A paragraph about your future job. sửa ngữ pháp giúp em ạ

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If someone asks me who I want to be in the future, my answer will be Doctor. When I was a child with a weak resistance, I usually have to be hospitalized. Seeing doctors treat people and help everyone I really admire them and dream of being a person like them. However, to become a doctor it's not an easy journey. First, he has to study hard and effort to get a high mark to win a place at medical university. Then, he needs to learn a lot of things : name of medicines, anatomy,...In the work, Doctor must have a strong character , quiet and balanced to react quickly in emergency situations and to cope with a stress.They can't be mistaken, if not they will deal with pressure from the patient's family members, the labor cycle. Although works as a doctor is very pressured and difficult sometimes but I still choose that job because I think as long as I like it, I can live true to my life where all hardships are just games for life to add color. Besides, I will get much valuable experiences about bravery, power and love. I like challenges, love solving problem and helping people. That's who I am. In this life, nothing is more important than health, when you are sick, money, position, and fame will become nothing, meaningless. Only when you have good health you can live your own life, find enough happiness and peace.
 
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Mọi người sửa ngữ pháp giúp em với ạ, sáng mai em học rồi .....
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If someone asks me who I want to be in the future, my answer will be Doctor. When I was a child with a weak resistance, I usually have to be hospitalized. Seeing doctors treat people and help everyone I really admire them and dream of being a person like them. However, to become a doctor it's not an easy journey. First, he has to study hard and effort to get a high mark to win a place at medical university. Then, he needs to learn a lot of things : name of medicines, anatomy,...In the work, Doctor must have a strong character , quiet and balanced to react quickly in emergency situations and to cope with a stress.They can't be mistaken, if not they will deal with pressure from the patient's family members, the labor cycle. Although works as a doctor is very pressured and difficult sometimes but I still choose that job because I think as long as I like it, I can live true to my life where all hardships are just games for life to add color. Besides, I will get much valuable experiences about bravery, power and love. I like challenges, love solving problem and helping people. That's who I am. In this life, nothing is more important than health, when you are sick, money, position, and fame will become nothing, meaningless. Only when you have good health you can live your own life, find enough happiness and peace.
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If someone asks me who I want to be in the future, my answer will be Doctor. When I was a child with a weak resistance, I usually have to be hospitalized. Seeing doctors treat people and help everyone I really admire them and dream of being -> will be a person like them. However, to become a doctor it's not an easy journey. First, he has to study hard and effort to get a high mark to win a place at medical university. Then, he needs to learn a lot of things : name of medicines, anatomy,...In the work, Doctor -> doctors must have a strong character , quiet and balanced to react quickly in emergency situations and to cope with a stress .They can't be mistaken, if not they will -> they won't deal with pressure from the patient's family members, the labor cycle. Although works as a doctor is very pressured and difficult sometimes but I still choose that job because I think as long as I like it, I can live true to my life where all hardships are just games for life to add color. Besides, I will get much valuable experiences about bravery, power and love. I like challenges, love solving problem and helping people. That's who I am. In this life, nothing is more important than health, when you are sick, money, position, and fame will become nothing, meaningless. Only when you have good health you can live your own life, find enough happiness and peace.
 
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