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Topic: Write a paragraph (50-60 words) about the compertion you have jioned or seen.

Dance Off Your Fat is a reality television program aired on VTV3 at 9:00 pm on Sunday night every week. It was organized by Dong Tay Promotion Company. The competition is a combination of dancing and weight-loss process of the contestants have oversized body. Champion of the first season is Nguyen Ngoc Son who passed 11 other contestants to win with the prize is 500 million VNĐ. I tracked weight-loss process of the contestants through each week which made me very excited and I want to join it.
 

Yun KM

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Topic: Write a paragraph (50-60 words) about the compertion you have jioned or seen.

Dance Off Your Fat is a reality television program aired on VTV3 at 9:00 pm on Sunday night every week. It was organized by Dong Tay Promotion Company. The competition is a combination of dancing and weight-loss process of the contestants have oversized body. Champion of the first season is Nguyen Ngoc Son who passed 11 other contestants to win with the prize is 500 million VNĐ. I tracked weight-loss process of the contestants through each week which made me very excited and I want to join it.
- the weight-loss process
- an oversized body
 

TajSaker

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Dance Off Your Fat is a reality television program aired on VTV3 at 9:00 pm on Sunday night every week. It was(is) organized by Dong Tay Promotion Company. The competition is a combination of dancing and weight-loss process of the(bỏ) contestants with oversized body. Champion of the first season is Nguyen Ngoc Son who passed 11 other contestants to win with(bỏ) the prize is(of) 500 million VNĐ. I followed the weight-loss process of the contestants through each week and that made me very excited and I(bỏ) want to join it(bỏ).
 

Trần Hồng Quân

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Dance Off Your Fat is a realistic television program aired on VTV3 at 9:00 pm on Sunday night every week. It was organized by Dong Tay Promotion Company. The competition is a combination of dancing and weight-loss process of the contestants who have oversized bodies. Champion of the first season is Nguyen Ngoc Son who passed 11 other contestants to win with the prize is 500 million VNĐ. I tracked weight-loss process of the contestants through each week which made me very excited and I want to join it.​
 

Narumi04

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Topic: Write a paragraph (50-60 words) about the competition you have joined or seen.

Dance Off Your Fat is a reality television program aired on VTV3 at 9:00 pm on Sunday night every week. It was organized by Dong Tay Promotion Company. The competition is a combination of dancing and weight-loss process of the contestants have oversized body. Champion of the first season is Nguyen Ngoc Son who passed 11 other contestants to win with the prize is 500 million VNĐ. I tracked weight-loss process of the contestants through each week which made me very excited and I want to join it.
Dance Off Your Fat is a reality television program aired on VTV3 at 9:00 pm on Sunday night every week. It was organized by Dong Tay Promotion Company. The competition is a combination of dancing and the weight-loss process of the contestants have an oversized body. Champion of the first season is Nguyen Ngoc Son who passed 11 other contestants to win with the prize is 500 million VNĐ. I tracked the weight-loss process of the contestants through each week which made me very excited and I want to join it.
 
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