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wolf95

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Now I still remember my first birthday party. At that time, i was 4 years old and very excited to hold my own birthday party. I asked my parents to buy many sweets and biscuit. Because i was still small and the place i lived didn't have many children at the same age as me, I decided to invited my sister's friends. Of course, i knew them and my sister was also pleased to want them to come the party for fun. Moreover, i invited my grandfather who was living there to take care of me because my parents were busy and my only friend at that time ( but i forgot her name). Finally, the party was very happy and interesting. Everyone sang "Happy birthday" song and gave me many presents. The presents I loved most was a picture frame made of porcelain. It had an angle above a straw roof of a house where a small family lived. There seemed to be a sister, a a grandfather and a baby whom i thought it was me. Now i still treasured it which reminds me about the greatest birthday party in my life.
 
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wolf95 said:
Now I still remember my first birthday party. At that time, i was 4 years old and very excited to hold my own birthday party. I asked my parents to buy many sweets and biscuit. Because i was still small and the place i lived didn't have many children at the same age as me, I decided to invited my sister's friends. Of course, i knew them and my sister was also pleased to want them to come the party for fun. Moreover, i invited my grandfather who was living there to take care of me because my parents were busy and my only friend at that time ( but i forgot her name). Finally, the party was very happy and interesting. Everyone sang "Happy birthday" song and gave me many presents. The presents I loved most was a picture frame made of porcelain. It had an angle above a straw roof of a house where a small family lived. There seemed to be a sister, a a grandfather and a baby whom i thought it was me. Now i still treasured it which reminds me about the greatest birthday party in my life.
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Bài văn nói chung tạm được ;) nhưng cũng còn hơi lủng củng:)
 
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longlxag123

The first birthday party still remains in my mind. At that time, I was 4 years old and I was very excited to hold my own first birthday party. I asked my parents to buy lots of sweets and biscuits. Since I was young and the place I lived didn't have many children as old as me, I decided to invite some of my sister's friends. Of course, I knew them and my sister was also pleased to have them joint my party. I also invited my grandfather who lived there to look after me because my parents were busy and he's my only friend at that time . The party was very happy and interesting. Everyone sang "Happy birthday" and gave me a lot of presents. The presents I loved the most was a picture frame made of porcelain. It had an angle above a straw roof of a house where a small family lived. In the picture, there seemed to be a sister, a grandfather and a baby whom i thought was me. Now i still treasured it since it reminds me of, probably, the greatest birthday party in my life.
mình cũng ko giỏi viết lắm, thông cảm:p
 
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longlxag123

maxqn said:
of my age

join

he was

present

Chỗ này có thể thấy được nên t nghĩ dùng were đc r nhỉ
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chỗ join thì nhầm c/t have:|
was thì cứ tưởng có thể viết tắt thành 's:|
còn present là C noun, trước lại có lots of sao lại sửa là số ít:-??
ko biết bạn nói thấy đc là sao :|, whom i thought là Sing S nên mình dùng was
:khi (60)::khi (60)::khi (60):
 
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passingby

Có thể present là uncountable noun chăng? :|
Mà sao bạn lại thắc mắc were và was nhỉ? Was mà :|
 
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maxqn

The presents I loved the most was a picture frame made of porcelain
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Mọi người quên để ý chữ "a" ở sau r àh? Từ này suy ra là present = picture frame --> singular

Còn chỗ seemed, ý tớ là seemed có dạng + to inf, nhưng đứng 1 mình thì.... nghĩa j k bik :-?? Với lại, ng trong bức ảnh là visible (ghi vầy cho dễ hiểu) --> k dùng there were lun, tội j seemed?

"whom I thought was me" ---> whom I thought to be me vì câu này là liệt kê, main verb đã chia r, vậy xem như sau whom là 1 mệnh đề qhệ relative clause. --> tách nó ra --> was sai --> to be.
 
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passingby

maxqn said:
Mọi người quên để ý chữ "a" ở sau r àh? Từ này suy ra là present = picture frame --> singular

Còn chỗ seemed, ý tớ là seemed có dạng + to inf, nhưng đứng 1 mình thì.... nghĩa j k bik :-?? Với lại, ng trong bức ảnh là visible (ghi vầy cho dễ hiểu) --> k dùng there were lun, tội j seemed?

"whom I thought was me" ---> whom I thought to be me vì câu này là liệt kê, main verb đã chia r, vậy xem như sau whom là 1 mệnh đề qhệ relative clause. --> tách nó ra --> was sai --> to be.
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"whom I thought was me" ---> whom I thought to be me vì câu này là liệt kê, main verb đã chia r, vậy xem như sau whom là 1 mệnh đề qhệ relative clause. --> tách nó ra --> was sai --> to be
Nhìn chung là chưa hiểu ur idea! :| Là như nào em?
 
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jinnykuty

as old as thỳ dùng là at the same age as me thỳ hay hơn ^^
presents có "s" là đúng rùi còn nếu k chắc chắn thỳ dùng từ gifts ^^
Và còn một chỗ I love most hoặc I love best ^^
câu cuối Now thỳ phải là I still treasure ^^
 
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passingby

jinnykuty said:
as old as thỳ dùng là at the same age as me thỳ hay hơn ^^
presents có "s" là đúng rùi còn nếu k chắc chắn thỳ dùng từ gifts ^^
Và còn một chỗ I love most hoặc I love best ^^
câu cuối Now thỳ phải là I still treasure ^^
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ờ ờ. agree ,agree đấy! at the same age as me mí cả now i still treasured.
Còn most và best thấy bảo dùng đc cả 2 hay sao ý. Ví dụ câu này đúng hay sai? "Hi everybody who i love most! "
 
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maxqn said:
Mọi người quên để ý chữ "a" ở sau r àh? Từ này suy ra là present = picture frame --> singular

Còn chỗ seemed, ý tớ là seemed có dạng + to inf, nhưng đứng 1 mình thì.... nghĩa j k bik :-?? Với lại, ng trong bức ảnh là visible (ghi vầy cho dễ hiểu) --> k dùng there were lun, tội j seemed?

"whom I thought was me" ---> whom I thought to be me vì câu này là liệt kê, main verb đã chia r, vậy xem như sau whom là 1 mệnh đề qhệ relative clause. --> tách nó ra --> was sai --> to be.
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sr, cứ tưởng chị thắc mắc chỗ presents sau lots of :-j
seemed to be thì hình như mang nghĩa uncertain :D.
còn whom I thought to be me thì chắc đúng:p
 
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