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The graph shows the percentage of audiences over 4 years old of UK follows the radio and television throughout. The day during the period October-December 1992. It has been observed from the graph that loss than 15% audiences follows the radio at 6.00 am and the percentage raised to a pick around 30% at 8.00 AM and declined gradually to around 10% during the period 2.00 to 4.00 PM and again raised a bit to around 12 % between 4.00 to 6.00 PM. It has again dropped to below 10% at around 10PM . The rate again raised to a bit between 10 PM to 12PM and the rate dropped slowly by 1.00PM.
On the other hand, the rate of television audiences raises 0-10% during the period 6.00 to 8.00 AM and remains steady up to 10 AM and then gradually goes down by 12.00 noon . The percentage raised dramatically to around 15% by 2.00 PM which again raised to a pick above 40% between 6.00-8.00 PM and then gradually dropped between the period 12.00 PM to 4.80 AM.
~ Đánh hết đoạn này phải mỏi lắm . Hi vọng được góp ý nhiệt tình c:12
The graph shows the percentage of audiences over 4 years old of UK follows the radio and television throughout. The day during the period October-December 1992. It has been observed from the graph that loss than 15% audiences follows the radio at 6.00 am and the percentage raised to a pick around 30% at 8.00 AM and declined gradually to around 10% during the period 2.00 to 4.00 PM and again raised a bit to around 12 % between 4.00 to 6.00 PM. It has again dropped to below 10% at around 10PM . The rate again raised to a bit between 10 PM to 12PM and the rate dropped slowly by 1.00PM.
On the other hand, the rate of television audiences raises 0-10% during the period 6.00 to 8.00 AM and remains steady up to 10 AM and then gradually goes down by 12.00 noon . The percentage raised dramatically to around 15% by 2.00 PM which again raised to a pick above 40% between 6.00-8.00 PM and then gradually dropped between the period 12.00 PM to 4.80 AM.
~ Đánh hết đoạn này phải mỏi lắm . Hi vọng được góp ý nhiệt tình c:12