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[HocSinh12334]

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Mọi người tìm lỗi ngữ pháp trong đoạn ngữ liệu sau rồi sửa giúp mình. Mình cảm ơn trước :3

This letter, I wrote a long time and it's for you, the most important person in my life. Even as I wrote these words, I (still) cried, was remorseful, and had wanted to die. Just for you.

Returning to that familiar route of love, holding on to my memories, I stand on the opposite street.

The past falls like snow, and in a moment, turned cold.

Separated by time that won't turn back.

Memories accumulate like snow, and pile up tobecome winter.

When I reach out to secretly keep some only then, do I realise how for behind you have left me.

You say that the snow and ice are the tears from your harderned heart.

When you meet someone new tomorrow, they can turn gentle again like snow.

Regarding the beauty of love what I owed you in the past, I hope he gives them all.

You say that the snow and ice are the remnants of your heart out into pices by me.

The next time you love someone, you will use love to slowly stitch them back.

Throw away the old hurts and fly away with him.

Everynight, I listen closed and I heard happiness talking you far away.
Leaving only regret to accompany me through the sleepless night.

 

[Phạm Dương]

This letter, I wrote a long time and it's for you, the most important person in my life. Even as I wrote these words, I (still) cried, was remorseful, and had wanted to die. Just for you.
Returning to that familiar route of love, holding on to my memories, I stand on the opposite street.
The past falls like snow, and in a moment, turned cold.
Separated by time that won't turn back.
Memories accumulate like snow, and pile up to become winter.
When I reach out to secretly keep some only then, do I realise how for behind you have left me.
You say that the snow and ice are the tears from your hardened heart.
When you meet someone new tomorrow, they can turn gentle again like snow.
Regarding the beauty of love what I owed you in the past, I hope he gives them all.
You say that the snow and ice are the remnants of your heart out into pieces by me.
The next time you love someone, you will use love to slowly stitch them back.
Throw away the old hurts and fly away with him.
Overnight, I listen closed and I heard happiness talking you far away.
Leaving only regret to accompany me through the sleepless night.
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Lần sau không cần copy bài trên gg đâu em nhé ))))

 

[HocSinh12334]

À, em nghĩ bạn ấy sai lỗi ngữ pháp nên hỏi mọi người thôi, chứ không có ý gì đâu.

Em đã làm gì sai ạ? Và "everynight" sao lại đổi thành "overnight"?

 

[Phạm Dương]

Em đã làm gì sai ạ? Và "everynight" sao lại đổi thành "overnight"?

Mọi người khá không thích việc copy bài của người khác mà không dẫn nguồn đó em.
"Overnight" là trong đêm, nếu em dùng thì phải là "every night", chứ trong tiếng anh chính gốc là không có từ "everynight" mà người ta sẽ dùng từ "overnight" để thể hiện ý nghĩa này.

 

[banhchung052]

This letter, I wrote a long time and it's for you, the most important person in my life. Even as I wrote these words, I (still) cried, was remorseful, and had wanted to die. Just for you.
Returning to that familiar route of love, holding on to my memories, I stand on the opposite street.
The past falls like snow, and in a moment, turned cold.
Separated by time that won't turn back.
Memories accumulate like snow, and pile up to become winter.
When I reach out to secretly keep some only then, do I realise how for behind you have left me.
You say that the snow and ice are the tears from your hardened heart.
When you meet someone new tomorrow, they can turn gentle again like snow.
Regarding the beauty of love what I owed you in the past, I hope he gives them all.
You say that the snow and ice are the remnants of your heart out into pieces by me.
The next time you love someone, you will use love to slowly stitch them back.
Throw away the old hurts and fly away with him.
Overnight, I listen closed and I heard happiness talking you far away.
Leaving only regret to accompany me through the sleepless night.
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Lần sau không cần copy bài trên gg đâu em nhé ))))

chị ơi câu đầu tiên I wrote a long time em nghĩ là thì hien tại hoàn thành hoặc quá khứ hoàn thành chứ ạ ?

 

[Phạm Dương]

chị ơi câu đầu tiên I wrote a long time em nghĩ là thì hien tại hoàn thành hoặc quá khứ hoàn thành chứ ạ ?

cái đó còn tùy mục đích em muốn nhấn mạnh nhé, còn trong trường hợp này, thì c nghĩ là bạn ấy chỉ đơn thuần là kể lại thôi, không phải mục đích chính nên không sửa.