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Write a paragraph about the traffic problems where you live.

P/s: Giúp mik với!

 

[minhthu2k5]

I live in Vietnam and there are a lot of traffic problems in big cities in my country. Firstly, there are too many people using the roads especially in the rush hour when people run out to work and school or get home from those places. Secondly, there are too many vehicles on the road that leads to traffic jams. Another problem is that many roads are narrow and bumpy. Fourthly, there are traffic accidents every day so a lot of people lose their lives or are injured. So in order to travel on the roads safely, I think we should obey the traffic rules and traffic signs as well. Moreover, carefulness is very necessary.
Nguồn: Sưu tầm

 

[Nguyễn Như Tuyết]

Write a paragraph about the traffic problems where you live.

P/s: Giúp mik zới.!.

Tầm bao nhiêu chữ? Bạn muốn mình viết nơi nào? Quê bạn hay đất nước?

 

[Nghinh Duyên]

Tầm bao nhiêu chữ? Bạn muốn mình viết nơi nào? Quê bạn hay đất nước?

Hmm.....Tầm cỡ 60-70 thoi..À, quê mình ở QNgãi
Cần nêu vấn đề, nguyên nhân, và hướng giải quyết!!

 

[Nguyễn Như Tuyết]

Hmm.....Tầm cỡ 60-70 thoi..
Cần nêu vấn đề, nguyên nhân, và hướng giải quyết!!

Đây là bài viết về Việt Nam:
Viet Nam is a beatiful country. But it has a lot of trafic problems. Firstly, there are too many people using the roads. Although some roads in Viet Nam are narrow, there are too many types of vehicles as motocycle, bicycle, car,...etc on them. Secondly, some young people drive on the road dangerously. They ride their motorbike very fast and carelessly. So they can make accident for pedestrian and other people.Moreover, they don't respect the traffic rules strictly.Finally, in some poor village, the roads are badly, narrow and swampy. In short, we must respect the traffic rules strictly, use our vehicles carefully and use more public transport as bus. And the president must fix bad roads to reduce the accidents.

 

[minhthu2k5]

there are too much types of vehicles as motocycle, bicycle, car,...etc on them

mình nghĩ nên dùng too many vì types đếm được mà
còn nữa, chỗ the roads are badly âý nên sửa thành bad nhé

 

[Nguyễn Như Tuyết]

mình nghĩ nên dùng too many vì types đếm được mà

types sẽ đúng hơn nhá.

there are too much types of vehicles as motocycle, bicycle, car,...etc on them

Dịch: Có quá nhiều loại phương tiện như là xe máy, xe đạp, ô tô, vâng.. vâng.
Too many đã dùng trước rồi nên không thể dùng thay cho types được.Bỏ cụm types of đi cũng được nhưng mình muốn thêm vào để làm rõ nghĩa hơn và dài hơn (cái này hơi gian lận chữ xí ).

 

[minhthu2k5]

types sẽ đúng hơn nhá.

Dịch: Có quá nhiều loại phương tiện như là xe máy, xe đạp, ô tô, vâng.. vâng.
Too many đã dùng trước rồi nên không thể dùng thay cho types được.Bỏ cụm types of đi cũng được nhưng mình muốn thêm vào để làm rõ nghĩa hơn và dài hơn (cái này hơi gian lận chữ xí ).

có lẽ bạn chưa hiểu ý mình, ý của mình là thay too much thành too many vì types là danh từ đến được

 

[Nguyễn Như Tuyết]

I live in Vietnam and there are a lot of traffic problems in big cities in my country. Firstly, there are too many people using the roads especially in the rush hour when people run out to work and school or get home from those places. Secondly, there are too many vehicles on the road that leads to traffic jams. Another problem is that many roads are narrow and bumpy. Fourthly, there are traffic accidents every day so a lot of people lose their lives or are injured. So in order to travel on the roads safely, I think we should obey the traffic rules and traffic signs as well. Moreover, carefulness is very necessary.

Fourthly nên sửa thành Finally.

 

[minhthu2k5]

Fourthly nên sửa thành Finally.

mình nghĩ viết thế cũng không sao, chỉ cần không sai ngữ pháp là được

 

[LLunaa]

mình không biết nơi bạn sống thế nào nên mình viết nơi mình sống nhé ( không hay lắm đâu)
my hometown has traffic problems every day. Firstly, there are many vehicles and people using the road, so there are usually traffic jams in the rush hour . secondly, some young people ride their electric bikes very fast and they don't wear their helmet. Thirdly, there are many narrow and pumpy roads. It's very dangerous for every one . As a result, there are many accident in my hometown. Everyone should obey the traffic laws so that there will be no more accidents

 

[minhthu2k5]

there are many accident

there are many accidents nha bạn

 

[LLunaa]

there are many accidents nha bạn
obey the traffic rules thì mình nghĩ đúng hơn ấy

mình thấy traffic laws cũng đúng mà

 

[Nguyễn Như Tuyết]

mik không bít nơi bạn sống thế nào nên mik viết nơi mik sống nhé ( ko hay lắm đâu)
my hometown has traffic problems every day. Firstly, there are many vehicles and people using the road, so there are usually traffic jams in the rush hour . secondly, some young people ride their electric bikes very fast and they don't wear their helmet. Thirdly, there are many narrow and pumpy roads. It's very dangerous for every one . As a result, there are many accident in my hometown. Everyone should obey the traffic laws so that there will be no more accidents

everyone=> people. Hay hơn đó.

there are many accidents nha bạn
obey the traffic rules thì mình nghĩ đúng hơn ấy

dùng law cũng được mà. Law đồng nghĩa Rule

 

[Cao Khôi Trần 2k6]

Write a paragraph about the traffic problems where you live.

P/s: Giúp mik zới.!.

Hmm.....Tầm cỡ 60-70 thoi..À, quê mình ở QNgãi
Cần nêu vấn đề, nguyên nhân, và hướng giải quyết!!

Hi bạn mình cũng ở Quảbg Ngãi, mình giúp bạn nà
In my hometown now there are some problems that I dislike. Firstly, there are too many people using roads, so traveling is very hard and it's easy to happen accidents. Secondly, many people have their own and modern vihecles such as motorbike, cars. This lead to the air pollution. Finally, many many young peole ride their bike dangerously. They don't obey traffic rules, so they are easy to make accident happens. In short, as I noted, three bad problems are exiting in my hometown. I hope everh body tries to improve these problems to better my hometown

 

[Tzuyu-chan]

Write a paragraph about the traffic problems where you live.

P/s: Giúp mik với!

Nowaday, traffic problem is the biggest problem that many people care about. In VN, I think the city where have the worst traffic is Ha noi.
The first problem is the traffic jam here. Why? In the rush hours of the day, there're too many people using the road. Last year, in 2013, many bridges was built so it happen less but in order to stop this, a kind of small car should be invented, people should go to works by buses instead of going by motorbikes...
The second one, as you know, the roads in VN is not as big and clean as the roads in the big countries. They're narrow, bumpy and some dirty so it’s really hard for the road users to drive safely. I think we should raise money to make the road in VN better and better.
But everyone knows that Vietnamese people are not respect and don’t follow the traffic rules. That’s the biggest reason for everything. They wear the helmet that not strong enough to keep they safe if the accident may happen, they ride too fast on the small roads… The traffic will never can be improve if they keep doing this.
At the end, I hope the traffic in VN will improve more.
Nguồn: Sưu tầm

 

[Nghinh Duyên]

@minhthu2k5 , @Nguyễn Như Tuyết , @0937104841, @Son Gohan, @Tzuyu-chan
Mình tham khảo bài của các bạn đăng ở phía trên rồi mình làm ra bài riêng dựa trên bài của các bạn. Mong các bạn giúp mình sửa bài để bài mình hoàn chỉnh hơn!!
In my hometown now there are some traffic problems. Firstly, there are too many people using the roads in the rush hour when people get out to work and go to school or get home from those places. Secondly, there are too many types of vehicles as motorbike, bicycle, car,...etc on the road. But the road are very narrow and bumpy, so it's very dangerous for everyone, especially in the rainy season, the roads are easily flooded and become slippery after the rain. We should repair and open more roads. Finally, a lot of young people ride their bike dangerously. They drag and push other road user, so they are easy to make accident happens. In short, in order to travel on the roads more safely, I think we should obey the traffic rules and traffic signs as well. Moreover, carefulness is very necessary.

 

[Nguyễn Như Tuyết]

@minhthu2k5 , @Nguyễn Như Tuyết , @0937104841, @Son Gohan, @Tzuyu-chan
Mình tham khảo bài của các bạn đăng ở phía trên rồi mình làm ra bài riêng dựa trên bài của các bạn. Mong các bạn giúp mình sửa bài để bài mình hoàn chỉnh hơn!!
In my hometown now there are some traffic problems . Firstly, there are too many people using the roads, especially in the rush hour when people get out to work and go to school or get home from those places. Secondly, there are too many types of vehicles as motorbike, bicycle, car,...etc on the road. But the road are very narrow and bumpy, so it's very dangerous for everyone, especially in the rainy season, the roads are easily flooded and become slippery after the rain. Finally, a lot of young people ride their bike dangerously. They drag and push other road user, so they are easy to make accident happens. In short, in order to travel on the roads more safely, I think we should obey the traffic rules and traffic signs as well. Moreover, carefulness is very necessary.

Hình như bạn chỉ copy vài đoạn từ bài của bọn mình thôi mà. Lộn xộn quá không nhỉ. Nhưng thôi kệ. Mình đọc sơ thì không có lỗi rồi đấy

 

[Nghinh Duyên]

Hình như bạn chỉ copy vài đoạn từ bài của bọn mình thôi mà

Hì! Nhưng mình có làm một đoạn đó chứ

 

[Tzuyu-chan]

@minhthu2k5 , @Nguyễn Như Tuyết , @0937104841, @Son Gohan, @Tzuyu-chan
Mình tham khảo bài của các bạn đăng ở phía trên rồi mình làm ra bài riêng dựa trên bài của các bạn. Mong các bạn giúp mình sửa bài để bài mình hoàn chỉnh hơn!!
In my hometown now there are some traffic problems . Firstly, there are too many people using the roads, especially in the rush hour when people get out to work and go to school or get home from those places. Secondly, there are too many types of vehicles as motorbike, bicycle, car,...etc on the road. But the road are very narrow and bumpy, so it's very dangerous for everyone, especially in the rainy season, the roads are easily flooded and become slippery after the rain. Finally, a lot of young people ride their bike dangerously. They drag and push other road user, so they are easy to make accident happens. In short, in order to travel on the roads more safely, I think we should obey the traffic rules and traffic signs as well. Moreover, carefulness is very necessary.

đề hay hơn mình nghĩ bạn nên có câu mở và kết cho bài