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Each of us has at least a memorable past experience, so I also have one that once I almost had an accident. Before this, I was a rather careless driver because of driving quite quickly, however, this memory happening about 1 year ago taught me a lesson. On a spring afternoon, I went home after visiting my grandparents, I nearly collided with a truck when going past at the crossroads. But luckily, I immediately handled my motorbike in the other direction, therefore, there was no accident occurring in that moment, nobody was injured and my life was finally saved. Now recalling the moment I thought I was going to die, I understand how precious life is. This event definitely taught me to appreciate my life and to be more careful while driving.
 

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Each of us has at least a memorable past (bỏ past đi) experience, so I also have one that once I almost had an accident. Before this, I was a rather careless driver because of driving quite quickly, however, this memory happening about 1 year ago taught me a lesson. On a spring afternoon, I went home after visiting my grandparents, I nearly collided with a truck when going past at the crossroads. But luckily, I immediately handled my motorbike in the other direction, therefore, there was no accident occurring in--->at that moment, nobody was injured and my life was finally saved. Now recalling the moment I thought I was going to die, I understand how precious life is. This event definitely(bỏ definitely đi) taught me to appreciate my life and to be more careful while driving.
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