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My best friend is Vinh.We have been study together in entered primary school. We have a lot of common hobbies like reading book, travelling and billiard. He is a person has a kind heart and very useful. if i miss school because i sick he always share all knowledges he study at school that day. Vinh family's not rich his mother is chef and his father is taxi driver but he always good. My life will isn't meaning if lost the friend like him. I like Vinh very much.

 

[jehinguyen]

My best friend is Vinh.We have been studying together since we entered primary school. We have a lot of common hobbies like reading books, travelling and playing billiards. He is a person who has a kind heart and very useful is kind-hearted and helpful. If i miss school because of my sickness, he always share all the knowledges he studied at school that day. Vinh's family's not rich - his mother is a chef and his father is a taxi driver but he is always good. My life will isn't meaning will no longer be meaningful if I lose a friend like him. I like Vinh very much.

 

[yukari321]

My best friend is Vinh.We have been studying together since we entered primary school. We have a lot of common hobbies like reading books, travelling and playing billiards. He is a person who has a kind heart and very useful is kind-hearted and helpful. If i miss school because of my sickness, he always share all the knowledges he studied at school that day. Vinh's family's not rich - his mother is a chef and his father is a taxi driver but he is always good. My life will isn't meaning will no longer be meaningful if I lose a friend like him. I like Vinh very much.

Um, câu điều kiện ở đây nó hơi lạ nên mình khuyên bạn không nên dùng. Thay vào đó, bạn nên dùng cấu trúc "When"

 

[jehinguyen]

Um, câu điều kiện ở đây nó hơi lạ nên mình khuyên bạn không nên dùng. Thay vào đó, bạn nên dùng cấu trúc "When"

Thực ra dùng thì vẫn dùng được, chỉ là nếu dùng sẽ bị lặp cấu trúc, mà câu văn nghe không suôn nên chuyển sang cấu trúc của When hay Whenever cũng được.