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Write a passage on ways to protect the environment.

Em viết mở đầu như thế này mọi người thấy ổn không? Nếu không ổn mọi người sửa giúp em nhé.

Nowadays, the environment is getting more and more worse.Everyday on the radio, on TV, and in the newspaper, we hear, see or read about this problem, so we must try to find a solution for it

Mọi người giúp em với ạ..

@joon_young#1 @TajSaker @ngchau2001 @Minh Nhí @Tony Time

 

[TajSaker]

Worse đã là dạng so sánh rồi em nên nếu dùng nhấn mạng thì là "getting worse and worse"

Có lẽ anh sẽ viết như sau

Environmental problems have aggravated over the last decades. Population explosion and other problems such as pollution, deforestation, global warming, etc. have all been detrimental to the environment. In order to ensure our children's future, we need to take measures to lessen our impact on nature and aid its recovery.

 

[Chou Chou]

Write a passage on ways to protect the environment.

Em viết mở đầu như thế này mọi người thấy ổn không? Nếu không ổn mọi người sửa giúp em nhé.

Nowadays, the environment is getting more and more worse.Everyday on the radio, on TV, and in the newspaper, we hear, see or read about this problem, so we must try to find a solution for it

Mọi người giúp em với ạ..

@joon_young#1 @TajSaker @ngchau2001 @Minh Nhí @Tony Time

cái chỗ chị in đỏ là sai nhé em! so sánh hơn của bad là worse rồi, nên khi chuyển sang cấu trúc getting / becoming + so sánh hơn thì sẽ là getting worse and worse

Chị có một số mở đầu, em tham khảo nhé!
1. Environmental problems are becoming a global issue. Environmental problems are counter-challenging the quality of life people enjoy in modern advanced societies. So there must be solutions for this problems. In this passage, I will show you some of them.
2. Along with the development of the society, there are an increasing number of issues brought to consideration, one of which is how to approach environmental problems that are threats to people’s quality of life in the modern era. As we know, the environment is becoming worse and worse. And we must find solutions to control this problem.
3. It is true that the economic development may cause the pollution of the environment, especially in industrial countries. Our planet has been affected in a negative way by industrial productions as well as vehicle transportations. For decades, a tremendous amount of toxic has been charged into the environment. There is no doubt that the environmental issues affect life significantly in modern advanced societies. The problem is that solutions for this serious condition must be found.

 

[hoangnga2709]

cái chỗ chị in đỏ là sai nhé em! so sánh hơn của bad là worse rồi, nên khi chuyển sang cấu trúc getting / becoming + so sánh hơn thì sẽ là getting worse and worse

Chị có một số mở đầu, em tham khảo nhé!
1. Environmental problems are becoming a global issue. Environmental problems are counter-challenging the quality of life people enjoy in modern advanced societies. So there must be solutions for this problems. In this passage, I will show you some of them.
2. Along with the development of the society, there are an increasing number of issues brought to consideration, one of which is how to approach environmental problems that are threats to people’s quality of life in the modern era. As we know, the environment is becoming worse and worse. And we must find solutions to control this problem.
3. It is true that the economic development may cause the pollution of the environment, especially in industrial countries. Our planet has been affected in a negative way by industrial productions as well as vehicle transportations. For decades, a tremendous amount of toxic has been charged into the environment. There is no doubt that the environmental issues affect life significantly in modern advanced societies. The problem is that solutions for this serious condition must be found.

Worse đã là dạng so sánh rồi em nên nếu dùng nhấn mạng thì là "getting worse and worse"

Có lẽ anh sẽ viết như sau

Environmental problems have aggravated over the last decades. Population explosion and other problems such as pollution, deforestation, global warming, etc. have all been detrimental to the environment. In order to ensure our children's future, we need to take measures to lessen our impact on nature and aid its recovery.

cho em một vài ý chính ở phần thân được không ạ?
@ngchau2001 @joon_young#1

 

[Chou Chou]

cho em một vài ý chính ở phần thân được không ạ?
@ngchau2001 @joon_young#1

Một vài ý chính, em chọn lọc, thêm thắt để hoàn thành bài tập nhé!

1. We should save drinking water. Water is a precious component of our environment. It should never be wasted.

2. We should never pollute water. Efforts should be made in making significant reduction in both domestic and industrial disposal in water bodies.

3. As far as practicable, the waste products should be recycled to make new items. The domestic and industrial garbage should be segregated as recyclable and non-recyclable before being dumped.

4. There should be a zero tolerance policy towards deforestation. Each one of us can contribute towards saving the environment by planting just one tree every-month.

5. We can make donations to NGOs that are engaged in planting trees, or in any-way working towards saving the environment.

6. Safer environmental friendly car and vehicles should be used. For short distances, people should be encouraged to use bicycle in place of motor based vehicles.

7. The use of environment unfriendly materials such as plastic should be discouraged.

8. Instead of dumping domestic garbage in the pond, lake or river, these should

9. A lot of environmental problems would disappear if we stop using petroleum, coal and natural gas as raw-materials for power generation. The focus should entirely shift on renewable sources of energy. The use of renewable sources of energy (example solar energy) would help saving the environment from global warming.

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