English 11 Sửa bài đối thoại

Thảo luận trong 'Hỏi bài tiếng Anh lớp 11' bắt đầu bởi moon suvik, 28 Tháng mười một 2019.

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  1. moon suvik

    moon suvik Học sinh Thành viên

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    Sở hữu bí kíp ĐỖ ĐẠI HỌC ít nhất 24đ - Đặt chỗ ngay!

    Đọc sách & cùng chia sẻ cảm nhận về sách số 2


    Chào bạn mới. Bạn hãy đăng nhập và hỗ trợ thành viên môn học bạn học tốt. Cộng đồng sẽ hỗ trợ bạn CHÂN THÀNH khi bạn cần trợ giúp. Đừng chỉ nghĩ cho riêng mình. Hãy cho đi để cuộc sống này ý nghĩa hơn bạn nhé. Yêu thương!

    mình lớp 11 nhưng trình độ kém, viết 2 bài đối thoại để tuần sau nói với bạn, mọi người giúp mình nhé :D:D:D
    bài 1: Describing a person
    A: hey B. where are you going?
    B: I visit the bookstore to buy some books there.
    A: Uhm...i want to ask you a question. Do you free in tonight?
    B: Yes, i do. What's up?
    A: Uhm... I want o invite you go to my home to have dinner ! Do you want to come ?
    B: Yes, i want. So, when the dinner begin?
    A: At 7 p.m and there are 4 people in the dinner !
    B: Who are they ?
    A: Trong, you, Lan and Me.
    B: I know your friend Trong, but, who is Lan ?
    A: This is a new friend, I met her 3 years ago.
    B: Oh, what does she like ?
    A: She's friendly, cute and outgoing. But, sometimes, she's crazzy !
    B: Really !!! Sounds interesting !
    A: Yes, DO you want to meet her ?
    B: Sure, and what does she look like ?
    A: She's got long blond hair, while completion, tall and thin. Unless she has a big eyes. I think she really pretty !
    B: Wow, i think i really want to meet her !
    A: Yeah, and... Oh,no sorry, i go to the bookstore, see you later !
    B: bye !!!


    Bài 2: Talking about a party. Or how to plan a party.
    A: Hi B. How's it going ? You're looking well !
    B: Hi A. Thanks. Yeah, things are pretty good. How about you.
    A: Uhm... Listen I'm going to have a party this Sunday. Would you like to come?
    B: I'd love to, so, What time does it start ?
    A: It starts at 9:30 a.m, Do you want to come with me ?
    B: Thanks, but i will go to the party alone. And whose party was it ?
    A: It's Trong, That day is his birthday. And i will help him decorated for the party !
    B: Sounds great !!! I will help, too.
    A: Thank you, Do you know make cake ? We need a person know make cake !!!
    B: Oh yes, I know, I will make the flan ! And , who else is going to be there ?
    A: I think everybody in class.
    B: So, What does the party include ?
    A: I think the party have a DJ, foods, drinks, games, flowers and anything. I think so !
    B: Wow, It's interesting !
    A: Yes, and see you at the party, Goodbye !
    B: Bye.

    giúp mình sửa ngữ pháp luôn nha !!! :Rabbit55:Rabbit55:Rabbit55
     
  2. Bắpie Kute

    Bắpie Kute Học sinh chăm học Thành viên

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    bài 1: Describing a person
    A: hey B. where are you going?
    B: I going to the bookstore to buy some books there.
    A: Uhm...i want to ask you a question. Do you free in tonight?
    B: Yes, i do. What's up?
    A: Uhm... I want to invite you to my house for dinner ! Do you want to come ?
    B: Yes, i do. So, when will the dinner begin?
    A: At 7 p.m and there are 4 people in the dinner !
    B: Who are they ?
    A: Trong, you, Lan and Me.
    B: I know your friend Trong, but, who is Lan ?
    A: This is a new friend, I met her 3 years ago.
    B: Oh, what does she like ?
    A: She's friendly, cute and outgoing. But, sometimes, she's crazy !
    B: Really !!! Sounds interesting !
    A: Yes, DO you want to meet her ?
    B: Sure, and what does she look like ?
    A: She's got long blond hair, while completion, tall and thin. Unless she has a big eyes. I think she really pretty !
    B: Wow, i think i really want to meet her !
    A: Yeah, and... Oh,no sorry, i go to the bookstore, see you later !
    B: bye !!!

    Bài 2: Talking about a party. Or how to plan a party.
    A: Hi B. How's it going ? You're looking well !
    B: Hi A. Thanks. Yeah, things are pretty good. How about you?
    A: Uhm... Listen I'm going to have a party this Sunday. Would you like to come?
    B: I'd love to, so, What time does it start ?
    A: It starts at 9:30 a.m, Do you want to come with me ?
    B: Thanks, but i will go to the party alone. And whose party was it ?
    A: It's Trong, That day is his birthday. And i will help him decorate for the party !
    B: Sounds great !!! I will help, too.
    A: Thank you, Do you know how to make cake ? We need a baker !!!
    B: Oh yes, I know, I will make the flan ! And , who else is going to be there ?
    A: I think everybody in class.
    B: So, What does the party include ?
    A: I think the party have a DJ, foods, drinks, games, flowers and anything. I think so !
    B: Wow, It's interesting !
    A: Yes, and see you at the party, Goodbye !
    B: Bye.

    Những chỗ mình tô đậm và gạch chân là mình sửa cho bạn nhé! ^^
     
  3. Bella Dodo

    Bella Dodo Học sinh Thành viên

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    Bạn tham khảo ^^

    Bài 1: Describing a person

    A: Hey B. where are you going?
    B: I visit am visting/going to the bookstore to buy some books there.
    A: Uhm...i want to ask you a question. Do Are you free in tonight?
    B: Yes, i do am. What's up?
    A: Uhm... I want o (lỗi type ^^) invite you go to my home to have dinner ! Do you want to come ?
    B: Yes, i want do. So, when the dinner begins?
    A: At 7 p.m and there are 2 other people coming too/ there are 4 people including you and me !
    B: Who are they ?
    A: Trong, you, Lan and Me.
    B: I know your friend Trong, but, who is Lan ?
    A: This is a my new friend, I met her 3 years ago.
    B: Oh, what does she like ?
    A: She's friendly, cute and outgoing. But, sometimes, she's crazzy !
    B: Really !!! Sounds interesting !
    A: Yes, DO you want to meet her ?
    B: Sure, and what does she look like ?
    A: She's got long blond hair, while completion, tall and thin. Unless she has a other than her big eyes, I think she’s really pretty !
    B: Wow, i think i really want to meet her !
    A: Yeah, and... Oh,no sorry, i have to go to the bookstore, see you later !
    B: bye !!!


    Bài 2: Talking about a party. Or how to plan a party.
    A: Hi B. How's it going ? You're looking well !
    B: Hi A. Thanks. Yeah, things are pretty good. How about you.
    A: Uhm... Listen, I'm going to have a party this Sunday. Would you like to come?
    B: I'd love to, so, What time does it start ?
    A: It starts at 9:30 a.m, Do you want to come with me ?
    B: Thanks, but i will go to the party by myself. And whose party was it ?
    A: It's Trong, it’s his birthday. And i will help him decorated for the party !
    B: Sounds great !!! I will help, too.
    A: Thank you, Do you know make how to bake a cake ? We need a person who knows how to make cakes/bakers !!!
    B: Oh yes, I know, I will make the flans ! And , who else is going to be there ?
    A: I think everybody in the class.
    B: So, What does the party include ?
    A: I think the party will have a DJ, foods, drinks, games, flowers and anything. I think so !
    B: Wow, It's interesting !
    A: Yes, and see you at the party, Goodbye !
    B: Bye.
    Mình sửa hơi kỹ, nếu bạn thấy lỗi sai của mình, ib mình nha ^^
    Bella
     
    Last edited: 28 Tháng mười một 2019
    moon suvik thích bài này.
  4. Bắpie Kute

    Bắpie Kute Học sinh chăm học Thành viên

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    Không có gì! Mình nhỏ tuổi hơn bạn đấy, nhưng theo mình thì cách viết của bạn hơi bị "cứng", tuy màn đối thoại của bạn lớp 11 lận nhưng mình vẫn hiểu. Mình nghĩ là bạn nên đọc nhiều sách tiếng Anh hon để nâng cao vốn từ vựng, bài viết của bạn sẽ phong phú hơn!
     
  5. moon suvik

    moon suvik Học sinh Thành viên

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    mình sẽ làm thử
     
  6. Phạm Dương

    Phạm Dương Cố vấn tiếng Anh Cố vấn chuyên môn

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    bài 1: Describing a person
    A: hey B. where are you going?
    B: I visit the bookstore to buy some books there.
    A: Uhm...i want to ask you a question. Do you free in tonight?
    B: Yes, I do. What's up?
    A: Uhm... I want to invite you to go to my home to have dinner! Do you want to come?
    B: Yes, I want. So, when the dinner begin?
    A: At 7 p.m and there are 4 people at the dinner!
    B: Who are they?
    A: Trong, you, Lan and Me.
    B: I know your friend Trong, but who is Lan?
    A: This is a new friend, I met her 3 years ago.
    B: Oh, what does she like?
    A: She's friendly, cute and outgoing. But, sometimes, she's crazy!
    B: Really !!! Sounds interesting!
    A: Yes, DO you want to meet her?
    B: Sure, and what does she look like?
    A: She's got long blond hair, while completion, tall and thin. Unless she has a big eyes, I think she really pretty!
    B: Wow, I think I really want to meet her!
    A: Yeah, and... Oh, no sorry, I go to the bookstore, see you later!
    B: bye !!!


    Bài 2: Talking about a party. Or how to plan a party.
    A: Hi B. How's it going? You're looking well!
    B: Hi A. Thanks. Yeah, things are pretty good. How about you.
    A: Uhm... Listen I'm going to have a party this Sunday. Would you like to come?
    B: I'd love to, so, What time does it start?
    A: It starts at 9:30 a.m, Do you want to come with me?
    B: Thanks, but I will go to the party alone. And whose party was it?
    A: It's Trong, That day is his birthday. And I will help him decorate for the party!
    B: Sounds great !!! I will help, too.
    A: Thank you, Do you know to make the cake? We need a person to know to make cake !!!
    B: Oh yes, I know, I will make the flan! And, who else is going to be there?
    A: I think everybody in the class.
    B: So, What does the party include?
    A: I think the party have a DJ, foods, drinks, games, flowers and anything. I think so!
    B: Wow, It's fascinating!
    A: Yes, and see you at the party, Goodbye!
    B: Bye.

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    chú ý các giới từ em nhé
     
    Bella Dodo thích bài này.
  7. moon suvik

    moon suvik Học sinh Thành viên

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    :Rabbit25
    dạ
     
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