy.
On her holiday, we can have many times to confided and give each other good advices. She understands very well about life. She knows how to curb herself and be calm to solve difficult problems. She has strength of herself to face the hardship and try to overcome it. These are all why i am always proud of her and want to be "perfect " like her. So it is why i'm trying my best.
She is not only my sister but also my best friend. I really really want to thanks her- my sister who gives me believtion, strength, knowledge. And I want to sorry her because of all my mistake i made for her and making her sad. At the end, i want to say to her a truth that : " SIS, I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! ".

có nhiều lỗi lắm các bạn chữa dùm tớ nhé!:D:D
 
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