English THCS Factors motivating people to succeed

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The bar chart below shows a survey of a group of young professionals aged 20-30 who were asked to state which factors motivated them to succeed.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

 

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The bar chart illustrates a survey of a group of young professionals aged 20 – 30 who were asked to state which factors they believed gave them an incentive for success.
Overall, success for young professionals depends mainly on self-motivation factors.
The factors are divided into 3 groups. These are personal feelings, positive feelings, and negative feelings. In the first group, personal satisfaction and ambition are cited by the highest rate of those sampled with 80%. Meanwhile, money and desire for material things are two factors that have the lower rate of the people asked with 45% and 50% respectively.
Among the positive factors, the rivalry accounted for 50% of the people questioned as a factor that motivates them to succeed. The other factors fear of failure, envy, and feeling in adequation have almost the same percentage with 25%, 30%, 32%. When it comes to negative factors, family pressure is rated by the highest rate of those asked in this group with 70%, followed by pressure from society with 60% and peer pressure with 45%.

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