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Some people who have been inprison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of acommiting crime. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
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[Phạm Dương]

Some people who have been inprison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of acommiting crime. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
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@Phạm Dương

- detention given to the criminals is usually followed by training and educations that will be utilized in their future life.
- due to the experiences obtained as long as running punishment, they seem to become suitable speakers to tell the teens about the difficulties that might be faced when living in a prison
- it is the duty of government and the people to identify the aspects of crimes in teenagers
- it is a fact that the public usually has negative images to ex-prisoners, but not all of them have a bad personality
- people who were the part of immoral doings and became good citizens after prison could help teenagers in eradicating this short of sins.

 

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- detention given to the criminals is usually followed by training and educations that will be utilized in their future life.
- due to the experiences obtained as long as running punishment, they seem to become suitable speakers to tell the teens about the difficulties that might be faced when living in a prison
- it is the duty of government and the people to identify the aspects of crimes in teenagers
- it is a fact that the public usually has negative images to ex-prisoners, but not all of them have a bad personality
- people who were the part of immoral doings and became good citizens after prison could help teenagers in eradicating this short of sins.

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