Ngoại ngữ The festival school

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This report shows how the festival was held. The festival was held in the school in the school yard. There were two competitions: flower- arranging and music- performing. The festival took one day.
In the flower- arranging contest, three people from each team had to run to the flower garden of Mr. Cuongand must buy some flowers. They were very fresh and beautiful colorfuland there are many different kind of flowers. After, two representatives each team arranged that flowers.
In the music- performing contest, nine people each team took part in and performed a item.They could sing or dance of perform a play, etc. Most teams dances and especial, the class 9a sang an English song about the teacher.
After two contest, all the points were added and the class 9a won the grand prize. All the students of class 9a were happy. Finally, all the teachers and the students in my school took a nice photo. The festival was wonderful and all of us will miss forever.

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This report shows how the festival was held. The festival was held in the school in the school yard. There were two competitions: flower- arranging and music- performing. The festival took one day.
In the flower- arranging contest, three people from each team had to run to the flower garden of Mr. Cuong and must buy some flowers. They were very fresh and beautiful colorful and there are many different kinds of flowers. After, two representatives of each team arranged that flowers.
In the music- performing contest, nine people each team took part in and performed a item.They could sing or dance of perform a play, etc. Most teams dances and especially, the class 9a sang an English song about the teacher.
After two contest, all the points were added and the class 9a won the grand prize. All the students of class 9a were happy. Finally, all the teachers and the students in my school took a nice photo. The festival was wonderful and all of us will miss forever.

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