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Topic: Ways to protect environment

The condition of environment is degrading day by day, following are some of the ways in which every person can contribute to some extent in saving the environment:
Grow more Trees
Trees contribute in maintaining the air quality by emitting oxygen and thus reduce the greenhouse effect from the atmosphere. As a result of this, trees save us from extreme weather conditions.
Say No to Plastics
Plastics cause much land pollution and also prove fatal for animals when they swallow polythene bags or pouches. We must stop the use of plastics that is available in the form of bags, and other daily use objects and turn towards better options like jute bags, paper bags, etc. which are eco-friendly as well.
Use Public Transport
The gases coming out of the vehicles by the combustion of fuels are adding to the air pollution even more. Thus, it is better to use public transport to go to work place to reduce pressure on environment.
If everyone of us begin to do our part in saving the environment, the earth will again become the same beautiful and healthy place for living.

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Topic: Ways to protect environment

The condition of environment is degrading day by day, following are some of the ways in which every person can contribute to some extent in saving the environment:
Grow more Trees
Trees contribute in maintaining the air quality by emitting oxygen and thus reduce the greenhouse effect from the atmosphere. As a result of this, trees save us from extreme weather conditions.
Say No to Plastics
Plastics cause much land pollution and also prove fatal for animals when they swallow polythene bags or pouches. We must stop the use of plastics that is available in the form of bags, and other daily use objects and turn towards better options like jute bags, paper bags, etc. which are eco-friendly as well.
Use Public Transport
The gases coming out of the vehicles by the combustion of fuels are adding to the air pollution even more. Thus, it is better to use public transport to go to work place to reduce pressure on environment.
If everyone of us begin to do our part in saving the environment, the earth will again become the same beautiful and healthy place for living.

Mọi người review giúp mk vs ạ
Thank you so much

Mình chỉ chỉnh sửa một vài ý tưởng nhỏ thôi ^^ Nhìn chung bài của bạn đưa ra những ý tưởng phù hợp với yêu cầu đề bài, đảm bảo tính liên kết. Để bài của bạn hay hơn, bạn cần có nhiều ý tưởng hơn. Bạn cũng có thể liên hệ phần chương trình cơ bản của lớp 8 Unit 10 bài Recycling, lớp 9 Unit 6 và một số bài ở chương trình mới (Tại vì mình không học chương trình mới nên không biết có bài nào)
The condition of the environment is degrading day by day, following are some of the ways in which every person can contribute to some extent in saving the environment:
Grow more Trees
Trees contribute to maintaining the air quality by taking in carbon dioxide, which is the main cause of the greenhouse effect, for photosynthesis and releasing oxygen as one of the products into the air. As a result, trees save us from extreme weather conditions.[How will you grow trees?]
Say No to Plastics
Plastics causes land pollution and it also destroys animals when they swallow polythene bags or pouches. We must stop the use of plastics that is available in the form of bags, toys, and other daily use objects and think of better options like jute bags or paper bags, clay toys, etc. , which are eco-friendly.
Use Public Transport
The gases coming out of the vehicles by the combustion of fuels are adding to the air pollution even more. Thus, it is better for us to use public transport to reduce pressure on the environment when going to workplaces.
Recycle
Recycling products is the best way to reuse objects in different ways. It is the process of turning waste material into new and usable ones. By recycling, we can use the same object all over again in different forms and as a result, the production of materials like plastics could be lowered down.
If everyone begins to do our parts in order to save the environment, the earth will become the same beautiful and healthy place for living again.

 

[Phạm Dương]

The condition of the environment is degrading day by day, following are some of the ways in which every person can contribute to some extent in saving the environment:
Grow more Trees
Trees contribute to maintaining the air quality by emitting oxygen (cung cấp cái này để làm gì?) and thus reduce the greenhouse effect from the atmosphere. As a result of this, trees save us from extreme weather conditions.
Say No to Plastics
Plastics causes much land pollution and also proves fatal for animals when they swallow polythene bags or pouches. We must stop the use of plastics that is available in the form of bags, and other daily use objects and turn towards better options like jute bags, paper bags, etc. which are eco-friendly as well.
Use Public Transport
The gases coming out of the vehicles by the combustion of fuels are adding to the air pollution even more. Thus, it is better to use public transport to go to the workplace to reduce pressure on the environment. (chị thì không thích luận điểm này cho lắm vì nó thiếu thực tế, trừ khi nước ta có 1 cơ sở tốt cho các phương tiện giao thông công cộng này thì người dân mới lựa chọn nó là phương tiện chính. Thay vào đó em có thể thay luận điểm này bằng việc "Phân loại rác thải đúng quy định" như vậy tiết kiệm được thời gian, chi phí phân loại rác, dễ dàng tái chế và xử lí hơn)
If every one of us begin to do our part in saving the environment, the earth will again become the same beautiful and healthy place for living.