Ngoại ngữ write a paragraph

maihien150696@gmail.com

Học sinh
Thành viên
9 Tháng một 2016
110
24
36

Phương Trang

Cựu Mod Tiếng Anh
Thành viên
27 Tháng hai 2017
784
1,049
256
Ninh Bình
bạn tham khảo nha :D mình chọn lọc từ internet thôi nên chắc hơi ngắn

Nowadays, the system of university education is still the same as traditional system. It means that most of schools force students to study compulsory subjects. And I strongly disagree with this point because of several reasons.
First of all, I believe that students can be more active in the lessons and interested in studying different subjects. They love the courses which they choose, so that they will work harder and more concentrate. They will study more comfortably. The easier knowledge they get, the longer they remember. Moreover, when they like to study, they will put in themselves more effort and they will be even better in studying to get a best result. Therefore, if the college students have the opportunity of choosing their subjects, they will be more eager to attend their classes. As the result they will get better marks, which is satisfactory both for them as well as for their teachers. Especially, if they are forced to study too many subjects, they are given many homework and class work. It makes students feel tired and pressured. And it leads to drop the subject they have no interest at all. College students know when they need studying many subjects, which is suitable for their own condition.The final and important point is that students know what they are good at, so the students should be given more freedom to choose their own courses. Actually, it is very necessary for students to choose freely their own courses because only they know what they are interested in and what they need.
From my own experience, I know that if I had such an opportunity at college, I would not waste so many hours on learning hated subjects and concern on things that would be useful for me in the future.
Dịch : Ngày nay, hệ thống giáo dục đại học vẫn giống hệ thống truyền thống. Điều này có nghĩa hầu hết các trường buộc học sinh học các môn bắt buộc. Và tôi rất không đồng ý với quan điểm này vì nhiều lý do.
Trước hết, tôi tin rằng học sinh có thể chủ động hơn trong các bài học và quan tâm đến việc học các môn khác nhau. Họ thích các khóa học mà họ chọn, để họ sẽ làm việc chăm chỉ hơn và tập trung hơn. Họ sẽ nghiên cứu thoải mái hơn. Các kiến thức dễ dàng hơn họ nhận được, họ còn nhớ. Hơn nữa, khi họ muốn học, họ sẽ nỗ lực nhiều hơn và sẽ học tập tốt hơn để có kết quả tốt nhất. Do đó, nếu sinh viên đại học có cơ hội lựa chọn môn học của mình, họ sẽ háo hức tham dự lớp học của họ. Kết quả là họ sẽ đạt được những điểm số tốt hơn, điều này cũng thỏa đáng cho cả giáo viên và giáo viên. Đặc biệt, nếu buộc phải học quá nhiều môn học, họ sẽ có nhiều bài tập về nhà và làm việc theo nhóm. Nó làm cho sinh viên cảm thấy mệt mỏi và bị áp lực. Và nó dẫn đến thả chủ đề họ không có lãi suất ở tất cả. Sinh viên đại học biết khi nào họ cần học nhiều môn học, phù hợp với điều kiện của chính họ.Điểm cuối cùng và quan trọng là sinh viên biết mình đang giỏi gì, nên sinh viên nên được tự do lựa chọn các khóa học của mình. Trên thực tế, nó là rất cần thiết cho học sinh để lựa chọn tự do các khóa học riêng của họ bởi vì chỉ có họ biết những gì họ quan tâm và những gì họ cần.
Theo kinh nghiệm của riêng tôi, tôi biết rằng nếu tôi có cơ hội như vậy tại trường đại học, tôi sẽ không lãng phí bao nhiêu giờ để học các chủ đề ghét và quan tâm đến những thứ có ích cho tôi trong tương lai.
:p:D
 

Eddie225

Học sinh chăm học
Thành viên
11 Tháng năm 2017
85
153
51
21
Hà Nội
Life!
bạn tham khảo nha :D mình chọn lọc từ internet thôi nên chắc hơi ngắn

Nowadays, the system of university education is still the same as traditional system. It means that most of schools force students to study compulsory subjects. And I strongly disagree with this point because of several reasons.
First of all, I believe that students can be more active in the lessons and interested in studying different subjects. They love the courses which they choose, so that they will work harder and more concentrate. They will study more comfortably. The easier knowledge they get, the longer they remember. Moreover, when they like to study, they will put in themselves more effort and they will be even better in studying to get a best result. Therefore, if the college students have the opportunity of choosing their subjects, they will be more eager to attend their classes. As the result they will get better marks, which is satisfactory both for them as well as for their teachers. Especially, if they are forced to study too many subjects, they are given many homework and class work. It makes students feel tired and pressured. And it leads to drop the subject they have no interest at all. College students know when they need studying many subjects, which is suitable for their own condition.The final and important point is that students know what they are good at, so the students should be given more freedom to choose their own courses. Actually, it is very necessary for students to choose freely their own courses because only they know what they are interested in and what they need.
From my own experience, I know that if I had such an opportunity at college, I would not waste so many hours on learning hated subjects and concern on things that would be useful for me in the future.
Dịch : Ngày nay, hệ thống giáo dục đại học vẫn giống hệ thống truyền thống. Điều này có nghĩa hầu hết các trường buộc học sinh học các môn bắt buộc. Và tôi rất không đồng ý với quan điểm này vì nhiều lý do.
Trước hết, tôi tin rằng học sinh có thể chủ động hơn trong các bài học và quan tâm đến việc học các môn khác nhau. Họ thích các khóa học mà họ chọn, để họ sẽ làm việc chăm chỉ hơn và tập trung hơn. Họ sẽ nghiên cứu thoải mái hơn. Các kiến thức dễ dàng hơn họ nhận được, họ còn nhớ. Hơn nữa, khi họ muốn học, họ sẽ nỗ lực nhiều hơn và sẽ học tập tốt hơn để có kết quả tốt nhất. Do đó, nếu sinh viên đại học có cơ hội lựa chọn môn học của mình, họ sẽ háo hức tham dự lớp học của họ. Kết quả là họ sẽ đạt được những điểm số tốt hơn, điều này cũng thỏa đáng cho cả giáo viên và giáo viên. Đặc biệt, nếu buộc phải học quá nhiều môn học, họ sẽ có nhiều bài tập về nhà và làm việc theo nhóm. Nó làm cho sinh viên cảm thấy mệt mỏi và bị áp lực. Và nó dẫn đến thả chủ đề họ không có lãi suất ở tất cả. Sinh viên đại học biết khi nào họ cần học nhiều môn học, phù hợp với điều kiện của chính họ.Điểm cuối cùng và quan trọng là sinh viên biết mình đang giỏi gì, nên sinh viên nên được tự do lựa chọn các khóa học của mình. Trên thực tế, nó là rất cần thiết cho học sinh để lựa chọn tự do các khóa học riêng của họ bởi vì chỉ có họ biết những gì họ quan tâm và những gì họ cần.
Theo kinh nghiệm của riêng tôi, tôi biết rằng nếu tôi có cơ hội như vậy tại trường đại học, tôi sẽ không lãng phí bao nhiêu giờ để học các chủ đề ghét và quan tâm đến những thứ có ích cho tôi trong tương lai.
:p:D
Chị, em nghĩ đây là của các anh chị đại học thì phải, nhưng bạn này cần một bài về khỏang Intermediate school vì ởi nc ngoài, lớp 9 đã đc chọn môn học trừ các môn chính thức
 
  • Like
Reactions: Phương Trang
7 Tháng tám 2016
87
130
116
Vĩnh Phúc
Nowadays, the system of university education is still the same as traditional system. It means that most of schools force students to study compulsory subjects. Students complain that they can not choose subjects they are interested in and have to spend much time on doing things that they do not really need. And I strongly disagree with this point because of several reasons. I support for the view that college students should have more freedom to choose their own course.
First of all, I believe that students can be more active in the lessons and interested in studying different subjects. They love the courses which they choose, so that they will work harder and more concentrate. They will study more comfortably. The easier knowledge they get, the longer they remember. Moreover, when they like to study, they will put in themselves more effort and they will be even better in studying to get a best result. Therefore, if the college students have the opportunity of choosing their subjects, they will be more eager to attend their classes. As the result they will get better marks, which is satisfactory both for them as well as for their teachers. Especially, if they are forced to study too many subjects, they are given many homework and class work. It makes students feel tired and pressured. And it leads to drop the subject they have no interest at all. College students know when they need studying many subjects, which is suitable for their own condition.
The final and important point is that students know what they are good at, so the students should be given more freedom to choose their own courses. Actually, it is very necessary for students to choose freely their own courses because only they know what they are interested in and what they need. That is the reason why they will pay more attention to the subjects they are really interested in. from that, they will self-study; they will try their best to seek useful information which involves that courses. It will be foundation and support for their knowledge which they get in the class. Especially, they know what they are good at, so they, of course, have ability to develop their skills. It is really good for their future career. In addition, they are old enough to get more aware that there are also some subjects which can be useful for them in the future and they con choose them as extracurricular. In fact, intelligent students will attend more classes and lectures.
However, they are still some people who think that the school should force the students to study all subjects in form. They think that the students need all-round development. They can discover their interest through different subjects. They can also find out that they perform very well in some subjects which they have not ever thought about. Furthermore, the idea of schooling system makes them more responsible for their learning and they learn to make right decisions. They go to school is for studying not playing. Especially, if students are free to choose their own courses, they will try to choose the nice and kind teachers just like the kindergarteners. The teachers who give them high mark without trying to study. Therefore, they only do all exercises and assignments reluctantly. This is meaningless in studying, so in this side, I find it is necessary for school to force the students to study compulsory subjects.
I totally agree that college students should have freedom to choose their own courses. Nobody knows better than students what is best for them. And if they know how to select subjects and organize flexibly, surely the result will be very high. Of course, the teachers should more severe to make a little bit pressure for the student to study. From my own experience, I know that if I had such an opportunity at college, I would not waste so many hours on learning hated subjects and concern on things that would be useful for me in the future.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Eddie225

Phương Trang

Cựu Mod Tiếng Anh
Thành viên
27 Tháng hai 2017
784
1,049
256
Ninh Bình
Chị, em nghĩ đây là của các anh chị đại học thì phải, nhưng bạn này cần một bài về khỏang Intermediate school vì ởi nc ngoài, lớp 9 đã đc chọn môn học trừ các môn chính thức
uk đúng là thế :p nhưng đề là đồng ý hay không đồng ý về việc tự do lựa chọn môn...vì vậy phải làm đúng nội dung yêu cầu chứ không phân cấp :D chị thấy em đang hiểu lầm thì phải o_O

Nowadays, the system of university education is still the same as traditional system. It means that most of schools force students to study compulsory subjects. Students complain that they can not choose subjects they are interested in and have to spend much time on doing things that they do not really need. And I strongly disagree with this point because of several reasons. I support for the view that college students should have more freedom to choose their own course.
First of all, I believe that students can be more active in the lessons and interested in studying different subjects. They love the courses which they choose, so that they will work harder and more concentrate. They will study more comfortably. The easier knowledge they get, the longer they remember. Moreover, when they like to study, they will put in themselves more effort and they will be even better in studying to get a best result. Therefore, if the college students have the opportunity of choosing their subjects, they will be more eager to attend their classes. As the result they will get better marks, which is satisfactory both for them as well as for their teachers. Especially, if they are forced to study too many subjects, they are given many homework and class work. It makes students feel tired and pressured. And it leads to drop the subject they have no interest at all. College students know when they need studying many subjects, which is suitable for their own condition.
The final and important point is that students know what they are good at, so the students should be given more freedom to choose their own courses. Actually, it is very necessary for students to choose freely their own courses because only they know what they are interested in and what they need. That is the reason why they will pay more attention to the subjects they are really interested in. from that, they will self-study; they will try their best to seek useful information which involves that courses. It will be foundation and support for their knowledge which they get in the class. Especially, they know what they are good at, so they, of course, have ability to develop their skills. It is really good for their future career. In addition, they are old enough to get more aware that there are also some subjects which can be useful for them in the future and they con choose them as extracurricular. In fact, intelligent students will attend more classes and lectures.
However, they are still some people who think that the school should force the students to study all subjects in form. They think that the students need all-round development. They can discover their interest through different subjects. They can also find out that they perform very well in some subjects which they have not ever thought about. Furthermore, the idea of schooling system makes them more responsible for their learning and they learn to make right decisions. They go to school is for studying not playing. Especially, if students are free to choose their own courses, they will try to choose the nice and kind teachers just like the kindergarteners. The teachers who give them high mark without trying to study. Therefore, they only do all exercises and assignments reluctantly. This is meaningless in studying, so in this side, I find it is necessary for school to force the students to study compulsory subjects.
I totally agree that college students should have freedom to choose their own courses. Nobody knows better than students what is best for them. And if they know how to select subjects and organize flexibly, surely the result will be very high. Of course, the teachers should more severe to make a little bit pressure for the student to study. From my own experience, I know that if I had such an opportunity at college, I would not waste so many hours on learning hated subjects and concern on things that would be useful for me in the future.
140 từ thôi mà bạn o_O:D
 
Last edited by a moderator:
  • Like
Reactions: Eddie225
Top Bottom