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quangkhai2811

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Ai chữa lỗi giúp mình các bài văn sau với:
* Bài về kì nghỉ hè:
I am planning my summer vacation. I am going to visit three cities this summer vacation. First, I am going to víit Ha Long Bay. I am going to stay a hotel for two days. Then, I am going to visit Ha Noi for a week. When I come there, I am going to visit Ngoc Son Temple, West Lake and The Huc Bridge. I am going to take some photos of them. Finally, I am going to visit Nha Trang for two days. When I come there, I am going to have sunbath on beatiful sandy beach in Nha Trang. I am going to return home by bus. I thinhk, it is a summer vacation happy.
*Bài về kì nghỉ cuối tuần:
I am planning my weekend. On Saturday morning, I am going to watch Cartoon Network- my favorite channel on the television. On Saturday afternoon, I am going to play badminton with my family or my friends. On Saturday evening, I am going to listen to baroque or pop music. On Sunday morning, I am going to read Saigon Times Newspaper. On Sunday afternoon, I am going to go swimming in a pool near my house. On Sunday evening, I am going to do my homework. That's a paragraph about my plan for this weekend.
 
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nkockute02

quangkhai2811 said:
Ai chữa lỗi giúp mình các bài văn sau với:
* Bài về kì nghỉ hè:
I am planning my summer vacation. I am going to visit three cities this summer vacation. First, I am going to visit Ha Long Bay. I am going to stay a hotel for two days. Then, I am going to visit Ha Noi for a week. When I come there, I am going to visit Ngoc Son Temple, West Lake and The Huc Bridge. I am going to take some photos of them. Finally, I am going to visit Nha Trang for two days. I am going to have sunbath on beautiful sandy beach in Nha Trang. I am going to return home by bus. I think, it is a summer vacation happy.
*Bài về kì nghỉ cuối tuần:
I am planning my weekend. On Saturday morning, I am going to watch Cartoon Network- my favorite channel on the television. In the afternoon, I am going to play badminton with my family or my friends. In the evening, I am going to listen to baroque or pop music. On Sunday morning, I am going to read Saigon Times Newspaper. On Sunday afternoon, I am going to go swimming in a pool near my house. On Sunday evening, I am going to do my homework. That's a paragraph about my plan for this weekend.
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* Bài về kì nghỉ hè:
I am planning my summer vacation. I am going to visit three cities this summer vacation. First, I am going to visit Ha Long Bay. I am going to stay a hotel for two days. Then, I am going to visit Ha Noi for a week. When I come there, I am going to visit Ngoc Son Temple, West Lake and The Huc Bridge. I am going to take some photos of them. Finally, I am going to visit Nha Trang for two days. When I come there, I am going to have sunbath on beatiful sandy beach in Nha Trang. I am going to return home by bus. I think, it is a summer vacation happy.
+Mình thấy bạn sai 1 số lỗi chính tả. Bạn nên thay từ hoặc xóa đi một số câu When I come there vì nếu viết quá nhiều sẽ gây nhàm chán. Còn câu cuối mình nghĩ bạn nên viết : I think:"It is a happy summer vacation." (adj + noun) ~ one_day ~

*Bài về kì nghỉ cuối tuần:


I am planning my weekend. On Saturday morning, I am going to watch Cartoon Network- my favorite channel on the television. On Saturday afternoon, I am going to play badminton with my family or my friends. On Saturday evening, I am going to listen to baroque or pop music. On Sunday morning, I am going to read Saigon Times Newspaper. On Sunday afternoon, I am going to go swimming in a pool near my house. On Sunday evening, I am going to do my homework. That's a paragraph about my plan for this weekend.

Mình nghĩ trong câu "I am going to play badminton with my family or my friends" Bạn nên thay "or" thành "and" hoặc từ gần giống nghĩ với "and". Vì khi lên một kế hoạch thì chắc chắn nó sẽ có thật (cô mình nói thế) nên không nên dùng or như trong câu "listen to baroque or pop music."
 
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