[English 6] Chữa lỗi topic nói

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quangkhai2811

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Mình có 4 topic nói mình đã làm và mong các bạn sửa lỗi giúp mình
Topic 1: Talk about one of your best friends

Good afternoon, teacher
How are you?
Fine, thanks.
My name's Khai. I'm from class 6E. I'm twelve years old.
Well! My speaking topic is talk about one of your best friends.
Let me start my presentation.
I have very many friends but my best friend is Hai.
Hai is the same age as me. He is twelve years old, too.
He lives on Do Trac Street.
He isn't tall. He is shorter than me.
He has a round face with short black hair.
His nose is small and his lips are full with small white teeth.
Those are things of my best friend.
That's all.
Thank you for listening to me.
Good bye!

Topic 2: Talk about your pastime activities

Good afternoon, teacher
How are you?
Fine, thanks.
My name's Khai. I'm from class 6E. I'm twelve years old.
Well! My speaking topic is talk about your pastime activities.
Let me start my presentation.
I often do many diffrent things in my free time such as: linsten to music, read a book, play sports, etc.
I usually play badminton with my family.
I often play table tennis or soccer with my friends.
I rarely play video game alone.
I sometimes sing songs or read books.
I seldom go swimming in a pool near my house.
That's all.
Thank you for listening to me.
Good bye!

Topic 3: What are you going to do this summer vacation

Good afternoon, teacher.
How are you?
Fine, thanks.
My name's Khai. I'm from class 6E. I'm twelve years old.
Well! My speaking topic is what are you going to do this summer vacation?
Let me start my presentation.
Summer vacation is coming. I'm going to travel this summer vacation.
First, I'm going to visit Ha Long Bay. I'm going to stay there in my friend's house for 2 days.
Next, I'm going to visit Ha Noi- the capital of Viet Nam. I'm going to stay in my uncle's house for a week. I'm going to visit The Huc Bridge, Ngoc Son Temple for take some photos of them and go running around West Lake.
Finally, I'm going to visit Nha Trang City. I'm going to stay in a hotel near the sea for 2 days. When i come there, I'm going to sunbathe on beautiful beaches. Then these two days, I'm going to return home by minibus.
That's all.
Thank you for listening to me.
Good bye!

Topic 4: What do you often do in each season

Good afternoon, teacher.
How are you?
Fine, thanks.
My name's Khai. I'm from class 6E. I'm twelve years old.
Well! My speaking topic is what do you often do in each season.
Let me start my presentation.
In the spring, the weather is warm. I usually plant some trees and flowers. I seldom ride my bike.
In the summer, it's hot. I often go swimming in a pool near my house. Sometimes, I play volleyball with my friends.
In the fall, the weather's cool. I often go sailing with my family.
In the winter, it's cold. So I never go out home.
My favourite season is fall, because I feel cool and comfortable. That's fruit's season. In this season, the color of trees and leaves are yellow-brown, red.
That's all.
Thank you for listening to me.
Good bye!
 
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naruto2001

Nhận xét sau 2 topic:
topic 1: good
topic 2: chỗ linsten → listen _________________________________________________
 
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quangkhai2811

Nhận xét sau 2 topic:
topic 1: good
topic 2: sai chỗ Let me start my presentation( hãy bắt đầu trình bày của tôi) và chỗ linsten
→ listen _________________________________________________
Chỗ Let me start my presentation đúng mà anh đâu có sai đâu
Nghĩa nó không phải như vậy: Em xin phép phần trình bày của em
 
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arrigato

Topic 1:
[...]
I have very many friends...
\Rightarrow so hoặc bỏ đi (very không đi trước many)
[...]
Hai is the same age as me. He is twelve years old, too.
\Rightarrow Hai is the same age as me, twelve years old. (Gộp 2 câu lại, lặp ý)
[...]
Those are things of my best friend.
That's all.
\Rightarrow Câu trên không cần thiết, có thể gộp 2 câu thành: That's all about my best friend.

Topic 2:
[...]
I often do many diffrent things in my free time such as: listen to music, read a book, play sports, etc.
\Rightarrow Những động từ này nên được liệt kê dưới dạng tiếp diễn: listening, reading, playing

Topic 3:
[...]
My speaking topic is what are you going to do this summer vacation?
\Rightarrow what I am going to do this summer. (Chuyển câu hỏi ở đề bài thành câu khẳng định nhé! ;) )
[...]
Summer vacation is coming. I'm going to travel this summer vacation.
\Rightarrow Bỏ đi (vừa thừa, vừa lặp từ với câu sau)
[...]
I'm going to visit The Huc Bridge, Ngoc Son Temple for take some photos of them and go running around West Lake.
\Rightarrow Thay for = to (to do sth: để làm gì), hoặc thay take = taking (for doing sth = to do sth); bỏ them
Finally, I'm going to visit Nha Trang City. I'm going to stay in a hotel near the sea for 2 days.
\Rightarrow a seaside hotel (ngắn gọn, dễ hiểu)
[...]
Then these two days, I'm going to return home by minibus.
\Rightarrow After (after+time: sau khoảng thời gian)

Topic 4:
[...]
My speaking topic is what do you often do in each season.
\Rightarrow what I often do in each season. (như ở topic 3)
[...]
In this season, the color of trees and leaves are yellow-brown, red.
\Rightarrow Thay In = During thì nghe sẽ hay hơn (ở trước dùng nhiều In quá rồi!); thay trees and leaves = trees' leaves mới chính xác (chỉ có lá đổi màu thôi, (thân, cành) cây không đổi màu đâu nhé! :)>- )
 
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quangkhai2811

Topic 1:
[...]
I have very many friends...
\Rightarrow so hoặc bỏ đi (very không đi trước many)
[...]
Hai is the same age as me. He is twelve years old, too.
\Rightarrow Hai is the same age as me, twelve years old. (Gộp 2 câu lại, lặp ý)
[...]
Those are things of my best friend.
That's all.
\Rightarrow Câu trên không cần thiết, có thể gộp 2 câu thành: That's all about my best friend.

Topic 2:
[...]
I often do many diffrent things in my free time such as: listen to music, read a book, play sports, etc.
\Rightarrow Những động từ này nên được liệt kê dưới dạng tiếp diễn: listening, reading, playing

Topic 3:
[...]
My speaking topic is what are you going to do this summer vacation?
\Rightarrow what I am going to do this summer. (Chuyển câu hỏi ở đề bài thành câu khẳng định nhé! ;) )
[...]
Summer vacation is coming. I'm going to travel this summer vacation.
\Rightarrow Bỏ đi (vừa thừa, vừa lặp từ với câu sau)
[...]
I'm going to visit The Huc Bridge, Ngoc Son Temple for take some photos of them and go running around West Lake.
\Rightarrow Thay for = to (to do sth: để làm gì), hoặc thay take = taking (for doing sth = to do sth); bỏ them
Finally, I'm going to visit Nha Trang City. I'm going to stay in a hotel near the sea for 2 days.
\Rightarrow a seaside hotel (ngắn gọn, dễ hiểu)
[...]
Then these two days, I'm going to return home by minibus.
\Rightarrow After (after+time: sau khoảng thời gian)

Topic 4:
[...]
My speaking topic is what do you often do in each season.
\Rightarrow what I often do in each season. (như ở topic 3)
[...]
In this season, the color of trees and leaves are yellow-brown, red.
\Rightarrow Thay In = During thì nghe sẽ hay hơn (ở trước dùng nhiều In quá rồi!); thay trees and leaves = trees' leaves mới chính xác (chỉ có lá đổi màu thôi, (thân, cành) cây không đổi màu đâu nhé! :)>- )
Bạn chữa 1 câu bị sai nhé:
I. very có thể đi trước many (công thức very may+pl.n)
II. Ý thứ 3 bạn nói
- Đây là 2 câu riêng biệt: +Those are things of my best friend (chúng là những thứ của bạn tốt nhất của tôi)
+ That's all (đó là tất cả): câu kết thúc của bài nói thuộc phần kết bài không phải thân bài
III. Đó là tên của chủ đề không được biến đổi
VD: what are you going to do this summer vacation? [TEX]\Rightarrow[/TEX] I am going to do this summer vacation (Tôi định sẽ làm kì nghỉ hè này): sai nghĩa
IV. Summer vacation is coming. I'm going to travel this summer vacation.
Bỏ đi (vừa thừa, vừa lặp từ với câu sau)
Bây giờ đang là mùa hè [TEX]\Rightarrow[/TEX] không thể dùng is coming
V. I'm going to visit The Huc Bridge, Ngoc Son Temple for take some photos of them and go running around West Lake.
Thay for = to (to do sth: để làm gì), hoặc thay take = taking (for doing sth = to do sth); bỏ them
Không thể bỏ them vì ta có công thức (take some photos of s.b, s.t)
Với lại chẳng lẽ of có thể đứng ở cuối câu.
VI. Finally, I'm going to visit Nha Trang City. I'm going to stay in a hotel near the sea for 2 days.
a seaside hotel (ngắn gọn, dễ hiểu)
seaside hotelcó trong chương trình SGK không, ai dạy
VII. Then these two days, I'm going to return home by minibus.
After (after+time: sau khoảng thời gian)
Then cũng thể dùng như vậy không nhất thiết phải After
VIII. In this season, the color of trees and leaves are yellow-brown, red.
Thay In = During thì nghe sẽ hay hơn (ở trước dùng nhiều In quá rồi!); thay trees and leaves = trees' leaves mới chính xác (chỉ có lá đổi màu thôi, (thân, cành) cây không đổi màu đâu nhé! )
During có trong chương trình SGK không, ai dạy
 
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