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Thank you so much .it was my pleasure and I also hope we will develop the community of mining engineer together, strong and more strong.

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Quang Ninh 16/6/2020
Mr. Dang Thanh Hai, who is the general manager of Vietnam National Coal and Mineral Industries Group- Vinacomin, made a speech in English contest with the topic: " Introduction to the discipline and consentient tradition”. There is a sentence of Mr. Hai which I like very much is “ English is a bridge that leads us to the knowledge of humanity”
Thank Mr. Dang Thanh Hai for this speech.

 

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1.
Thank you so much .it was my pleasure and I also hope we will develop the community of mining engineer together, strong and more strong.
=> Thank you so much. It is my pleasure and I also hope (that) we will develop the community of mining engineer together, stronger and stronger.
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Quang Ninh 16/6/2020
Mr. Dang Thanh Hai, who is the general manager of Vietnam National Coal and Mineral Industries Group- Vinacomin, made a speech in English contest with the topic: " Introduction to the discipline and consentient tradition”. There is a sentence of Mr. Hai which I like very much is “ English is a bridge that leads us to the knowledge of humanity”
Thank Mr. Dang Thanh Hai for this speech.
=> Quang Ninh 16/6/2020
Mr. Dang Thanh Hai, who is the general manager of Vietnam National Coal and Mineral Industries Group- Vinacomin, made a speech in English contest ( Một là made a speech in English in an English contest . Hai là made a speech in an English contest) with the topic: " Introduction to the discipline and consentient tradition”. There is a sentence of Mr. Hai which I like very much is “ English is a bridge that leads us to the knowledge of humanity” (Bạn có thể đổi thành "There is a saying of Mr. Hai that "English is a bridge that leads us to the knowledge of humanity”")
Thank Mr. Dang Thanh Hai for this speech. (???)