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Don't worry! I will write them, they aren't too difficult for me to do ^^ , I wanna write them. Don't feel uneasy! 
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nguyenthibich0702
When i was class 4A, I studied very lazy and i hated science subjects very much because it was very bored and difficult for me. >< So i never leant or did my this subjects's homework because i thought my science teacher - Mirs. Nguyet- would not check in my homework. To one day, I still didn't learn and do my homework. But in that day, my teacher called my name and check in my knowledge. Oh! I surpised and socked very much. But i tried to go abroad althought i was very scared and felf bad. My teacher found some questions to ask me while i still couldn't remember the name of last lesson we have learnt. She asked:
- What is the blood? And What is the blood made from?
I didn't answer these questions because i have forgot all my last lesson's knowledge. My teacher was very angry and then i received a mark zero. All that day, i was very sad and i thought that my daddy would be angry at me and shouted at me. And it was important that i made him sad because my studying. When my daddy picked me up to home, he saw my sad face and at once knew what something was wrong with me at school. He tried to ask me what had happened but i still didn't talk anything. But when we went to back home, i was so sad that i couldn't force myself anymore. i started cried aloud and cried so much. My daddy didn't know what happened but he still patted my head and tried to comfort me. When i stopped crying, i worried to talk him about my mark zero. But no like my thought, my daddy wasn't angry at. In spire of this, i knew my daddy was very sad about me. He told me that learning was very important and explained how it was important with me like this. He tried to encouraged me and made me to understand everything wasn't too late for me to try. Now, this memory is the best one i have ever had and remember forever. It is my important lesson for me and help me to surcess. And from it, i get to love my daddy more and i really thank him and proud of him so much who is my first teacher or my best father and give me many lesson to improve myself and surcess in life and job.
( i promise that this memory is real and i write it by all my heart
wolf95 này, mình chỉ phát hiện ra một số lỗi sai của bạn thôi! Mình nghĩ "had và to" bạn nên bỏ đi. Còn mấy chỗ kia mình sửa như thế không biết có đúng không. Mình nghĩ mỗi chủ đề cậu đưa ra nên dịch nghĩa TV sang bên cạnh để tránh bị hiểu lầm chủ đề. Theo mình nghĩ thì chủ đề lần này cậu đưa ra là những kí ức của bạn nhưng lại là về chuyện học. Mình đã hiểu sai đề bài nên sẽ viết lại. Cảm ơn bạn vì đã cỉ ra lỗi sai của mình trong chủ đề lần trước nha!!!
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cám ơn cậu nhưng chỗ " had" thì nó diễn tả sự việc xảy ra trc cái sự việc tớ về nhà này nên để quá khứ hoàn thành^^ tớ cũng cần lời giải thích chính đáng còn với " to" thì tứo vẫn ko hiểu lắm sao lại bỏ. nếu có thể cậu giải thích giúp tớ nhé
. còn mấy cái lỗi kia thì tớ thấy cũng đúng rồi hìhi. còn cái chủ đề đúng là cậu hiẻu sai đây là viét về 1 kỉ niệm. SR cậu nhiều. nhưng tớ thấy bài viết của cậu rất tuyệt nhất là về ông cậu, như cậu tứo cũng thực sự rất yêu ông tớ nhưng tớ may mắn hơn cạu là ông vẫn còn sống. tớ xin lỗi chắc nhắcd lại làm cậu buồn nhưng cám ơn nhiều lắm và tớ nghĩ bài viết đó chắc ẩn chứa cả tình cảm của cậu vào đó đung sko. cám ơn vfi sửa mấy cái lỗi nhé!
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nguyenthibich0702
go back home nghĩa là quay trở về nhà. Còn nếu bạn để là go to back home thì không có nghĩa gì cả. Nếu không hiểu lắm thì cậu có thể tra tù điển.
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wolf95
Sure everyone can enjoy my topic whenever they want.
) hehe! Sorry i still talk joke. you can enjoy whenever you want. But why is your memory sweet? Can you share with everyone? It will be interesting if you share with us. but remember that you ought to write it in English. Gook luck!
if you want to enjoy, you will have to write both my topic.Can i join?
about my memory,hmm,maybe it's very sweet.
) hehe! Sorry i still talk joke. you can enjoy whenever you want. But why is your memory sweet? Can you share with everyone? It will be interesting if you share with us. but remember that you ought to write it in English. Gook luck!
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tuanh038
hình như fải là join chứ làm gì là ẹnjoy emif you want to enjoy, you will have to write both my topic.
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wolf95
hihi thanks so much! ah! why don't you write a paragraph about topic's this week? hihihình như fải là join chứ làm gì là ẹnjoy em
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o0honeybaby0o
As I promised to you, wolf95, now I will show you my essay 'bout the first topic. I didn't introduce my family but 'bout my love for my family. Is it ok? ; If not, tell me, I will write one another. ^^
The fear is a part of our life, there are many different fears. However, as for me losing the love of my family is the thing that I am afraid of most.
When I’m sad or want to have a place which I can rely on, my family is the first place which I think of. When sitting beside my family, I feel very easy and peaceful in my soul. Because this is the place, which always protects me, form the waves of life. My family keeps my soul always warm and becoming stronger. My family, which is always full of love and I love it most. So, that is the reason why I’m afraid of losing the love of my family. I can’t image that one day, if I lose it, I don’t know whether I can be faced with the waves of life alone…
Each of us has our own family, and I think that family is the place, which is the safest, and it will defend you. And your relatives will love you by all their heart. So don’t waste time! Tell your family that you love them very much with all your feelings, right now!
If not, tell me, I will write one another. ^^The fear is a part of our life, there are many different fears. However, as for me losing the love of my family is the thing that I am afraid of most.
When I’m sad or want to have a place which I can rely on, my family is the first place which I think of. When sitting beside my family, I feel very easy and peaceful in my soul. Because this is the place, which always protects me, form the waves of life. My family keeps my soul always warm and becoming stronger. My family, which is always full of love and I love it most. So, that is the reason why I’m afraid of losing the love of my family. I can’t image that one day, if I lose it, I don’t know whether I can be faced with the waves of life alone…
Each of us has our own family, and I think that family is the place, which is the safest, and it will defend you. And your relatives will love you by all their heart. So don’t waste time! Tell your family that you love them very much with all your feelings, right now!
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wolf95
Ehèm cái này cậu đã viết ở 1 topic nào đó rồi tớ đã đọc và rất thick nhưng ko có nhớ. ( chơi ko feshplay tí nào nhé hehe) . nhưng ko sao bù lại dành chủ đề hai cho cậu lên ngôi xem nào nhé honey babyAs I promised to you, wolf95, now I will show you my essay 'bout the first topic. I didn't introduce my family but 'bout my love for my family. Is it ok? ;
The fear is a part of our life, there are many different fears. However, as for me losing the love of my family is the thing that I am afraid of most.
When I’m sad or want to have a place which I can rely on, my family is the first place which I think of. When sitting beside my family, I feel very easy and peaceful in my soul. Because this is the place, which always protects me, form the waves of life. My family keeps my soul always warm and becoming stronger. My family, which is always full of love and I love it most. So, that is the reason why I’m afraid of losing the love of my family. I can’t image that one day, if I lose it, I don’t know whether I can be faced with the waves of life alone…
Each of us has our own family, and I think that family is the place, which is the safest, and it will defend you. And your relatives will love you by all their heart. So don’t waste time! Tell your family that you love them very much with all your feelings, right now!
hehe. nhưng công nhận bài này rất có tình cảm đấy nhất là mầy chỗ nói lên gia đình làm cho tâm hồn luôn ấm áp và bản thân trở lên mạnh mẽ hơn, là noei yên bình cho tâm hồn mình. chà hay quá! có gì dạy tớ nhé!
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o0honeybaby0o
Tớ lừơi )
Tại sáng bận thi nghề vi tính nên lừơi làm bài luận cho cậu quá, mà lại lỡ hứa mất rùi ; còn cái next one kia thì đang đánh vào máy, 100% là chưa cho ai xem =)).
Memory bình thường thui àh? Hay là kỉ niệm tuổi thơ dạng như childhood? Tớ kể về một chuyến trip đấy, được hok? Có hơi hok được hay vì tớ làm gấp quá, chắc là sai nhìu, khi nào đánh xong sẽ pm cho cậu ngay, check giúp tớ cái.
Àh mà tớ nhớ là fairplay chứ hả? ;
)Tại sáng bận thi nghề vi tính nên lừơi làm bài luận cho cậu quá, mà lại lỡ hứa mất rùi ;
còn cái next one kia thì đang đánh vào máy, 100% là chưa cho ai xem =)). Memory bình thường thui àh? Hay là kỉ niệm tuổi thơ dạng như childhood? Tớ kể về một chuyến trip đấy, được hok? Có hơi hok được hay vì tớ làm gấp quá, chắc là sai nhìu, khi nào đánh xong sẽ pm cho cậu ngay, check giúp tớ cái.
Àh mà tớ nhớ là fairplay chứ hả? ;
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wolf95
ừm ừm viết đi nhé! tớ lại sai vài thứ đơn giản rồi chán thật. có gfi nagỳ mai nhé hôm nay tớ có 1 lo bài chạy ca hcọ thêm mệt lắm nên cho fép tớ cance hôm nay. hì mọi người vào viết đi nhé mạnh dạn vào có gfi cùng nhau sửa sẽ tốt lắm đấy!Tớ lừơi
Tại sáng bận thi nghề vi tính nên lừơi làm bài luận cho cậu quá, mà lại lỡ hứa mất rùi ;
Memory bình thường thui àh? Hay là kỉ niệm tuổi thơ dạng như childhood? Tớ kể về một chuyến trip đấy, được hok? Có hơi hok được hay vì tớ làm gấp quá, chắc là sai nhìu, khi nào đánh xong sẽ pm cho cậu ngay, check giúp tớ cái.
Àh mà tớ nhớ là fairplay chứ hả? ;
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english_is_my_life_96
viết sai chính tả và dùng nhầm cấu trúc chị ơi!!!!^^ I'm really 14 years old. But I think E for everyone. Althought you are 14 or quite old but if you love and need E for your big dream, you will try your best because of it. I am like this. Thanks for your compliment but there are manybody good at E better than me. Why don't you ẹnoy my topic and write paragraph after you read my message.^^ Gook luck!
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khoc_cry
Hi I'm a new member. Nice to meet all of u ^^!
My name's Van. I'm a student of TD school. Is it necessary to use English all the time while I'm in this topic. My English's really bad, so plz dont laugh at me ^^!
I'm a little funny, but someone thinks I'm cold, a little bossy ( I think they're right ) but dont worry, I can be friendly as much as I want. By the way, I'm sr, I dont want to talk about my family, so... can I talk about something else ^^! like... ( I haven't got anything yet ... )
My name's Van. I'm a student of TD school. Is it necessary to use English all the time while I'm in this topic. My English's really bad, so plz dont laugh at me ^^!
I'm a little funny, but someone thinks I'm cold, a little bossy ( I think they're right ) but dont worry, I can be friendly as much as I want. By the way, I'm sr, I dont want to talk about my family, so... can I talk about something else ^^!
like... ( I haven't got anything yet ... )
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wolf95
ồ cám ơn bạn nhé! nhưng cái chỗ " like this" í tớ là "tớ cũng như thế đấy" like ở đây dùng để so sánh chứ ko phải là động từ. cám ơn bạn nhé mà cuũg tại tớ đánh ẩu quá tứo sẽ cố gắng khắc phục. sao bạn ko viết đoạn đi ngắn dài đều đc có gì chúng ta cùng sửa
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hi! thanks so much. nice to meet you too, Van. althought everyone still can undersand what you write, but i think that you should write clearlyHi I'm a new member. Nice to meet all of u ^^!
My name's Van. I'm a student of TD school. Is it ( it is)necessary to use English all the time while I'm in this topic. My English's really bad, so plz dont laugh at me ^^!
I'm a little funny, but someone thinks I'm cold, a little bossy ( I think they're right ) but dont worry, I can be friendly as much as I want. By the way, I'm sr, I dont want to talk about my family, so... can I talk about something else ^^!
but if you don't want, you can do what you want. i still think that if you write clearly, it is better for you. And you don't force yourself to write about your family, you can introduce about yourself. Remember that you must write them in English. but i think that your writing English skill is not bad, it is good( better than me ). i hope my topic can help you improving your writing English skill. thanks! goof luck!
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khoc_cry
oh, thanks, thanks ^^! But I don't think my writing skill is better than u =))=))=)) that idea is silly ( sorry my dear ^^! )
I'm girl ( of course ). Maybe I'm a little stupid girl I like math, english, literature and physic. I hate physical education and civic education ^^! Hey, do u know the 4rum hpvn.net, I'm a member of there, I'm Slytherin ^^!
I'm girl ( of course ). Maybe I'm a little stupid girl
I like math, english, literature and physic. I hate physical education and civic education ^^! Hey, do u know the 4rum hpvn.net, I'm a member of there, I'm Slytherin ^^!
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wolf95
^^ thanks! i really like all subjects but i can't learn all of them. my bad subject are science subjects( such as: math, physic,...) and physical education, too. i heard your forum but i can't remember. Ah!oh, thanks, thanks ^^! But I don't think my writing skill is better than u =))=))=)) that idea is silly ( sorry my dear ^^! )
I'm girl ( of course ). Maybe I'm a little stupid girl
our next topic next week: write about your favorite film ( it can be anime ^^hehe, cartoon....)
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TOPIC IN THIS WEEK: WRITE ABOUT YOUR FAMILY
Sau đây là bài viết của mình, có gfi sửa giúp nhé!
Hi! I'm Yến. My family name is Nguyen. I'm 14 years old. I study in Voi secondary school. I'm in class 8A. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. I live in Huong Lac Town. My house is very beautiful because it has too(bỏ too đi nhé vì dùng như thế sễ làm ý câu thay đổi, trở nên tiêu cực chứ không còn ngjiax tích cực nữa đâu) many trees in front of. My countryside is Bac Ninh City where is so traditional. My father is a soldier. He is a nice father. In my childhood, he was my first teacher. He taught me everything about life sush as: loving everyone, liking subjects, protecting and loving Earth, being friendly to people,... Everything was(sai ngữ pháp rồi em ạ. bỏ was hoặc thêm that trước was thì mới đúng) taught by him is so beautiful. It makes me happy and helps me improve my knowledge. My mother is the best mother in the world. Her knowledge about life is very good and she also often give (phải chia động từ) me many advices when i make mistakes. But her cooking skill isn't better than my father. So my dad often teaches me how to cook meals than(thừa rồi) more than my mum. In spire (đánh sai rồi, phải là spite) of this, I love her so much. Next, my sister is very beautiful in my eyes. She gives me many big dreams. And she taught me to love English and how to learn it. So I love E very much and study it quite well. I love my family very much. My hobbies are: protecting Earth, writing story, reading comics books, newspapers, using computer, learning E and Japanese... My dream is speaking E well to go abroad. I hope I can do it and my dream will become true. Thanks for your reading my paragraph. Good bye!^^
Đó là bài viết của mình mong các bạn cùng viết với mình nhé!^^
Lần sau viết phải tránh mấy lỗi này ra nhé như gõ sai, dùng sai ngữ pháp và hơi lặp từ nên dễ gây nhàm chán cho người đọc! Em viết cũng ok nhưng cần luyện nhiều hơn. Chúc em thành công!
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o0honeybaby0o
Tớ xin lỗi vì post bài muộn quá, nhưng do là tớ bỏ bài kể về trip để thay bằng một bài văn nói về Memory thật sự nên giờ mới post đựơc lên cho mọi người. Sorry nhé!
Còn bài dưới là tớ gởi thêm cho mọi người chữa giúp và tham khảo luôn nèh ^^MY MEMORY
Whenever taking about memory, everyone has own diffirent feelings. Because, maybe, it’s a wonderful or a terrible memory… However, in reallity, our life is only meaningful when it’s full of memories because memory is connection the past with the present. Time is time, time lost, never found. So, you should keep your memories in your mind and enjoy them. Then, these memories engrave into your mind, little by little, memories become a indispensable part in our life…And I'm not an exception so I always keep my sweet memories in my mind .
Many of memories were with my family and my friends. These are moments that make me feel stronger and warmer . My family and my friends gave me their hands and helped me stand up when I fell down and felt nothing was true. There is a saying that “sorrow shared sorrow halved, happiness shared happiness doubled” and my friends are who stand by me to share sorrow and happiness make a lot of endless moments. These moments are when …my friends listen and understand what I mean…when they give their hands when I need a help…when they give me many useful advices….and get me through the storms… unconditionally. Beside my memories with my friends are many memories with my cherished family. These memories are when I was protected and defended from the waves of life. My family always make me feel peaceful in my sould. These endless moments make me love my life more and never fade from my mind…
Suddenly I found that knowing how to respect each moment happening in our daily life, will make our life more wonderful just because We live to love and to be loved…
MY IDEA ABOUT HAPPINESS
All of us dream to have a happy life. However, no one can answer exactly how is the feeling of happy? Happiness? What does it mean?
There is a saying that:”Contentment is the philosopher’s stone, which turn all it touched into gold; the poor man is rich with it, the rich man poor without it”. So happiness only comes to the person who knows how to be satisfied with his life. As for me, I think that happiness is not in having or being—it is in the doing. For me it’s living everyday without regret .Knowing you lived life the best way you can and cherished memories. My idea Happiness is feeling complete like nothing in the world can go wrong. Just feeling whole. All seasons are beautiful for the person who carries happiness within.
When we feel love and kindness toward others, it not only makes others feel loved and cared for, but it helps us also to develop inner happiness and peace. And I have just realized that to be able to find joy in another’s joy; that is the secret of happiness.
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