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This is my unforgettable memories that ten years ago,when I was grade in 4..I was born and bring up in a poor small village in the rural area.Different from the people in city,Iwasn't had my birthday.That a day my mother said that she would have take me to the market .I felt very happy because this is the first I had gone out.We went around the market and then,I stoppped behind at a watch store.I extremely like that watch,which was pink and lovely.I wish my mother could have bought it for me.But,ít was impossible because my mother have money.I came back home with a sorrow.At that night,I wass suprised when I run across to see my mother who was accouting to a few money from her saved hog.Then I came back my room.next day-my birthday, my mother gave me a gift which was the first I had in my life.And thí was the watch which I wished.I was happy and obgiled to my mother.I gave thank her,then I busted into tear and huged hẻ because I knew that She sacrificed so much.I love mum>

 

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This is my unforgettable memory that ten years ago, when I was in grade 4... I was born and brought up in a poor small village in the rural area. Being different from the people in the city, I didn't have my birthday. That day, my mother said that she would take me to the market. I felt very happy because this was the first I have gone out. We went around the market and then, I stoppped at a watch store. I extremely liked a watch which was pink and lovely. I wished my mother could have bought it for me. But, it was impossible because my mother have no money. I came back home in sorrow. That night, I was suprised when I run across to see my mother who was accouting to a few money from her saved hog. Then I came back my room. Next day-my birthday, my mother gave me a gift which was the first I have ever had in my life. And this was the watch which I wished. I was happy and obgiled to my mother. I gave a thank to her, then I busted into tear and huged her because I knew that she sacrificed so much. I love mum>
phần nào màu hồng theo mink là bn cần phải sữa, Ok