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moxa

[TẶNG BẠN] TRỌN BỘ Bí kíp học tốt 08 môn
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ĐĂNG BÀI NGAY để cùng trao đổi với các thành viên siêu nhiệt tình & dễ thương trên diễn đàn.

diễn đàn mình đã có 1 topic về nhật kí rất nổi tiếng rồi. Nhưng đó là bằng tiếng việt. Còn chúng ta ở box anh, học tiếng anh,nên moxa nghĩ là chúng ta cũng cần viết bằng tiếng anh. Moxa lập ra topic này để chúng ta cùng viết những suy nghĩ cuả mình(dạg như là nhật kí ) bằng tiếng anh. và qua đây để trao đổi và sửa sai về cách viết câu. như vậy cách viêt của chúng ta sẽ tiến bộ hơn. Vì bây giờ thi trắc nghiệm nên kĩ năng viết của chúng ta khá yếu. các bạn thấy thế nào? cho ý kiến nha:)
 
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tuanh038

:(:)(:)(:)(:)((
a new day is very bad
i hate today
:(:)(:)(:)((
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conech123

to day , i get up late , but my best friend call me , and we are very happy , i will be lucky today
let's smile with someone!
 
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tieulongcongchua

cobemuadong_710 said:
Me , too . At the bus, I met a old friend , Duoc . But , I didn't happy .I hate him .:(
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bạn ơi!! cái chữ "me too" đó,ko được ngăn cách nhau ra nha--> nếu ngăn sẽ sai đó!

conech123 said:
to day, i get up late , but my best friend call me , and we are very happy , i will be lucky today
let's smile with someone
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--> đằng trước từ "and""but" ko được đánh dấu phẩy

trên là 1 số lưu ý khi viết bài đó!chúc các bạn thành công
 
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doigiaythuytinh

My best friend is very sad today
--> I'm sad too
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seagirl_41119

Today, I'm very busy. In the morning, I had to take care of my sisters They were so playful. I'm feel tired so much. In the afternoon, I went to my school to take part in my school's communication club. The lesson was too dull for me to learn. When I go home, I helped my mother do the housework. I'm so tired
 
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o0honeybaby0o

Thanks Sis moxa very much.... :)
Today is not a very bad day. In the morning, it was raining. But in the afternoon, it was better, it neither was raining nor sunny ^^. So, I could go downtown with my friends. It's really funny. We were so happy :D
 
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babykh0cnhe

Today, my class go on a picnic but I must be at home because my father don't allow me to go with my class...I am very sad...........:((
 
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242526

I can't stand up.Life becomes dark for me.Those my friend, who is also successful but I don't know my life is how?????
Because I failed.............
 
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o0honeybaby0o

242526 said:
I can't stand up.Life becomes dark for me.Those my friend, who is also successful but I don't know my life is how?????
Because I failed.............
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If you can't stand up, I think that you should lie ;))
Ohm... Lie and look at the blue sky above! It's very beautiful, and so is your life ;)%%-. Don't be sad! Smile ^^ I hope that when you read my comment, you will feel better :)
 
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hoangha8394

242526 said:
I can't stand up.Life becomes dark for me.Those my friend, who is also successful but I don't know my life is how?????
Because I failed.............
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don't feel sad because you still have friends who always beside you when you are alone (if not ,I am will be ones). If you failed, TRY AGAIN AND YOU WILL BE WIN.[YOUTUBE]<object width="425" height="344"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/eGgZQXj2yms&color1=0xb1b1b1&color2=0xcfcfcf&hl=en&feature=player_detailpage&fs=1"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowScriptAccess" value="always"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/eGgZQXj2yms&color1=0xb1b1b1&color2=0xcfcfcf&hl=en&feature=player_detailpage&fs=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowfullscreen="true" allowScriptAccess="always" width="425" height="344"></embed></object>[/YOUTUBE]
 
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stary

I was exhausted. :(I went to Cambodia. :pIt's very great! ;)I was funny. :DI like my tour. %%-I love it!!!:)&gt;-
 
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242526

hoangha8394 said:
don't feel sad because you still have friends who always beside you when you are alone (if not ,I am will be ones). If you failed, TRY AGAIN AND YOU WILL BE WIN.[YOUTUBE]<object width="425" height="344"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/eGgZQXj2yms&color1=0xb1b1b1&color2=0xcfcfcf&hl=en&feature=player_detailpage&fs=1"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowScriptAccess" value="always"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/eGgZQXj2yms&color1=0xb1b1b1&color2=0xcfcfcf&hl=en&feature=player_detailpage&fs=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowfullscreen="true" allowScriptAccess="always" width="425" height="344"></embed></object>[/YOUTUBE]
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Thank you very much.I Don't known say with you how, but I'll try although it is difficult. Many people think "start over again" and I don't think so.It is late for me.
 
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doigiaythuytinh

This day is verry bad, bad, bad ................................ and bad
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verry ---> very
 
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