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The first chart below shows hoe energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The first chart shows six energy-related categories utilized by a typical Australian household, while the second one reveals the equivalent proportion of greenhouse gas emissions generated.

Despite the fact that heating consumes the bulk of energy, water heating is the leading source of greenhouse gas emissions.

Heating and water heating contribute for 42 and 30 percent of overall energy consumption, respectively. Another 15% is consumed by other appliances, which is almost twice as much as the energy used for refrigeration. Lighting and cooling use fairly little energy, accounting for about 4% and 2% of total energy consumption, correspondingly.

Water heating, on the other hand, accounts for a significant share of greenhouse gas emissions, accounting for 32% of the total. It's also worthly noticeable that, despite heating accounting for the vast majority of energy consumed, it only accounts for 15% of greenhouse gas emissions. In comparison, the figure for other appliances is 28%, and the figure for refrigerators is 14%, nearly doubling the proportions of them in energy usage. Similarly, despite their lower percentages of energy use, cooling produces 3% of emissions and lighting produces 8%.
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The first chart shows six energy-related categories utilized by a typical Australian household, while the second one reveals the equivalent proportion of greenhouse gas emissions generated.

Despite the fact that heating consumes the bulk of energy, water heating is the leading source of greenhouse gas emissions.

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Heating and water heating contribute for 42 and 30 percent of overall energy consumption, respectively. Another 15% is consumed by other appliances, which is almost twice as much as the energy used for refrigeration. Lighting and cooling use fairly little energy, accounting for about 4% and 2% of total energy consumption, correspondingly.

Heating and water heating contribute 42 and 30 percent to overall energy consumption, respectively.

It's also worthly noticeable that

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