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  1. Nguyễn Phan Ánh Nguyệt

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    Sở hữu bí kíp ĐỖ ĐẠI HỌC ít nhất 24đ - Đặt chỗ ngay!

    Đọc sách & cùng chia sẻ cảm nhận về sách số 2


    Chào bạn mới. Bạn hãy đăng nhập và hỗ trợ thành viên môn học bạn học tốt. Cộng đồng sẽ hỗ trợ bạn CHÂN THÀNH khi bạn cần trợ giúp. Đừng chỉ nghĩ cho riêng mình. Hãy cho đi để cuộc sống này ý nghĩa hơn bạn nhé. Yêu thương!

    Dưới đây là một số topic do của mình và mình sưu tầm được trong các kì thi HSG và Tiếng Anh tài năng. Mọi người cùng tham khảo nha!
    1. Can children and their parents be good friends? Why or why not?
    Have you ever thought that children and their parents can best friends? In my point of view, I think it can. Why do I say that? Today I will tell you the reasons why parents can become best friends of their children.
    First of all, a child can share everything with their parents. If in some cases the child is doing something wrong but they can correct them. It’s a really for child, right? Yes, exactly.
    From past to present, most parents believe that being strict while teaching their children will help their children be more obedient. But not all children are the same, there will be some children who will find ways to resist that rigor and control, otherwise there is no benefit that pushes them further out of their reach.
    It can boost your child's fear. Because the next time you intend to punish your children, ask yourself a simple question - do you want them to be afraid of you? Most likely, your answer will be a zero. The problem is that punishment always creates a relationship based on fear.
    In this relationship, children become anxious about what their parents will do if they notice some inappropriate behavior. Of course, your kids may behave like angels when you are around, but simply out of fear of you, they really can't understand their mistakes. Behind your back, the child will surely act the same again. So instead of scolding the kids, parents can act like friends, by giving the best advice without hurting their kids.
    Moreover, a best friend is a person with whom a child can share everything from sadness to happiness so parents can understand more about their children.
    It is often said that parents are the brightest role models for their children to follow, so you need to be close to your children, the teaching of children will become easy and it also increases the affection in the parent’s relationship with children.
    Otherwise, parents are less close to their children, making the relationship between parents and children become foreign. They don't even know what their children is upset about? Those mothers and fathers are really heartless. Of those reasons some children lack respect for adults, lack of such life skills because parents do not spend time with their children to teach them about that. So it is very important to have close daily conversation with your children when talking together. Everything in the day is shared by children to their best friends. Parents being a best friend can change everything children need. Be a close friend that your children can trust and confide in.
    In short, parents to their children are very important people, who directly teach, must also be their best friends in life. If you are parents, you should stay closer to your children while you can. Don't let it be too late to realize you were wrong by not giving much attention to your children.
     
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    Tada, mình đã trở lại rồi đây. Đây là topic của một chị nhờ mình, đây là bài viết của mình, mọi người tham khảo nha:
    Topic: Nói về khoảng thời gian khó khăn của em trong quá trình học tập về tiếng anh
    Today, the more society develops, more opportunities are opened, but we still see conflicting manifestations. Besides successful people, we see a lot of young people now find it difficult and discouraging. Seeing failure, destroy yourself. Lack of faith, lack of will, living cowardly and collapsed. This is a matter to be condemned. Certainly, everyone in each of us has experienced a period of difficulties in learning. But whether we try to find ways to solve the problem is different, there are people who persistently find the place we are facing the problem and solve it, but there are also people who once failed once gave up, did not do again. If that difficulty persists, it can lead to many other problems such as: being stressed by heavy study can lead to autism, not communicating with people. This will last for a long time, it will make you lack life skills because you have little communication and outdoor activities with everyone. Concerning awareness, we see the will and energy as the human motivation and belief. Is the guideline of man. About the actions we need: train yourself to have a strong will and strong will in study; criticize those who are weak, lack confidence in themselves and in public. Study and follow examples of the will and determination to rise in learning. Since then we dare to live and dare to go to success. In short, willpower is a measure of the dignity of each person. Let us each train to have the best will and energy to live in full success. Live without cowardice and weakness. To do so right now, be yourself with your dreams and aspirations and practice to achieve success! Try to study now, cultivate and educate yourself, not having difficulty is giving up. People often say "Learn, learn more, learn forever" so never stop learning, it will not be beneficial for you.
     
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    Có phải tớ hới cứng nhắc không nhưng mà cho phép tớ sửa một chút nhé ^^
    1. Can children and their parents be good friends? Why or why not?
    Have you ever thought that children and their parents can best friends? In my point of view, I think it can. Why do I say that? Today I will tell you the reasons why parents can become best friends of their children.
    First of all, a child can share everything with their parents. If in some cases the child is doing something wrong but they can correct them. It’s a really => reality for child => the child, right? Yes, exactly.
    From past to present, most parents believe that being strict while teaching their children will help their children be more obedient. But not all children are the same, there will be some children who will find ways to resist that rigor and control, otherwise => otherwise, there is no benefit that pushes them further out of their reach.
    It can boost your child's fear. Because the next time you intend to punish your children, ask yourself a simple question - do you want them to be afraid of you? Most likely, your answer will be a zero. The problem is that punishment always creates a relationship based on fear.
    In this relationship, children become anxious about what their parents will do if they notice some inappropriate behavior. Of course, your kids may behave like angels when you are around, but simply out of fear of you, they really can't understand their mistakes. Behind your back, the child will surely act the same again. So instead of scolding the kids, parents can act like friends, by giving the best advice without hurting their kids.
    Moreover, a best friend is a person with whom a child can share everything from sadness to happiness so parents can understand more about their children.
    It is often said that parents are the brightest role models for their children to follow, so you need to be close to your children, the teaching of children will become easy and it also increases the affection in the parent’s relationship with children.
    Otherwise, parents are less close to their children, making the relationship between parents and children become foreign. They don't even know what their children is => are upset about? Those mothers and fathers are really heartless. Of those reasons => reasons, some children lack respect for adults, lack of => bỏ of such life skills because parents do not spend time with their children to teach them about that. So it is very important to have close daily conversation => conversations with your children when talking together. Everything in the day is shared by children to => with their best friends. Parents being a best friend can change everything children need. Be a close friend that your children can trust and confide in.
    In short, parents to their children are very important people, who directly teach, must also be their best friends in life. If you are parents => parent, you should stay closer to your children while you can. Don't let it be too late to realize you were wrong by not giving much attention to your children.
    Topic: Nói về khoảng thời gian khó khăn của em trong quá trình học tập về tiếng anh
    Today, the more society develops, more => the more opportunities are opened, but we still see conflicting manifestations. Besides successful people, we see a lot of young people now find it difficult and discouraging. Seeing failure, destroy yourself. Lack of faith, lack of will, living cowardly and collapsed. This is a matter to be condemned. Certainly, everyone in each of us has experienced a period of difficulties in learning. But whether we try to find ways to solve the problem is different, there are people who persistently find the place we are facing the problem and solve it, but there are also people who once failed once gave up, did not do again => it again. If that difficulty persists, it can lead to many other problems such as: being stressed by heavy => the heavy study can lead to autism, not communicating with people. This will last for a long time, it will make you lack life skills because you have little communication and outdoor activities with everyone. Concerning awareness, we see the will and energy as the human motivation and belief. Is the guideline of man. About the actions, we need: train yourself to have a strong will and strong will in study=> the study; criticize those who are weak, lack confidence in themselves and in public. Study and follow examples of the will and determination to rise in learning. Since then we dare to live and dare to go to success. In short, willpower is a measure of the dignity of each person. Let us each train to have the best will and energy to live in full success. Live without cowardice and weakness. To do so right now, be yourself with your dreams and aspirations and practice to achieve success! Try to study now, cultivate and educate yourself, not having difficulty is giving up. People often say "Learn, learn more, learn forever" so never stop learning, it will not be beneficial for you.
    Đây là nhận xét chung của mình về các topic cậu viết:
    + Trước hết cậu cần nêu rõ ở topic là viết về 1 essay hay là 1 paragraph.
    + Cậu nên dùng một số liên từ nối vào để đoạn văn có thêm tính liên kết giữa các câu.
    + Về phần ý thì cậu khai triển tốt và cố gắng phát huy nhé ^^
    Fighting :3
     
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    Hi mọi người nha, topic này sẽ do mình và bạn @Hắc Trần Tuyết Nhi cùng nhau làm và phát triển. Cũng vì thời gian online rất ngắn nên hàng ngày mình vẫn sẽ đăng bài văn liên quan đến 2 kĩ năng WRITING---SPEAKING và sau đó sẽ được bạn @Hắc Trần Tuyết Nhi chỉnh sửa lại nha. Nếu mọi người cần mình và ấy giúp các vấn đề liên quan đến viết các topic thì có thể gửi đề qua wall của mình hoặc của bạn ấy nha. Mong mọi người ủng hộ bọn mình!!!
    Đây là bài của ngày hôm nay nè, mong mọi người sẽ thích cùng nhau tham khảo nha:
    Describe someone famous that you admire and say why you admire them.
    Jack Ma is one of the people that I admire. He’s a Chinese billionaire, a businessman and the chairman of the board. He aslo creates Taobao and Alipay.
    So what personalities do I learn from Jack Ma?
    - He’s a patient person! Why do I say so? Because he tried to look for a job many times in the past. Although he failed many interviews, he didn’t give up his intention. Instead, he still created opportunities by himself. For me, I think that’s the reason why he becomes a successful businessman now.
    - He works really hard both in the past and now.
    To be honest, I think I have to learn more from Jack Ma and his good personalities if I want to succeed in every field.
    Do you think that person also has some weak points?
    Well, everyone has weak points. No one is perfect!
    Jack Ma is no exception. I don’t know whether he has weak points or not.
    In the past, he had many difficuties in his work.
    - Honestly, the competitions didn’t go well for him when he was young.
    - No company wanted to accept him to work, even just a small chance.
    - He applied for a job in many companies but he failed many times.
    Moreover, His studying wasn’t smooth, he still kept trying again. What a patient person!
    How do I apply what I have learn from Jack Ma to make my life better?
    - I work harder than I did before.
    - I know that everything wil be ok and it’s ok for me to try the new things.
    - Beside, I also know that I can always do better.
    - And the last, I start to believe that everyone can succeed if they work hard and be patient with their jobs.
    In shorts, Jack Ma is the person who set a good example for us, and he brings us many good personalities that we should learn. No one is perfect but everyone should be terrible in the perfect way!
    Mình sẽ tiếp tục vào ngày mai nhá!
     
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    Mình cũng có 1 bài muốn chia sẻ nè :'3

    In many countries, sports and exercise classes are replaced with the academic subjects. Discuss the effects of this trend.

    Over the past few decades, academic subjects have become increasingly in this fast-changing information-based society. Nowadays, there has been a growing debate as to whether it would be more effective to replace physical education classes with academic subjects. Despite the importance of sports, I highly believe that it is inevitable and more efficient to focus more on academic subjects for several reasons.

    Those who argue that sports and exercise classes are needed in school base their case on the following arguments. First of all, sports are a good way to build character and develop personality. That is, there are necessary for learning about competition, cooperation, and good sportsmanship. In addition, as a majority of children these days are addicted to the Internet, they find it hard to leave their computer. Consequently, a growing number of children are becoming overweight or obese due to a lack of exercise. So, if schools foster an environment that deprives students of getting a proper physical education, it will have a long-term negative effect on children both mentally and physically.

    Nevertheless, people should not ignore the fact that devoting more time and energy to academic subjects will benefit students more in the long run. The time devoted to physical education now would be better spent teaching students English. This is because speaking fluent English will give young people an advantage over other college applicants and job seekers in the near future. Besides, science will undoubtedly benefit youth more than physical education as well. The principles learned in science will provide the necessary foundation for solving the difficult problems that are sure to arise in students’ futures.

    In summary, there are high hopes that educators and parents exercise wisdom in teaching young generations.
     
    ~ Hồng Vân ~ thích bài này.
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    Okay, bây giờ mình xin phép được sửa nhé :3
    Describe someone famous that you admire and say why you admire them.
    Jack Ma is one of the people that I admire. He’s a Chinese billionaire, a businessman and the chairman of the board. He aslo => also creates Taobao and Alipay.
    So what personalities do I learn from Jack Ma?
    - He’s a patient person! Why do I say so? Because he tried to look for a job many times in the past. Although he failed many interviews, he didn’t give up his intention. Instead, he still created opportunities by himself. For me, I think that’s the reason why he becomes a successful businessman now.
    - He works really hard both in the past and now.
    To be honest, I think I have to learn more from Jack Ma and his good personalities => personality if I want to succeed in every field.
    Do you think that person also has some weak points?
    Well, everyone has weak points. No one is perfect!
    Jack Ma is no exception. I don’t know whether he has weak points or not.
    In the past, he had many difficuties => difficulties in his work.
    - Honestly, the competitions didn’t go well for him when he was young.
    - No company wanted to accept him to work, even just a small chance.
    - He applied for a job in many companies but he failed many times.
    Moreover, His studying wasn’t smooth, he still kept trying again. What a patient person!
    How do I apply what I have learn => learned from Jack Ma to make my life better?
    - I work harder than I did before.
    I know that everything wil => will be ok and it’s ok for me to try the new => new things.
    - Beside => Besides, I also know that I can always do better.
    - And the last, I start to believe that everyone can succeed if they work hard and be patient with their jobs.
    In shorts, Jack Ma is the person who set a good example for us, and he brings us many good personalities that we should learn. No one is perfect but everyone should be terrible in the perfect way!
    Bài này thì viết tương đối tốt, ít sai chính tả giống bạn Nguyệt :>> Nhưng em cần nêu rõ đây là essay hay paragraph để mọi người biết được nhé!!
     
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    Hi mọi ngươi nè, xin lỗi vì trong lúc đánh máy xảy ra một vài sai sót về lỗi chính tả, mọi người thông cảm nha, mình sẽ cố gắng chỉnh sửa cái lỗi kì lạ này của mình. Và cảm ơn bạn @Lạc Thưw nha, đã đóng góp bài giúp bọn mình. Và đây là topic của ngày hôm nay, cùng nhau tham khảo nha:
    Dịch bệnh Covid 19:
    As we all know, the Covid 19 epidemic brought a lot of damage to people and property. It a very dangerous disease and highly contagious from person to person. It seriously affects the economic conditions of countries, especially the US, Brazil, and Russia. This epidemic originated in Wuhan, China. And now there are many strains and can spread faster and stronger than the original virus. The Covid 19 epidemic has claimed many lives of people in the world and in Vietnam. For the above reasons, we need to accumulate epidemic prevention, each of us should be conscious, this can protect the health of ourselves and everyone in society. Especially doctors are on the front line against the epidemic, who are facing many dangers, but still risk their lives to treat patients. Need to strictly comply with the directives of the state. To protect ourselves and everyone we should do the following:
    + Wear a mask when going out to public areas, crowded.
    + Antiseptic and daily body temperature measurement.
    + When you yourself have symptoms of cough, shortness of breath, you should contact the hotline of the health department.
    + Download the Bluezoon app to make a daily medical declaration.
    + Not gathering people, needing to stop weddings, anniversaries, ...
    + If you go from the translation area, you need to isolate in accordance with regulations, do not try to hide, because it will affect people a lot.
    + Do not bring foreigners in illegally via the border.
    + .....
    The above are the basic things that each of us needs to do to help the country soon end its epidemic.
    This is my personal opinion, I think our state needs to deal strongly with people who illegally cross the border, spreading false information that confuses people. Because when we make strict laws, people will not consciously do something without thinking.
    Each of us needs to work together to fight the Covid 19 epidemic.
     
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    Cảm ơn chị @The key of love đã giúp em có được cái idea này, và đặc biệt là chị còn tặng cho em một bài tâm sự của chị rất ý nghĩa ^^....Và đây là topic của ngày hôm nay, mọi người tham khảo nha:
    The mood of a student studying away from home:
    All of us, sooner or later, will experience the feeling of going away from home from school. Maybe from the early days of high school for magnet school or when we are a little more mature it was college. No matter what, when we are far away, we realize that family is really important and many people must regret it.
    We regret the days that used to be considered boring, repetitive like a cycle, now it only leaves a little bitter, salty in us. Now, those "dull days" are just moments that pass briefly and briefly with relatives and then we have to go to a new environment, meet people we do not know, a commune. a new opportunity to train yourself - a place where there is no longer a reputation for scolding, morning squeals or careful parental care.
    A new place will have many new things that make us worry, watchful, lonely, and sad. Then who will be by my side when I'm in trouble forever? And then not only that, continuous pressure comes, which is learning, which is daily life. Suddenly found herself useless and a burden when alo came home: "Daddy, Mom, I used up all the money!" or: "I'm sick, Mom!", .... all kinds of things. Parents had to temporarily put down their jobs and go to school with us.
    Since I was away from home from school, I have found that there is no place like my home. From the food she cooks to the old yet warm mattress, it's all worth it. I have never felt that the food my mother had brought from far away to school, even though it was cold, was surprisingly delicious, delicious, and I always ate it all. In the future, no matter how luxurious and expensive a meal, no matter how expensive it is cooked, it cannot be compared with the cooked rice. Usually, each of us has gotten used to the rice our mother cooked since we were young, no one can cook that special taste. Every time you go home and then go to school, your parents will prepare a bunch of things from the countryside: it can be ready-to-eat food, clean food in the countryside, sometimes it is a little candy, fruit and never. There is a lack of the phrase "Do you have enough money, parents give me more money to live, my parents are fine at home, they can still take care of themselves, please study hard" ... Mom always reminds me every time I visit me , reminds my mom's words at home: "Worry about study, must not be naughty!", these sentences have been wasted before because they think it is too boring, everyone knows why mom remind. But when studying away from home, the time to talk to my mother only counts on my fingers, then I know that those words are really important. Time flies slowly in school, but comes home and time flies very quickly, as if I didn't want to let me visit my parents, closed my eyes and open my eyes day is ended, I didn't even have time to do anything.
    Everyone says that going to school away from home to take care of their parents, but I think my parents are even more worried, worrying if he will skip meals today, worry that he will stay up too late to study, worry that he will fall again. love this place and that, worry about a lot of things. Every time I call back my parents to tell me all kinds of things, that's also fun.
    I miss home over and over again: "Mom and Dad, I want to go home!"
     
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    Bài của mìn hôm nay :> Mọi người tham khảo ạ.

    Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.

    People learn through their entire lives. They constantly improve their knowledge and develop. I think that a college or university education should be available to all students because every person has the right to choose the way to self-perfection. Below I will give some of my reasons to support my position.

    First of all, every person should have the chance to get a higher degree, gain new knowledge and experience. However, some people believe that higher education should be available only to good students. I think it is silly. It is like to make unavailable traveling for one who does not have an IQ high enough.

    Second of all, some young people do not do well at school but they have great personality and ability to learn. They are self-confident, persistent and patient. With these qualities they can get higher grades then their classmates who are talented but lazy. Imagine for example situation when a teenager gets high grades because his or her parents constantly make him or her study and help to do most of the homework. In this case a child does very well at school but I think a college can show the opposite results.

    Finally, it is a discrimination against students to make available higher education only for good ones.

    So, if a student does poor and gets low grades he/she should be sent down. But if a person was never given a chance to try himself/herself at college, what to do in this case?

    To sum up, I think that all young people should have the chance to get a higher education. To take or not this chance must be up to them
     
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    Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.


    People learn through->Throughout
    their entire lives. They constantly improve their knowledge and develop. I think that a college or university education should be available to all students because every person has the right to choose the way to self-perfection. Below I will give some of my reasons to support my position.
    First of all, every person should have the chance to get a higher degree, gain new knowledge and experience. However, some people believe that higher education should be available only to good students. I think it is silly. It is like to make unavailable traveling for one who does not have an IQ high enough.
    Second of all, (chỗ này bạn có thể thay là Secondly để tránh lặp từ với First of all) some young people do not do well at school but they have great->a great personality and ability to learn. They are self-confident, persistent and patient. With these qualities they can get higher grades then->than their classmates who are talented but lazy. Imagine for example situation when a teenager gets high grades because his or her parents constantly make him or her study and help to do most of the homework. In this case a child does very well at school but I think a college can show the opposite results.
    Finally, it is a discrimination against students to make available higher education only for good ones.
    So, if a student does poor->poorly and gets low grades he/she should be sent down. But if a person was never given a chance to try himself/herself at college, what to do in this case? T
    o sum up, I think that all young people should have the chance to het->get a higher education. To take or not this chance must be up to them
     
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    The mood of a student studying away from home:
    All of us, sooner or later, will experience the feeling of going away from home from school. Maybe from the early days of high school for magnet => a magnet school or when we are a little more mature it was college. No matter what, when we are far away, we realize that family is really important and many people must regret it.
    We regret the days that used to be considered boring, repetitive like a cycle, now it only leaves a little bitter, salty in us. Now, those "dull days" are just moments that pass briefly and briefly with relatives and then we have to go to a new environment, meet people we do not know, a commune. a new opportunity to train yourself - a place where there is no longer a reputation for scolding, morning squeals or careful parental care.
    A new place will have many new things that make us worry, watchful, lonely, and sad. Then who will be by my side when I'm in trouble forever? And then not only that, continuous pressure comes, which is learning, which is daily life. Suddenly found herself useless and a burden when alo => all came home: "Daddy, Mom, I used up all the money!" or: "I'm sick, Mom!", .... all kinds of things. Parents had to temporarily put down their jobs and go to school with us.
    Since I was away from home from school, I have found that there is no place like my home. From the food she cooks to the old yet warm mattress, it's all worth it. I have never felt that the food my mother had brought from far away to school, even though it was cold, was surprisingly delicious, delicious, and I always ate it all. In the future, no matter how luxurious and expensive a meal, no matter how expensive it is cooked, it cannot be compared with the cooked rice. Usually, each of us has gotten used to the rice our mother cooked since we were young, no one can cook that special taste. Every time you go home and then go to school, your parents will prepare a bunch of things from the countryside: it can be ready-to-eat food, clean food in the countryside, sometimes it is a little candy, fruit and never. There is a lack of the phrase "Do you have enough money, parents give me more money to live, my parents are fine at home, they can still take care of themselves, please study hard" ... Mom always reminds me every time I visit me, reminds my mom's words at home: "Worry about study => the study, must not be naughty!", these sentences have been wasted before because they think it is too boring, everyone knows why mom remind. But when studying away from home, the time to talk to my mother only counts on my fingers, then I know that those words are really important. Time flies slowly in school but comes home and time flies very quickly as if I didn't want to let me visit my parents, closed my eyes and open my eyes day is ended, I didn't even have time to do anything.
    Everyone says that going to school away from home to take care of their parents, but I think my parents are even more worried, worrying if he will skip meals today, worry that he will stay up too late to study, worry that he will fall again. love this place and that, worry about a lot of things. Every time I call back my parents to tell me all kinds of things, that's also fun.
    I miss home over and over again: "Mom and Dad, I want to go home!"
    Bài Nguyệt với Key pahir gọi là perfect dù có lỗi chút nhưng k đáng kể đâu :3
     
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    Bài của chị nè @Iam_lucky_girl em làm hơi vội nên câu văn cũng hơi ngắn, chị xem rồi bổ sung nha.
    Using cell phones and computers have made communication among people much easier. What is your point of view about it?
    As we all know, the society is developing day by day, with the development of widgets and smart devices. Using a phone or a computer for communication is very good and convenient. Because today there are social networking sites facebook, zalo, instagram that only need an internet, or a data network that can be used and connected with anyone, wherever they are, no matter how far away. can talk. Yes, it is very convenient, just with a phone, or a computer and wifi network we can communicate with everyone around very easily. There was no need to send letters back and forth like before, it took a long time, or traveled a hundred kilometers to meet each other, but talked only a few hours, or a few days and a year only met a few times a year. But instead, when we use the phone and the computer, we only need a few minutes or even seconds to communicate with everyone, being able to see each other by video call.
    But the abuse of phones and computers too much is also not good, in a meeting where we each have one phone and focus on the phone without talking to each other is not good, so they We also need to know how to use phones and computers properly.
    From all the above reasons, the use of phones and computers for communication is good, but also limited.
     
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    Tớ sửa chút xíu :3
    Using cell phones and computers have made communication among people much easier. What is your point of view about it?
    As we all know, the society => society is developing day by day, with the development of widgets and smart devices. Using a phone or a computer for communication is very good and convenient. Because today there are social networking sites facebook, zalo, instagram that only need an internet => Internet, or a data network that can be used and connected with anyone, wherever they are, no matter how far away. can talk. Yes, it is very convenient, just with a phone, or a computer and wifi network we can communicate with everyone around very easily. There was no need to send letters back and forth like before, it took a long time, or traveled a hundred kilometers to meet each other, but talked only a few hours, or a few days and a year only met a few times a year. But instead, when we use the phone and the computer, we only need a few minutes or even seconds to communicate with everyone, being able to see each other by video call.
    But the abuse of phones and computers too much is also not good, in a meeting where we each have one phone and focus on the phone without talking to each other is not good, so they We => we also need to know how to use phones and computers properly.
    From all the above reasons, the use of phones and computers for communication is good, but also limited.
     
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    Hello, Hello...mình lại xuất để share một topic mới nữa nè, một topic mới toanh luôn nha!!! Mời mọi người tham khảo >:

    TOPIC 9: WHAT ONE PLACE IN VIET NAM WOULD YOU RECOMMEND FOR A TOURIST TO VISIT? WHY?
    There are a lot of popular destinations in Viet Nam but the place which I would like to recommend for a tourist to visit is Sapa.
    As you know Sapa is a small mountain town in Lao Cai province. It is located about 350 km northewest of Ha Noi. There are many interesting things here. So let me talk about Sapa and tell the beautiful things about it.
    Firstly, you will find here the famous Hoang Lien Son range of mountains which includes the Fancipan, the tallest mountain in Viet Nam. From the top of the mountain, you can look at the amazing views of green nature below it. You can also do mountain trek going to a historic pagoda where people usually pray for good luck and fortune. It has a breath-taking sceneries which any individuals would surely enjoy.
    Secondly, this quiet Vietnamese town is home of different ethnic tribal groups and Sapa is famous with diverse cutures and traditions. Here, you can enjoy eating a lot of delicious and unique of food. For example, Ca Tam soup, trau gac bep, Lam rice, 7 sticky rice. Sapa also has some ethnics with beautiful folk costume and tourists can rent it with a good price. Tourists can have picture taking with the ethnic groups or the local people wearing the same types of clothes giving them a memorable experience of the colourful culture and tradition of the place and the people.
    Moreover, Sapa is also well-known for Ham Rong mountain which is a famous eco-tourist site in Sapa, Viet Nam that attracts millions of visitors each year. The place is well-known for its beauty and fascinating and thrilling legends. Legend has it that, once upon a time, the place was a home of a dragon couple. One time they were suddenly struck by a great flood when they were playing. All things were sunk under water. The male dragon luckily escaped thanks to his strength, the female was so exhausted. She fell into the water. Over time, her head turned into the Ham Rong mountain.
    In other, SaPa also has a lot of beautiful places like Muong Hoa valley, Fancipan slings and Cong Troi with beautiful because of flowers and trees.
    Finally, equally interesting that tourists can witness in the place are the terraces. These terraces are like a spiral road or a ladder with rice plants around it. The terraces are popular around the world and often metioned on some novels and stories because of its beauty and freshness. Tourists can experience breathing very fresh air while enjoying the fantastic natural beauty of the place.
    What are you waiting for? Invite your friends and relatives to come and visit Sapa now and enjoy the beautiful things mother nature has give us. Thank you.
     
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    Hiiii, lại một topic nữa được post lên rùi nè, thanks chị @Iam_lucky_girl đã gửi topic cho em :<
    Bài hơi ngắn, chị tham khảo rùi phát triển thêm nha, mong sẽ nhận được nhiều topic hơn từ chị á ^^

    How do outdoor activities benefit high school students?
    As we all know, being outdoors has a lot of benefits for us. It helps us to have more life skills, simple and blessed skills that will be formed in us through the activities. Especially for high school students, they have to go through extremely difficult and stressful classroom lessons, and have to do a lot of homework, as this is the last grade of school age. Very important and meaningful. So they really need outdoor activities to help them relieve the stress from learning and parental pressure for the final level. These events can teach them all the skills necessary for themselves when entering the university environment, unlike the classes at school, outdoor activities are also considered as one lesson, but it's full of theory and practice. It is not as stressful and difficult as Maths, Physics, Chemistry, English, ... in school, it is not only easy to learn and easy to practice, but also very fun, and leaves many memorable memories for students. Not having to study with thick, full text books, not interesting, so it attracts a lot of attention from high school students. Therefore, through outdoor activities, teachers have inserted knowledge related to school subjects that the children do not pay attention to and have been engraved into their brains in a very simple way.
    So in my opinion, we need to organize more outdoor activities for high school students to help them relieve stress, and it will also help them learn while playing.
    New words:
    extremely difficult: vô cùng khó khăn. /ikˈstrēmlē ˈdifəkəlt/
     
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    Đây là bài của ngày hôm nay ^^

    Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

    I think it is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of this rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy, such as processed food. But even if we buy fresh food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags used everywhere to carry shopping home.

    The reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more on a daily basis than families did in the past. Convenience is also very important in modern life, so we buy packaging or canned food that can be transported from long distances and stored until we need it, first in the supermarket, and then at home.

    However, I think the amount of waste produce is also a result of our tendency to use something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used up valuable resources and energy to produce. We also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of.

    I think, therefore, that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags, by providing recycling services and by thing households and shops that do not attempt tp recycle their waste.

    With the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce. Certainly nobody wants to see our resources used up and our planet poisoned by waste.
     
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    Cảm ơn bạn @Lạc Thưw nè, bài bạn viết hay, không bị mắc lỗi ngữ pháp nè. Cùng bọn tớ chia sẻ nhiều bài hơn nha!!!
    Tada và đây là bài viết của ngày hôm nay nè:
    What do you think is the biggest environment problem in Vietnam? How can we solve the problem?
    To be honest, Vietnam is having many problems of the environment now: air pollution, water pollution, soil pollution. According to me, the air pollution is the worst in Vietnam. Why did I say that?For example:
    - the dirty smoke from the vehicles and factories make the air dirty and get worse day by day.
    - People use many nilon bags every moment and burn them when they can’t use it again because the nilon bags are hard to decay.
    For these reasons, I believe that, the air pollution in Vietnam is the worst and It will be even worse in the future. That’s not the good sign to human’s life.
    What will happen if the air pollution goes on?
    - Human’s life will be terrible with the problems of breathing.
    - The fresh air will be run out and the dirty smoke will be more.
    - It’s hard for us to breathe.
    How can we solve the problem?
    It’s very simple! To solve the problems of the air, we can:
    - Plant more trees to keep the air fresh.
    - Use less nilon bags and please, please don’t burn them.
    - Use bicycles instead of using motorbikes or cars.
    To keep the air fresh, there are some things we shouldn’t do:
    - Make the air dirty by the smoke and gases.
    - Burning mountains or cutting trees.
    In a word, our environment is being seriously polluted, that is why we need to know the ways to protect the environment. We should remember three words : reduce, reuse and recycle.
    Protecting the environment is protecting our life.
    All of us must act before it’s too late. I hope that the environment will be cleaner in the future.

    This is the time we need to do something to improve and protect the air and the environment also. We can't live without them. I hope through the suggestions that I mentioned above, you guys will find out your own ways to protect the environment and reduce the air pollution.
    New words:
    suggestions: gợi ý /sə(ɡ)ˈjesCH(ə)n/
     
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    Hiii, chúc mọi người một ngày tốt lành nhaaa. Đây là topic của ngày hôm nay nè!!! Cùng nhau tham khảo nào >:
    HOW IMPORTANT IS THE INFLUENCE OF FAMILY ON INDIVIDUALS? WHY DO YOU THINK SO?
    Family plays an essential role in making a good personality of individuals. Today I would like to tell you how important is the influence of famiy on individuals?
    There are three questions for you and me
    Firstly, why individuals always believe about their family?
    Secondly, how much family affect individuals?
    Finally, what is the advantages and disadvantages about this issue?

    The reason why individuals believe about their family because their family can give them some good advice and experience. And the most essential reason is that they think family is the place which is easy to show their emotion and problems.
    Let’s come to the second question, Yes, individuals always believe about their family. Why do I say so? In some important decision, individuals always ask their parents to give good advice and sometime family decide individuals’s future.
    And finally, what is the positive and negative of this issue. About the positive influence : individuals can have useful advice and experience because family, especially parents, they have lived for a long time so they have good experience and with their advice individuals can widen knowledge. In contrast, peole also have a negative influence : because all of their works have supervision on family so it could be terrible, individuals can not be independent and can not tolerate social problems. Moreover, difference generations have difference thinkings so individuals shouldn’t follow all experience from family.
    In my opinion, family is necessary for development of individuals and have a big influence of family on individuals however it’s also a problem if individuals lean on family.
    New words:
    decision: Quyết định. /dəˈsiZHən/
    supervision: Giám sát /ˌso͞opərˈviZH(ə)n/
    tolerate: bao dung, tha thứ /ˈtäləˌrāt/
     
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    Còn đây là bài của mình hôm nay :33

    Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
    In our daily life, we always communicate information through the media, such as television, radio, film. These media have different advantages and disadvantages for us. Now, I am going to compare the advantages and disadvantages of books, television and film.

    Books bring us different knowledge. It is based on what Book we read. A famous Chinese traditional verse which described books is a treasure. We can find a golden house there. Moreover, when we want to read it, we can find it easy, such as in a bookstore, library. We can also learn a lot of words from books. And it can improve our reading and writing skills.

    However, books always are not attractive for children or youngsters. It is because books are quite boring. A lot of words and less picture inside the books, compare to television, television has pictures and sound, we don’t have to read a lot of words in television. But some artists in television programmes or films, bring a bad image to us. Then some children or youngers will imitate their behaviour. Some films also bring a wrong message to us. For example, they are always smoking in films. It seems that smoking is good and smart. It caused many youngsters to imitate them smoking.

    In conclusion, books, television and film have many advantages and disadvantages. I cannot write all in here. And we have chosen the media carefully.
     
    Nguyễn Phan Ánh Nguyệt thích bài này.
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    Bài viết của bạn còn một số lỗi nhỏ như này, chủ yếu là ở chính tả, cố gắng phát huy nha!!!
    In our daily life, we always communicate information through the media, such as television, radio, film. These media have different advantages and disadvantages for us. Now, I am going to compare the advantages and disadvantages of books, television, and film. Books bring us different knowledge. It is based on what Book we read. A famous Chinese traditional verse which described → that described books is→ as a treasure. We can find a golden house there. Moreover, when we want to read it, we can find it easy, such as in a bookstore, library. We can also learn a lot of words from books. And it can improve our reading and writing skills. However, books always are not attractive for children or youngsters. It is because books are quite boring. A lot of words and less picture→ fewer pictures inside the books, compare→ compared to television, television has pictures and sound, we don’t have to read a lot of words in→ on television. But some artists in television programmes or films, bring a bad image to us. Then some children or youngers will imitate their behaviour→ behavior. Some films also bring a wrong message to us. For example, they are always smoking in films. It seems that smoking is good and smart. It caused many youngsters to imitate them smoking. In conclusion, books, television, and film have many advantages and disadvantages. I cannot write all in here. And we have chosen the media carefully.
     
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