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Tram Chim National Park is an eco-tourist area known as a "green island" with a typical natural landscape of the submerged region of Dong Thap Muoi which is in the Mekong Delta province of Dong Thap. When you visit there, you can see nearly 200 species of water birds which account for about a quarter of the birds in Vietnam. Among them, the most well-known are the red-headed cranes, one of 15 endangered species of cranes in the world. In addion, if you visit during the time of day when the highest tides occur, you can take a motorboat ride through forests rich with plants and flowers and green cajeput trees. It is very wonderful, right? Reveal a bit, from late December to early May, flocks of cranes return to Tram Chim to live after migrating to evade the floods, that’s the best time to visit Tram Chim National Park.

 

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Tram Chim National Park is an eco-tourist area known as a "green island" with a typical natural landscape of the submerged region of Dong Thap Muoi which is in the Mekong Delta province of Dong Thap. When you visit there, you can see nearly 200 species of water birds which account for about a quarter of the birds in Vietnam. Among them, the most well-known are the red-headed cranes, one of 15 endangered species of cranes in the world. In addion, if you visit during the time of day when the highest tides occur, you can take a motorboat ride through forests rich with plants and flowers and green cajeput trees. It is very wonderful, right? Reveal a bit, from late December to early May, flocks of cranes return to Tram Chim to live after migrating to evade the floods, that’s the best time to visit Tram Chim National Park.

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