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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
Characteristics of each choice point :
| Life in the country | Life in a big city |
| Environment | full of nature, good for the health... | constantly changing, noisy, polluted... |
| Lifestyle | relaxing, slow-paced, monotonous... | exciting, fast-paced... |
| Convenience | low prices, automobile society, safer... | many means of transportation, hospitals,
schools, and cultural facilities... |
| Relationship | intimate, warm, strong ties... | dry, individualistic, freer.... |
| People | friendly , carefree, relaxed, conservative... | many strangers, ambitious, progressive.... |
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Introduction : Today children predominantly live in villages and in the countryside, but many others live in big cities. This can be seen in terms of their family, hobbies, interests, and undoubtedly, lifestyle. It is believed that rural children are more skilled than children who live in big cities. This will be proven by analysing of children's lifestyle in both countryside and big city in this essay.
+ Point 1 : It is well-known fact that living in isolated villages can improve children's health, and therefore, their physical development. For instance, if children constantly do house-working and gardening, they will be healthy. This example clearly shows that working hard improves not only health but also diversifies lifestyle. From this, it can be concluded that living in villages accelerates physical developing and improves skills which they need in future life.
+ Point 2 : There is no doubt to say that rural children can adapt and develop in big cities, which are saturated by a variety of places. For example, they can visit and feel a sense of ethnic places, restaurants, stadiums, despite adapting. It is obvious when looking at the example that rural children slowly adapt for boiling city lifestyle. Thus, it would be better to live near big cities.
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Conclusion : After analysing the areas of both lifestyles, it can be concluded that rural children are healthier than children of big cities. As has been shown, skills of rural children based on house-working, albeit village is not an ideal place to develop life skills. It is predicted that children will live in villages in the future.
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