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  1. Nguyễn Phan Ánh Nguyệt

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    Dưới đây là một số topic do của mình và mình sưu tầm được trong các kì thi HSG và Tiếng Anh tài năng. Mọi người cùng tham khảo nha!
    1. Can children and their parents be good friends? Why or why not?
    Have you ever thought that children and their parents can best friends? In my point of view, I think it can. Why do I say that? Today I will tell you the reasons why parents can become best friends of their children.
    First of all, a child can share everything with their parents. If in some cases the child is doing something wrong but they can correct them. It’s a really for child, right? Yes, exactly.
    From past to present, most parents believe that being strict while teaching their children will help their children be more obedient. But not all children are the same, there will be some children who will find ways to resist that rigor and control, otherwise there is no benefit that pushes them further out of their reach.
    It can boost your child's fear. Because the next time you intend to punish your children, ask yourself a simple question - do you want them to be afraid of you? Most likely, your answer will be a zero. The problem is that punishment always creates a relationship based on fear.
    In this relationship, children become anxious about what their parents will do if they notice some inappropriate behavior. Of course, your kids may behave like angels when you are around, but simply out of fear of you, they really can't understand their mistakes. Behind your back, the child will surely act the same again. So instead of scolding the kids, parents can act like friends, by giving the best advice without hurting their kids.
    Moreover, a best friend is a person with whom a child can share everything from sadness to happiness so parents can understand more about their children.
    It is often said that parents are the brightest role models for their children to follow, so you need to be close to your children, the teaching of children will become easy and it also increases the affection in the parent’s relationship with children.
    Otherwise, parents are less close to their children, making the relationship between parents and children become foreign. They don't even know what their children is upset about? Those mothers and fathers are really heartless. Of those reasons some children lack respect for adults, lack of such life skills because parents do not spend time with their children to teach them about that. So it is very important to have close daily conversation with your children when talking together. Everything in the day is shared by children to their best friends. Parents being a best friend can change everything children need. Be a close friend that your children can trust and confide in.
    In short, parents to their children are very important people, who directly teach, must also be their best friends in life. If you are parents, you should stay closer to your children while you can. Don't let it be too late to realize you were wrong by not giving much attention to your children.
     
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    Tada, mình đã trở lại rồi đây. Đây là topic của một chị nhờ mình, đây là bài viết của mình, mọi người tham khảo nha:
    Topic: Nói về khoảng thời gian khó khăn của em trong quá trình học tập về tiếng anh
    Today, the more society develops, more opportunities are opened, but we still see conflicting manifestations. Besides successful people, we see a lot of young people now find it difficult and discouraging. Seeing failure, destroy yourself. Lack of faith, lack of will, living cowardly and collapsed. This is a matter to be condemned. Certainly, everyone in each of us has experienced a period of difficulties in learning. But whether we try to find ways to solve the problem is different, there are people who persistently find the place we are facing the problem and solve it, but there are also people who once failed once gave up, did not do again. If that difficulty persists, it can lead to many other problems such as: being stressed by heavy study can lead to autism, not communicating with people. This will last for a long time, it will make you lack life skills because you have little communication and outdoor activities with everyone. Concerning awareness, we see the will and energy as the human motivation and belief. Is the guideline of man. About the actions we need: train yourself to have a strong will and strong will in study; criticize those who are weak, lack confidence in themselves and in public. Study and follow examples of the will and determination to rise in learning. Since then we dare to live and dare to go to success. In short, willpower is a measure of the dignity of each person. Let us each train to have the best will and energy to live in full success. Live without cowardice and weakness. To do so right now, be yourself with your dreams and aspirations and practice to achieve success! Try to study now, cultivate and educate yourself, not having difficulty is giving up. People often say "Learn, learn more, learn forever" so never stop learning, it will not be beneficial for you.
     
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    Có phải tớ hới cứng nhắc không nhưng mà cho phép tớ sửa một chút nhé ^^
    1. Can children and their parents be good friends? Why or why not?
    Have you ever thought that children and their parents can best friends? In my point of view, I think it can. Why do I say that? Today I will tell you the reasons why parents can become best friends of their children.
    First of all, a child can share everything with their parents. If in some cases the child is doing something wrong but they can correct them. It’s a really => reality for child => the child, right? Yes, exactly.
    From past to present, most parents believe that being strict while teaching their children will help their children be more obedient. But not all children are the same, there will be some children who will find ways to resist that rigor and control, otherwise => otherwise, there is no benefit that pushes them further out of their reach.
    It can boost your child's fear. Because the next time you intend to punish your children, ask yourself a simple question - do you want them to be afraid of you? Most likely, your answer will be a zero. The problem is that punishment always creates a relationship based on fear.
    In this relationship, children become anxious about what their parents will do if they notice some inappropriate behavior. Of course, your kids may behave like angels when you are around, but simply out of fear of you, they really can't understand their mistakes. Behind your back, the child will surely act the same again. So instead of scolding the kids, parents can act like friends, by giving the best advice without hurting their kids.
    Moreover, a best friend is a person with whom a child can share everything from sadness to happiness so parents can understand more about their children.
    It is often said that parents are the brightest role models for their children to follow, so you need to be close to your children, the teaching of children will become easy and it also increases the affection in the parent’s relationship with children.
    Otherwise, parents are less close to their children, making the relationship between parents and children become foreign. They don't even know what their children is => are upset about? Those mothers and fathers are really heartless. Of those reasons => reasons, some children lack respect for adults, lack of => bỏ of such life skills because parents do not spend time with their children to teach them about that. So it is very important to have close daily conversation => conversations with your children when talking together. Everything in the day is shared by children to => with their best friends. Parents being a best friend can change everything children need. Be a close friend that your children can trust and confide in.
    In short, parents to their children are very important people, who directly teach, must also be their best friends in life. If you are parents => parent, you should stay closer to your children while you can. Don't let it be too late to realize you were wrong by not giving much attention to your children.
    Topic: Nói về khoảng thời gian khó khăn của em trong quá trình học tập về tiếng anh
    Today, the more society develops, more => the more opportunities are opened, but we still see conflicting manifestations. Besides successful people, we see a lot of young people now find it difficult and discouraging. Seeing failure, destroy yourself. Lack of faith, lack of will, living cowardly and collapsed. This is a matter to be condemned. Certainly, everyone in each of us has experienced a period of difficulties in learning. But whether we try to find ways to solve the problem is different, there are people who persistently find the place we are facing the problem and solve it, but there are also people who once failed once gave up, did not do again => it again. If that difficulty persists, it can lead to many other problems such as: being stressed by heavy => the heavy study can lead to autism, not communicating with people. This will last for a long time, it will make you lack life skills because you have little communication and outdoor activities with everyone. Concerning awareness, we see the will and energy as the human motivation and belief. Is the guideline of man. About the actions, we need: train yourself to have a strong will and strong will in study=> the study; criticize those who are weak, lack confidence in themselves and in public. Study and follow examples of the will and determination to rise in learning. Since then we dare to live and dare to go to success. In short, willpower is a measure of the dignity of each person. Let us each train to have the best will and energy to live in full success. Live without cowardice and weakness. To do so right now, be yourself with your dreams and aspirations and practice to achieve success! Try to study now, cultivate and educate yourself, not having difficulty is giving up. People often say "Learn, learn more, learn forever" so never stop learning, it will not be beneficial for you.
    Đây là nhận xét chung của mình về các topic cậu viết:
    + Trước hết cậu cần nêu rõ ở topic là viết về 1 essay hay là 1 paragraph.
    + Cậu nên dùng một số liên từ nối vào để đoạn văn có thêm tính liên kết giữa các câu.
    + Về phần ý thì cậu khai triển tốt và cố gắng phát huy nhé ^^
    Fighting :3