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Cảm ơn mọi người rất nhiều. Nhờ mọi người mà nhóm mình được gần điểm tối đa đó nha !
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Hello every one, my name is..... Today, I would like to tell you about My hobby. My hobby is cooking. I started my hobby three years ago. I share my hobby with mom and dad. To do this hobby, I go shopping to by ingredients and I get the recipe from the Internet. So, I can cook a lot of dishes like fish, dorayaki, sushi, omelete,.... My family members feel very delicious. Every day, I cook dinner for my family. Cooking is very interesting and happy. In my future, I will be come a chef.​
 

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Hello every one, my name is..... Today, I would like to tell you about My hobby. My hobby is cooking. I started my hobby three years ago. I share my hobby with mom and dad. To do this hobby, I go shopping to by ingredients and I get the recipe from the Internet. So, I can cook a lot of dishes like fish, dorayaki, sushi, omelete,.... My family members feel very delicious. Every day, I cooking dinner for my family. Cooking is very interesting and happy. In my future, I will be come a chef.
Mình nghĩ là nơi chỗ " In my future, I will be come a chef" thì nên sửa lại là " In my future,I wish to become a good chef" tại mình thấy cái câu bn dùng will là khẳng định rằng sau này sẽ làm mình thấy sử dụng wish là muốn nó sẽ hay hơn!!
 
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Hello everyone, my name is..... Today, I would like to tell you about My hobby. My hobby is cooking. I started my hobby three years ago. I share my hobby with mom and dad. To do this hobby, I go shopping to buy ingredients and I get the recipe from the Internet. So, I can cook a lot of dishes like fish, dorayaki, sushi, omelets,... My family members feel very delicious. Every day, I cooking dinner for my family. Cooking is very interesting and happy. In my future, I will come to a chef.
 
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