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1New york city,which is one of the largest cities in the world,is larger than any other

cities in the United States .
2 It is their nearly perfect crystal structure that gives diamonds their hardness ,brilliance and transparent .
3Needles are simple-looking tools ,but they are very relatively difiicult to make .
4Ducks are less susceptible to infection than another types of poultry .
5 The techniques of science and magic are quite different ,but their aims -to understand and control nature -they are very similar .
6The fossil remains of much extinct mammals have been found in the tar pits in Los Angelesmong cac ban giup minh .Minh la thanh vien moi nen khong bit ai .ban co the gioi thieu ve ban cho minh bit duoc hong .


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[maxqn]

1New york city,which is one of the largest cities in the world,is larger than any other

cities in the United States .
2 It is their nearly perfect crystal structure that gives diamonds their hardness ,brilliance and transparent .
3Needles are simple-looking tools ,but they are very relatively difiicult to make .
4Ducks are less susceptible to infection than another types of poultry .
5 The techniques of science and magic are quite different ,but their aims -to understand and control nature -they are very similar .
6The fossil remains of much extinct mammals have been found in the tar pits in Los Angelesmong cac ban giup minh .Minh la thanh vien moi nen khong bit ai .ban co the gioi thieu ve ban cho minh bit duoc hong .

1- cities --> city
2- transparent --> transparency
3- very relatively --> very/ relatively
4- another --> other
5- they --> X
6- much ---> many

 

[jasonnguyen0305]

1New york city,which is one of the largest cities in the world,is larger than any other

cities in the United States .
=> city ( any other = bất cứ 1... nào khác, ko đc dùng số nhìu )
2 It is their nearly perfect crystal structure that gives diamonds their hardness ,brilliance and transparent .
=> transparency ( vị trí này cần 1 noun chứ ko cần 1 adj )
3Needles are simple-looking tools ,but they are very relatively difiicult to make .
=> bỏ 1 trong very/relatively, trc adj chỉ cần 1 adv là đủ ( rất/tương đối )
4Ducks are less susceptible to infection than another types of poultry .
=> other ( types là số nhìu )
5 The techniques of science and magic are quite different ,but their aims -to understand and control nature -they are very similar .
=> bỏ they ( nếu có "they" thì làm mệnh đề "but their aims..." thiếu vị ngữ => vô nghĩa , lại sai ngữ pháp nữa chứ ^^)
6The fossil remains of much extinct mammals have been found in the tar pits in Los Angeles
=> many ( mammals là countable noun - có thể đếm dc ^^ )
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