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green.t

The subject which I like best is English;however,I think I'm not good at it. In my opinion, English is the most interesting subject. Because,everyday I will be known more and more Gramma,Vocabulary,what I've known recently, what I haven't known yet,ect... The more difficutl English is, the more I want to discover it. Sometimes I have some very difficult homework that makes me be tired from,but feelings soon disappear. The other reason makes me love studying English is songs. I love so much 1970s,1980s US&Uk songs which are very beautiful. I'm used to singing those songs everyday but I can't pronunce words exactly. So I'm trying to improve my voice and my pronunciation,and i wish sb would help me. Finally, all I want to tell maybe more but I can't describe.[I hope you to understand what I said ^^]

P/s: Chốt lại em rất muốn trao đổi nhiều vs mấy anh chị để hiểu đc nhiều hơn ^^. Có những cái mới biết em đưa vào luôn nên còn non,hi vọng m.ng xem r` sửa giúp em.

P/s 2: Thank and love you so much :-* !!!!
 
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socola01

hjx em định mỗi ngày post lên một đoạn văn nhưng với tình trạng học thêm quá nhiều như bjo thì chắc là hơi khó, vậy nên cách 2 ngày em sẽ post lên 1 đoạn, các anh các chị giúp đỡ em với nhé. Đoạn văn hum nay là "tell a memorable story", thuộc dạng personal narrative

Once going see a doctor

When I was 15 years old, I got a heavy fever. My mother worried extremely and gave me to go see a doctor quickly.

I was tired, my body got hotter and hotter. My forehead sweated so much. Next, my throat became dry. Also, the fever made me be thirsty. I fell in faint status. Furthermore, I feared very much because my studying in my school was be interrupted by the fever.

At hospital, a friendly nurse got me lie on a bed. Shortly after that, a doctor came to me. He put his hand on my forehead. Next, he examined me and asked my mother some questions. For example: “When did she get fever?”, “What medicine had she drunk before?”, “How old is she?”, “Has she ever gotten any fever before?”.

After that, he gave me some medicines to drink. He also recommended my mother to let me drink water and not to rub medicated oil on her sole so much. And then, he made out a prescription for me.

After drinking medicines, I felt asleep. An hour later, I woke up and felt more comfortable. I looked out to find my mother. The nurse, who gave my mother the prescription, was directing my mother to medicine stall.

Eventually, we left hospital for home. Returning my home, I felt better but it is such a terrible day in hospital.
 
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longlxag123

Once going see a doctor

When I was 15 years old, I got a heavy fever. My mother worried extremely and gave me to go see a doctor quickly.

I was tired, my body got hotter and hotter. My forehead sweated so much. Next, my throat became dry. Also, the fever made me be thirsty. I fell in faint status. Furthermore, I feared very much because my studying in my school(unnecessary) was be interrupted by the fever.

At hospital(thiếu article), a friendly nurse got me lie(lay) on a bed. Shortly after that, a doctor came to me. He put his hand on my forehead. Next, he examined me and asked my mother some questions. For example: “When did she get fever?”, “What medicine had she drunk(took) before/(previously)?”, “How old is she?”, “Has she ever gotten any fever before?”.

After that, he gave me some medicines to drink(unnecessary). He also recommended my mother to let me drink water and not to rub medicated oil on her sole(without the instruction from the doctor) so much(unnecessary). And then, he made out a prescription for me.

After drinking(taking) the medicines, I felt asleep. An hour later, I woke up and felt (much) more comfortable. I looked out(side) to find my mother. The nurse, who gave my mother the prescription, was directing my mother to(the) medicine stall.

Eventually, we left hospital for home. Returning my home, I felt (much) better but it (was) such a terrible day in hospital.

Chị xem lại mấy chỗ em gạch dưới ấy:)


Chút ý kiến thoai:D, có gì thiếu xin các bạn khác bổ sung thêm:)
 
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saklovesyao

chị kiểm tra lại dạng động từ đi, em cũng nghĩ trong bài có chỗ sai đó !
 
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longlxag123

The subject which I like best is English;however,I think I'm not good at it. In my opinion, English is the most interesting subject. Because,everyday I will be known more and more Gramma,Vocabulary,what I've known recently, what I haven't known yet,ect... The more difficutl English is, the more I want to discover it. Sometimes I have some very difficult homework that makes me be tired from,but (those) feelings soon disappear. The other reason makes me love studying English is songs. I love so much 1970s,1980s US&Uk songs which are very beautiful. I'm used to singing those songs everyday but I can't pronounce words exactly. So I'm trying to improve my voice and my pronunciation,and i wish sb would help me. Finally, all I want to tell maybe more but I can't describe.[I hope you to understand what I said ^^]


Đoạn văn còn lủng củng quá:-?.
 
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