Ngoại ngữ [Lớp 9] Write a short paragraph about drawbacks in the city

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    Nowadays, more and more people want to live in the city because its advantages. But beside that, living in a city has a number of drawbacks. Firstly, there is traffic jam. On the roads, especially peak hours, there are many vehicles moving on the same road and it caused traffic jams. The increase in population and numbers of owner vehicles have caused traffic accidents every day. Public transport is uncomfortable and inefficient for almost people. Secondly, air polution has negative effects people's health, animals, vegetation and buildings. More and more city people suffer coughing or breathing problems becase air contain foreign materials or gases such as carbon dioxide, sulphur and nitrogen beyond prescribed limit. Thirdly, the city is noisy. Noise pollution come from machines, vehicles, industrial factories. It may affect the mind, health and behaviour. It may cause physically discomfort and temporary or permanent damage to hearing. It causes headache and irritability. It may cause deafness, stress and high-blood pressure. In short, city is not only has advantages but also have drawbacks. If we want to live in the city, we must learn how to protect ourselves from these drawbacks.

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    Nowadays, more and more people want to live in the city because of its advantages. However, living in a city has a number of drawbacks. Firstly, there are traffic jams. On the roads, especially rush hours, there are many vehicles moving on the same road and it caused traffic jams. The increase in population and numbers of owner vehicles have caused traffic accidents every day. Public transport is uncomfortable and inefficient for almost people. Secondly, air pollution has negative effects on people's health, animals, vegetation and buildings. More and more city people suffer coughing or breathing problems because air contains foreign materials or gases such as carbon dioxide, sulphur and nitrogen beyond prescribed limit. Thirdly, the city is noisy. Noise pollution comes from machines, vehicles, industrial factories. It may affect the mind, health and behaviour. Or cause physically discomfort and temporary or permanent damage to hearing. Moreover It also makes headache , irritability deafness, stress and high-blood pressure. In short, living in a city has both advantages and drawbacks. If we want to live in the city, we must learn how to protect ourselves from these drawbacks.
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    First of all, if we live in the city, we will have many chances get the developing science and technology. It means that we will have more job opportunities and broaden our knowledge more easily. Secondly, we will have many different ways to spend our free time. There are a lot of theatres, concerts and other kinds of entertainment. There is always a lot to do and visit T
     
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    Nowadays, more and more people want to live in the city because of its advantages.
    That aside, living in a city has a number of drawbacks. Firstly, there are traffic jams. During rush hours, there are so many vehicles that they cause traffic jams. The increase in population and vehicles owners have also intensified traffic accidents. Public transport is uncomfortable and inefficient to most people. Secondly, air pollution has negative effects on people's health, animals, vegetation and buildings. Citizens are suffering from breathing problems because air contains pollutants and gases such as carbon dioxide, sulphur and nitrogen beyond allowed limit. Thirdly, the city is noisy. Noise pollution comes from machines, vehicles, industrial factories. It may affect the mind, health and behaviour. Furthermore, it may also cause physical discomfort and temporary or permanent damage to hearing, headache and irritability, deafness, stress and high-blood pressure.
    In conclusion, city has not only advantages but also drawbacks. If we want to live in the city, we must learn how to protect ourselves from the threats it may pose .
     
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    Life in modern cities truly causes a lot of nuisances. In the first place, citizens have to deal with traffic congestion every day. This problem is even worse in the rush hour when so many people run out to work and are stuck on streets for hours. Next, high cost of living is also a serious issue in the city, especially in metropolitan cities. More and more people find it difficult to live on their modest salaries when prices are going up all the time. Financial pressure makes city dwellers become constantly stressed and tired. Finally, the polluted air caused by exhaust emissions from millions of vehicles, construction dust and the lack of green trees negatively affects residents’ health. Many people suffer from respiratory problems such as cough, sore throat or asthma. Indeed, city life brings a number of difficulties as well as challenges to its citizens.
     
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