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Let me tell you about my close friend. Her name is Trang. She is thirteen year old and she is a student in class 7a5 at THD secondary school. She live with her parents near my house, she is my neighbor. She has long black hair. Her eyes bright so she look lovely. She is a sociable and generous. Bust she is careless and talkative too. We alway share everything eacher other. I also help she with homework. In the weekend, we spend free time to hang out and play badminton. With me, she is the best friend.
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Mọi người xem giúp mình đoạn trên có bị lỗi ngữ pháp hay thiếu ý gì không ạ? Cảm ơn trước nha~

 

[hoangnga2709]

Let me tell you about my close friend. Her name is Trang. She is thirteen year old and she is a student in class 7a5 at THD secondary school. She live with her parents near my house, she is my neighbor. She has long black hair. Her eyes bright so she look lovely. She is a sociable and generous. Bust she is careless and talkative too. We alway share everything eacher other. I also help she with homework. In the weekend, we spend free time to hang out and play badminton. With me, she is the best friend.
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Mọi người xem giúp mình đoạn trên có bị lỗi ngữ pháp hay thiếu ý gì không ạ? Cảm ơn trước nha~

Let me tell you about my close friend. Her name is Trang. She is thirteen year old and she is a student in class 7a5 at THD secondary school. She live with her parents near my house, she is my neighbor. She has long black hair. Her eyes bright so she look lovely. She is a sociable and generous. But she is careless and talkative too. We alway share everything each other. I also help she with homework. In the weekend, we spend free time to hang out and play badminton. With me, she is the best friend.
--->Let me tell you about my close friend. Her name is Trang. She is thirteen years old and she is a student in class 7a5 at THD secondary school. She lives with her parents near my house, she is my neighbor. She has long black hair. Her eyes are bright so she looks lovely. She is sociable and generous. But she is careless and talkative too. We always share everything each other. I also help her with her homework. At the weekend, we spend free time hanging out and playing badminton. With me, she is the best friend.

 

[ngochuyen_74]

She is thirteen year old

phải là years old bn nhé

She live

she lives

house, she is my neighbor

mk nghĩ là nên thêm từ: so, she ismy neighbor

She is a sociable and generous

bỏ từ "a"nhé

Bust she is careless and talkative too

But nhé bn,bn viết nhầm r

We alway share everything eacher other.

each, not eacher

I also help she with homework

I also help her with her homework

In the weekend, we spend free time to hang out and play badminton. With me, she is the best friend.

At the weekend, we spend free time to hang out and play badminton. With me, she is MY best friend

 

[Asuna Yuuki]

Let me tell you about my close friend. Her name is Trang. She is thirteen year old and she is a student in class 7a5 at THD secondary school. She live with her parents near my house, she is my neighbor. She has long black hair. Her eyes bright so she look lovely. She is a sociable and generous. Bust she is careless and talkative too. We alway share everything eacher other. I also help she with homework. In the weekend, we spend free time to hang out and play badminton. With me, she is the best friend.
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Mọi người xem giúp mình đoạn trên có bị lỗi ngữ pháp hay thiếu ý gì không ạ? Cảm ơn trước nha~

Let me tell you about my close friend.
Her name is Trang.
She is thirteen years old and she is a student in class 7a5 at THD secondary school. => Years số nhiều ạ
She lives with her parents near my house, she is my neighbor. => Chia động từ với ngôi thứ 3 số ít
She has long black hair.
Her eyes are bright so she look lovely. => Trước tính từ cần thêm be
She is a sociable and generous girl. => Ở đây cần thêm 1 danh từ chỉ người (Close friend) nha bạn
Bust she is careless and talkative, too. => Có phải sai chính tả không ạ? => But
We alway share everything eacher other. => Alway sửa thành always, eacher sửa thành each
I also help she with homework. => Thêm từ her => I also help her with her homework
In the weekend, we spend free time to hang out and play badminton. => In chuyển thành at
Bạn dùng cấu trúc Spend time + V_ing thì phải sửa thành spend free time hanging out
With me, she is the best friend. => My

 

[Hạ Di]

With me, she is MY best friend

With me, she is the best friend. => My

Với tôi, cô ấy là người bạn tốt nhất. So sánh mà.

 

[ngochuyen_74]

Với tôi, cô ấy là người bạn tốt nhất. So sánh mà.

So sánh chỉ cần best thôi bn, còn bn phải viết là cô ấy là bạn tốt nhất của tôi, phải dùng my