[Tiếng Anh]- Thi thố tài năng nào!

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moxa

Hi everyone!Like everybody,I love my teachers very much.They taught me many useful things.Theirlove for me is unlimited.I don't know what I should do to the temple on them?But I make sure that I will learn so hard ,gift them some flowers and say:"I love you very much".I can say that they are the best people on the world.They are like my parents.What about your's teacher.I think that they love you like mine.Bye
Tớ không chắc nhưng theo tớ thì cậu sai những lỗi đó.
 
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believe_in_rose296

Đấy chị tổ chức cuộc thi này mà có ai hưởng ứng đâu –> chứng tỏ ko có ai muốn học nhóm học online hả?
 
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123konica

My dear teacher,
I was going ahead, in the darkness, unguided, without destination. It was then that I found you. You showed me how wrongly I had been directed. You explained me why I myself was the only one to redirect me. You told me what are necessary and what aren't. Amazingly I found out that almost everything I had been taught was destroying my future. Disappointedly I discovered that my way was absolutely wrong. Fearlessly, then, I turned my life over a new leaf with your being along.
It was you that pointed me what should be done. You lighted in me the flame of thirst for knowledge. You warned me when I was on the verge of being indifferent to everything. You indicated that it is my generation's mission to change the world. My only way is to study hard, that's what I've learned from you.
More than a tutor, it is a lighter that you mean to me. I never say thanks to you because words aren't enough to express how I feel for you. Simple things are not easy to recognize or remember; neither are they to forget. You are a simple but invaluable gift that I was presented. I wish you best on Vietnamese Teacher Day.

:x:x:x


P/S: đề nghị các đồng chí bên trên nhìn lại cái tên topic nhé. Sao lại lôi chuyện học nhóm ra nói ở đây nhỉ? :->
 
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mrs.english

123konica said:
My dear teacher,
I was going ahead, in the darkness, unguided, without destination. It was then that I found you. You showed me how wrongly I had been directed. You explained me why I myself was the only one to redirect me. You told me what are necessary and what aren't. Amazingly I found out that almost everything I had been taught was destroying my future. Disappointedly I discovered that my way was absolutely wrong. Fearlessly, then, I turned my life over a new leaf with your being along.
It was you that pointed me what should be done. You lighted in me the flame of thirst for knowledge. You warned me when I was on the verge of being indifferent to everything. You indicated that it is my generation's mission to change the world. My only way is to study hard, that's what I've learned from you.
More than a tutor, it is a lighter that you mean to me. I never say thanks to you because words aren't enough to express how I feel for you. Simple things are not easy to recognize or remember; neither are they to forget. You are a simple but invaluable gift that I was presented. I wish you best on Vietnamese Teacher Day.
Bấm để xem đầy đủ nội dung ...
Không biết có phải sai ở đó không nhỉ?Ở trên có rất nhiều từ em chưa biết @-) .
 
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kimthuyhp

em cũng nghĩ chỗ đó phải lùi thì
" Cô đã chỉ cho em biết điều gì là cần thiết và điều gì ko"
Đâu có cái j` đc gọi là quy luật, là luôn luôn đúng đâu ạ ^^, chỉ đơn giản là chị thuật lại rằng cô đã nói j` với chị thui ma` :)
 
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123konica

kimthuyhp said:
em cũng nghĩ chỗ đó phải lùi thì
" Cô đã chỉ cho em biết điều gì là cần thiết và điều gì ko"
Đâu có cái j` đc gọi là quy luật, là luôn luôn đúng đâu ạ ^^, chỉ đơn giản là chị thuật lại rằng cô đã nói j` với chị thui ma` :)
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Ý chị là những cái necessary và unnecessary ấy đến bây giờ vẫn đúng, cho nên dùng thì hiện tại ở đây ko vấn đề gì. :D
Với lại, thầy nhé, ko phải cô đâu. :p
Thầy chị đặc biệt lắm. :x
 
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amaranth

Hóng hớt tí, "you explained me" <~ lỗi nè :D.
Viết được đó, grammar chấp nhận được, chỉ có writing style thì không perfectly academic thôi, nhưng nói chung cũng ok; diễn ý khá Việt Nam, nhưng cũng có cố gắng chen vào những cụm từ tiếng Anh quen thuộc; cấu trúc không cầu kỳ, khá gãy gọn, tuy có chỗ còn hơi bị nhàm :D.

Nhân tiện, câu này dùng formal subject không đúng này: "it is a lighter that you mean to me".
 
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amaranth

The teacher I remember the most may not have a clue at all about whether I once were his student if we happen to meet on the street one day. To me has he never expressed his love, concern, or even respect, not to mention that he did seem biased and treat me unfairly. During one of his lectures, he was about to change the topic when I asked for permission to speak and when granted, tried to tell my classmates a grammar point I thought they might find interesting. He interrupted right after my introduction and underestimated my idea in front of the class; he even found faults with me for some trivial things afterwards. Perhaps this was the most important lesson I learned from him: never shall I show people what I know unless I need so to get things done. Competition is everywhere; weapons are what we never share. I didn't have a chance to let him know how thoroughly I had understood his implication, and perhaps he doesn't want me to show that I understand, either. I owe you a thank-you, Mr. Writing.

(Không đếm, nhưng chắc là đủ chữ)
 
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believe_in_rose296

trùi ui, chị có bảo gì đâu. Comment nhiều thế là tốt, giúp bạn tiến bộ mà. Nè, chị ko ngại nói luôn, Am giỏi thiệt đấy. Hoá ra Anh văn chỉ là phụ, lập trình mới là chuyên môn hả? Bao giờ về Việt Nam hả em? alo chị em mình gặp nhau.
 
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