The world is changing rapidly with supporting of internet and science. Almost everything we are having now are different from ones we had in past. We couldn't know so much things had changed. And my hometown isn't the exception. I lived in a riverside village but I left it to a city when I was 12 years old. Since that time, it has been 15 years old. Now, I'm a university student. And this summer, I have time to visit my old hometown. And I am very surprised with the changing of my hometown. First of all, when I am in a bus, I see that the road in my hometown was changed. In past, there are dirt road and the transportation is very difficult and it is very bumpy. But now, with money of resident, the leader decide to hire architect to build another road. And now we have new road. The road is not as narrow as ones in past. They make road by cement so people no longer to worry about quality of road. There are also potholes but it is as much as potholes in past. So there are fewer traffic accidents and collisions. And also in a countryside but I must promise the traffic management in my hometown is very good. You can find traffic lights in everywhere. There are also traffic polices to help you how to drive right and punish everyone who violate traffic laws. People don't use horse and walk as the only transportation anymore. Now, we have car and motorbike for travel faster and farther Secondly, about education, there are more and more schools in my village. In past, there was one school named Quang Trung Secondary School. But that school is very old. The infranstructure is low – quality, student must study in poor room. Each classroom only has 2 celling fans. But now there are also have 2 new school named Ngo Quyen Secondary School and Hong Bang Secondary School. And the infranstructure of these school is very good. Each room has 3 celling fans and one air conditional which can be turned when summer comes. And also there are television that can help teacher for teach their students. In past, my teacher taught me by a boring lessons with tedious textbook. But now, students have the exciting lessons by learning with television. It is so convienient. In physics time or chemistry time, they will learn by seeing phenomenon not like us in past just can learn in textbook. In addition, textbook now are more colorful than ones we had before. There are a lot of picture to help students learn more effienctly. And the coolest thing is the school now are nearby the village more than school before. In past, we need to go all over the village and go through bridge to study. But now it is nearer than before. Thirdly, Internet is more popular among residents than in past. Actually, in past we didn't have internet. The most modern thing we have is large television. In past, there were community hall. In community hall, there are a large television. Once a week, in weekend, people will go there to watch television, change news and also talks each other about their jobs in this week. Large television just had news programm so children didn't have entertainment programm to watch. But now, everything has changed. Every house always has one television. Those children can watch entertainment programm and play video games. Also there are internet to help people access any website do they want. They can study in internet about how to make garden ? how to study more effienctly ? Children can study online. They don't need to study in class, they can self – study. They don't read newspaper anymore, they can read it in internet. Now, my hometown is more and more modern. At the center there are a big supermaket to provide people ingredients. It is BigC supermaket. They sell a lot of things. They sell vegetable, fresh meat, milk, canned food, … They also sell modern things such as laptop, computer, smartphone, … And the place I like best is a new park in my hometown. In past, it was a wasteland with many tree. But now, government decide to build a park in that wasteland. It is very large with many green tree. The coolest thing is in the center of park there is a fountain. Wonderful right ? Ok, that is all about the changes of my hometown from past to now. This is end of my paragraph. How about you ? Can you write a changes of your hometown ? Goodbye and see you next time !
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The world is changing rapidly with supporting of
internet -> the internet and science. Almost everything we are having now
are -> is different from
ones -> the ones we had in past. We couldn't know so
much -> many things had changed. And my hometown isn't the exception. I lived in a riverside village but I left it to a city when I was 12 years old. Since that time, it has been 15 years old. Now, I'm a university student. And this summer, I have time to visit my old hometown. And I am very surprised with the
changing -> change of my hometown. First of all, when I am
in -> on a bus, I see that the road in my hometown was changed. In past, there
are dirt -> is a dirt road and the transportation is very difficult and it is very bumpy. But now, with
money -> the money of
resident -> the resident, the leader
decide -> decides to hire
architect -> an architect to build another road. And now we have
new road -> a new road ( the new road ). The road is not as narrow as
ones -> the ones in past. They make
road by -> the road with cement so people no longer
to -> bỏ to worry about
quality -> the quality of
road -> the road . There are also potholes but it is as much as potholes in past. So there are fewer traffic accidents and collisions. And also in
a countryside -> the contryside but I must promise the traffic management in my hometown is very good. You can find traffic lights
in -> bỏ in everywhere. There are also traffic
polices -> policies to help you how to drive right and punish everyone who
violate -> violates traffic laws. People don't use
horse -> horses and walk as the only transportation anymore. Now, we have
car -> cars and
motorbike -> motorbikes for travel faster and farther Secondly, about education, there are more and more schools in my village. In past, there was one school named Quang Trung Secondary School. But that school is very old. The
infranstructure -> infrastructure is low – quality
, student -> the student must study in
poor -> a poor room. Each classroom only has 2
celling -> ceiling fans. But now there are also have 2 new
school -> schools named Ngo Quyen Secondary School and Hong Bang Secondary School. And the
infranstructure -> infrastructure of these
school -> schools is very good. Each room has 3
celling -> ceiling fans and one
air conditional -> air-conditional which can be turned when summer comes. And also there
are -> is television that can help
teacher -> teachers for -> bỏ for teach their students. In past, my teacher taught me
by -> bỏ by a boring lessons -> a boring lesson hay the lessons with
tedious -> a tedios textbook. But now, students have
the -> bỏ the exciting lessons by learning with television. It is so
convienient -> convenient. In physics time or chemistry time, they will learn by seeing
phenomenon -> phenomena not like us in past just can learn in
textbook -> a textbook. In addition,
textbook -> a textbook now
are -> is more colorful than
ones -> the ones we had before. There
are -> is a lot of
picture -> pictures to help students learn more
effienctly -> efficiently . And the coolest thing is the school now
are -> is nearby the village more than
school -> the school before. In past, we need to go all over the village and go through
bridge -> the bridge to study. But now it is nearer than before. Thirdly,
Internet -> the internet is more popular among residents than in past. Actually,
in past -> in past, we didn't have internet. The most modern thing we have is large television. In past, there
were community -> was a community hall. In
community -> the community hall, there
are -> is a large television. Once a week,
in -> on weekend, people will go there to watch television, change
news -> the news and also
talks -> talks to each other about their jobs in this week. Large television just had news
programm -> program so children didn't have entertainment
programm -> program to watch. But now, everything has changed. Every house always has one television. Those children can watch entertainment
programm -> program and play video games. Also there
are -> is internet -> the internet to help people access any website do they want. They can study
in internet -> on the internet about how to make
garden -> a garden ? how to study more
effienctly -> efficiently? Children can study online. They don't need to study in class, they can self – study. They don't read
newspaper -> thêm a or the anymore, they can read it
in internet.
-> on the internet Now, my hometown is more and more modern.
At the center -> thêm dấy phẩy sau at the center there
are -> is a big
supermaket ->supermarket to provide people
ingredients.-> thêm with It is
BigC supermaket.
-> a BigC supermarket They sell a lot of things. They sell
vegetable,-> thêm s fresh meat, milk, canned food, … They also sell modern things such as
laptop, computer, smartphone, -> thêm s … And the place I like best is a new park in my hometown. In past, it was a wasteland with many
tree -> trees. But now,
government decide -> the government decided to build a park in that wasteland. It is very large with many green
tree -> trees The coolest thing is in the center of park there is a fountain. Wonderful right ? Ok, that is all about the changes
of -> in my hometown from
past ->
the past to now. This is
end -> the end of my paragraph. How about you ? Can you write
a changes -> a change hoặc changes of -> in your hometown ? Goodbye and see you next time !
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