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Topic: What activities after school of students:
After school time is a good one for all the students to rest. The students have many different activities. After school, all the students return theirs home. Then they spend time foe their family and friends. Many students pay sports, watch tv, read books,etc. But the most activities is playing sports. They often play sports such as: baminton, voleyball, basketball, table tennis, and so on. It will help them relax after hard working day. Some students often play computer games when thay are bored. Playing computer games is very interesting and it's a popular activity. Some girls like cooking. They often help their mothers to cook dinner after school. Some students like watching cartoons after school. Then, they wash their faces, take shower and after that they have dinner. After having delicious dinner, they do thier homework. They often spend two hours doing it. At the end of the day, they go to bed, rest and have a wonderful dream.

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Topic: What activities after school of students:
After school time is a good one for all the students to rest. The students have many different activities. After school, all the students return theirs home. Then they spend time foe their family and friends. Many students pay sports, watch tv, read books,etc. But the most activities is playing sports. They often play sports such as: baminton, voleyball, basketball, table tennis, and so on. It will help them relax after hard working day. Some students often play computer games when thay are bored. Playing computer games is very interesting and it's a popular activity. Some girls like cooking. They often help their mothers to cook dinner after school. Some students like watching cartoons after school. Then, they wash their faces, take shower and after that they have dinner. After having delicious dinner, they do thier homework. They often spend two hours doing it. At the end of the day, they go to bed, rest and have a wonderful dream.

Check giùm e với ạ!!!!
Chỗ "Many students play sports ..." chữ play thiếu l nha và "badminton thiếu d", "foe => for!! Còn lại thì mình nghĩ là được rồi nha!!
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Then they spend time foe their family and friends.
-> for
Many students pay sports, watch tv, read books,etc.
->play
Some students often play computer games when thay are bored.
->they
After having delicious dinner, they do thier homework.
-> their
Những lỗi chủ yếu là chính tả chắc là do bạn nhầm
Ngoài ra, thay vì dùng quá nhiều từ ' often' bạn có thể dùng như là :'sometime,regular, constant; frequent' nó cũng có nghĩa tương tự như từ ' often'
Chúc bạn học tốt ! :D
 
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