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mình lớp 11 nhưng trình độ kém, viết 2 bài đối thoại để tuần sau nói với bạn, mọi người giúp mình nhé :D:D:D
bài 1: Describing a person
A: hey B. where are you going?
B: I visit the bookstore to buy some books there.
A: Uhm...i want to ask you a question. Do you free in tonight?
B: Yes, i do. What's up?
A: Uhm... I want o invite you go to my home to have dinner ! Do you want to come ?
B: Yes, i want. So, when the dinner begin?
A: At 7 p.m and there are 4 people in the dinner !
B: Who are they ?
A: Trong, you, Lan and Me.
B: I know your friend Trong, but, who is Lan ?
A: This is a new friend, I met her 3 years ago.
B: Oh, what does she like ?
A: She's friendly, cute and outgoing. But, sometimes, she's crazzy !
B: Really !!! Sounds interesting !
A: Yes, DO you want to meet her ?
B: Sure, and what does she look like ?
A: She's got long blond hair, while completion, tall and thin. Unless she has a big eyes. I think she really pretty !
B: Wow, i think i really want to meet her !
A: Yeah, and... Oh,no sorry, i go to the bookstore, see you later !
B: bye !!!


Bài 2: Talking about a party. Or how to plan a party.
A: Hi B. How's it going ? You're looking well !
B: Hi A. Thanks. Yeah, things are pretty good. How about you.
A: Uhm... Listen I'm going to have a party this Sunday. Would you like to come?
B: I'd love to, so, What time does it start ?
A: It starts at 9:30 a.m, Do you want to come with me ?
B: Thanks, but i will go to the party alone. And whose party was it ?
A: It's Trong, That day is his birthday. And i will help him decorated for the party !
B: Sounds great !!! I will help, too.
A: Thank you, Do you know make cake ? We need a person know make cake !!!
B: Oh yes, I know, I will make the flan ! And , who else is going to be there ?
A: I think everybody in class.
B: So, What does the party include ?
A: I think the party have a DJ, foods, drinks, games, flowers and anything. I think so !
B: Wow, It's interesting !
A: Yes, and see you at the party, Goodbye !
B: Bye.

giúp mình sửa ngữ pháp luôn nha !!! :Rabbit55:Rabbit55:Rabbit55
 

ihattl

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mình lớp 11 nhưng trình độ kém, viết 2 bài đối thoại để tuần sau nói với bạn, mọi người giúp mình nhé :D:D:D
bài 1: Describing a person
A: hey B. where are you going?
B: I visit the bookstore to buy some books there.
A: Uhm...i want to ask you a question. Do you free in tonight?
B: Yes, i do. What's up?
A: Uhm... I want o invite you go to my home to have dinner ! Do you want to come ?
B: Yes, i want. So, when the dinner begin?
A: At 7 p.m and there are 4 people in the dinner !
B: Who are they ?
A: Trong, you, Lan and Me.
B: I know your friend Trong, but, who is Lan ?
A: This is a new friend, I met her 3 years ago.
B: Oh, what does she like ?
A: She's friendly, cute and outgoing. But, sometimes, she's crazzy !
B: Really !!! Sounds interesting !
A: Yes, DO you want to meet her ?
B: Sure, and what does she look like ?
A: She's got long blond hair, while completion, tall and thin. Unless she has a big eyes. I think she really pretty !
B: Wow, i think i really want to meet her !
A: Yeah, and... Oh,no sorry, i go to the bookstore, see you later !
B: bye !!!


Bài 2: Talking about a party. Or how to plan a party.
A: Hi B. How's it going ? You're looking well !
B: Hi A. Thanks. Yeah, things are pretty good. How about you.
A: Uhm... Listen I'm going to have a party this Sunday. Would you like to come?
B: I'd love to, so, What time does it start ?
A: It starts at 9:30 a.m, Do you want to come with me ?
B: Thanks, but i will go to the party alone. And whose party was it ?
A: It's Trong, That day is his birthday. And i will help him decorated for the party !
B: Sounds great !!! I will help, too.
A: Thank you, Do you know make cake ? We need a person know make cake !!!
B: Oh yes, I know, I will make the flan ! And , who else is going to be there ?
A: I think everybody in class.
B: So, What does the party include ?
A: I think the party have a DJ, foods, drinks, games, flowers and anything. I think so !
B: Wow, It's interesting !
A: Yes, and see you at the party, Goodbye !
B: Bye.

giúp mình sửa ngữ pháp luôn nha !!! :Rabbit55:Rabbit55:Rabbit55
bài 1: Describing a person
A: hey B. where are you going?
B: I going to the bookstore to buy some books there.
A: Uhm...i want to ask you a question. Do you free in tonight?
B: Yes, i do. What's up?
A: Uhm... I want to invite you to my house for dinner ! Do you want to come ?
B: Yes, i do. So, when will the dinner begin?
A: At 7 p.m and there are 4 people in the dinner !
B: Who are they ?
A: Trong, you, Lan and Me.
B: I know your friend Trong, but, who is Lan ?
A: This is a new friend, I met her 3 years ago.
B: Oh, what does she like ?
A: She's friendly, cute and outgoing. But, sometimes, she's crazy !
B: Really !!! Sounds interesting !
A: Yes, DO you want to meet her ?
B: Sure, and what does she look like ?
A: She's got long blond hair, while completion, tall and thin. Unless she has a big eyes. I think she really pretty !
B: Wow, i think i really want to meet her !
A: Yeah, and... Oh,no sorry, i go to the bookstore, see you later !
B: bye !!!

Bài 2: Talking about a party. Or how to plan a party.
A: Hi B. How's it going ? You're looking well !
B: Hi A. Thanks. Yeah, things are pretty good. How about you?
A: Uhm... Listen I'm going to have a party this Sunday. Would you like to come?
B: I'd love to, so, What time does it start ?
A: It starts at 9:30 a.m, Do you want to come with me ?
B: Thanks, but i will go to the party alone. And whose party was it ?
A: It's Trong, That day is his birthday. And i will help him decorate for the party !
B: Sounds great !!! I will help, too.
A: Thank you, Do you know how to make cake ? We need a baker !!!
B: Oh yes, I know, I will make the flan ! And , who else is going to be there ?
A: I think everybody in class.
B: So, What does the party include ?
A: I think the party have a DJ, foods, drinks, games, flowers and anything. I think so !
B: Wow, It's interesting !
A: Yes, and see you at the party, Goodbye !
B: Bye.

Những chỗ mình tô đậm và gạch chân là mình sửa cho bạn nhé! ^^
 

Bella Dodo

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Bạn tham khảo ^^

Bài 1: Describing a person

A: Hey B. where are you going?
B: I visit am visting/going to the bookstore to buy some books there.
A: Uhm...i want to ask you a question. Do Are you free in tonight?
B: Yes, i do am. What's up?
A: Uhm... I want o (lỗi type ^^) invite you go to my home to have dinner ! Do you want to come ?
B: Yes, i want do. So, when the dinner begins?
A: At 7 p.m and there are 2 other people coming too/ there are 4 people including you and me !
B: Who are they ?
A: Trong, you, Lan and Me.
B: I know your friend Trong, but, who is Lan ?
A: This is a my new friend, I met her 3 years ago.
B: Oh, what does she like ?
A: She's friendly, cute and outgoing. But, sometimes, she's crazzy !
B: Really !!! Sounds interesting !
A: Yes, DO you want to meet her ?
B: Sure, and what does she look like ?
A: She's got long blond hair, while completion, tall and thin. Unless she has a other than her big eyes, I think she’s really pretty !
B: Wow, i think i really want to meet her !
A: Yeah, and... Oh,no sorry, i have to go to the bookstore, see you later !
B: bye !!!


Bài 2: Talking about a party. Or how to plan a party.
A: Hi B. How's it going ? You're looking well !
B: Hi A. Thanks. Yeah, things are pretty good. How about you.
A: Uhm... Listen, I'm going to have a party this Sunday. Would you like to come?
B: I'd love to, so, What time does it start ?
A: It starts at 9:30 a.m, Do you want to come with me ?
B: Thanks, but i will go to the party by myself. And whose party was it ?
A: It's Trong, it’s his birthday. And i will help him decorated for the party !
B: Sounds great !!! I will help, too.
A: Thank you, Do you know make how to bake a cake ? We need a person who knows how to make cakes/bakers !!!
B: Oh yes, I know, I will make the flans ! And , who else is going to be there ?
A: I think everybody in the class.
B: So, What does the party include ?
A: I think the party will have a DJ, foods, drinks, games, flowers and anything. I think so !
B: Wow, It's interesting !
A: Yes, and see you at the party, Goodbye !
B: Bye.
Mình sửa hơi nhiều, nếu bạn thấy lỗi sai của mình, hãy nhắn mình nha ^^
Bella
 
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Không có gì! Mình nhỏ tuổi hơn bạn đấy, nhưng theo mình thì cách viết của bạn hơi bị "cứng", tuy màn đối thoại của bạn lớp 11 lận nhưng mình vẫn hiểu. Mình nghĩ là bạn nên đọc nhiều sách tiếng Anh hon để nâng cao vốn từ vựng, bài viết của bạn sẽ phong phú hơn!
 

moon suvik

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Không có gì! Mình nhỏ tuổi hơn bạn đấy, nhưng theo mình thì cách viết của bạn hơi bị "cứng", tuy màn đối thoại của bạn lớp 11 lận nhưng mình vẫn hiểu. Mình nghĩ là bạn nên đọc nhiều sách tiếng Anh hon để nâng cao vốn từ vựng, bài viết của bạn sẽ phong phú hơn!

mình sẽ làm thử
 

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bài 1: Describing a person
A: hey B. where are you going?
B: I visit the bookstore to buy some books there.
A: Uhm...i want to ask you a question. Do you free in tonight?
B: Yes, I do. What's up?
A: Uhm... I want to invite you to go to my home to have dinner! Do you want to come?
B: Yes, I want. So, when the dinner begin?
A: At 7 p.m and there are 4 people at the dinner!
B: Who are they?
A: Trong, you, Lan and Me.
B: I know your friend Trong, but who is Lan?
A: This is a new friend, I met her 3 years ago.
B: Oh, what does she like?
A: She's friendly, cute and outgoing. But, sometimes, she's crazy!
B: Really !!! Sounds interesting!
A: Yes, DO you want to meet her?
B: Sure, and what does she look like?
A: She's got long blond hair, while completion, tall and thin. Unless she has a big eyes, I think she really pretty!
B: Wow, I think I really want to meet her!
A: Yeah, and... Oh, no sorry, I go to the bookstore, see you later!
B: bye !!!


Bài 2: Talking about a party. Or how to plan a party.
A: Hi B. How's it going? You're looking well!
B: Hi A. Thanks. Yeah, things are pretty good. How about you.
A: Uhm... Listen I'm going to have a party this Sunday. Would you like to come?
B: I'd love to, so, What time does it start?
A: It starts at 9:30 a.m, Do you want to come with me?
B: Thanks, but I will go to the party alone. And whose party was it?
A: It's Trong, That day is his birthday. And I will help him decorate for the party!
B: Sounds great !!! I will help, too.
A: Thank you, Do you know to make the cake? We need a person to know to make cake !!!
B: Oh yes, I know, I will make the flan! And, who else is going to be there?
A: I think everybody in the class.
B: So, What does the party include?
A: I think the party have a DJ, foods, drinks, games, flowers and anything. I think so!
B: Wow, It's fascinating!
A: Yes, and see you at the party, Goodbye!
B: Bye.

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moon suvik

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:Rabbit25
bài 1: Describing a person
A: hey B. where are you going?
B: I visit the bookstore to buy some books there.
A: Uhm...i want to ask you a question. Do you free in tonight?
B: Yes, I do. What's up?
A: Uhm... I want to invite you to go to my home to have dinner! Do you want to come?
B: Yes, I want. So, when the dinner begin?
A: At 7 p.m and there are 4 people at the dinner!
B: Who are they?
A: Trong, you, Lan and Me.
B: I know your friend Trong, but who is Lan?
A: This is a new friend, I met her 3 years ago.
B: Oh, what does she like?
A: She's friendly, cute and outgoing. But, sometimes, she's crazy!
B: Really !!! Sounds interesting!
A: Yes, DO you want to meet her?
B: Sure, and what does she look like?
A: She's got long blond hair, while completion, tall and thin. Unless she has a big eyes, I think she really pretty!
B: Wow, I think I really want to meet her!
A: Yeah, and... Oh, no sorry, I go to the bookstore, see you later!
B: bye !!!


Bài 2: Talking about a party. Or how to plan a party.
A: Hi B. How's it going? You're looking well!
B: Hi A. Thanks. Yeah, things are pretty good. How about you.
A: Uhm... Listen I'm going to have a party this Sunday. Would you like to come?
B: I'd love to, so, What time does it start?
A: It starts at 9:30 a.m, Do you want to come with me?
B: Thanks, but I will go to the party alone. And whose party was it?
A: It's Trong, That day is his birthday. And I will help him decorate for the party!
B: Sounds great !!! I will help, too.
A: Thank you, Do you know to make the cake? We need a person to know to make cake !!!
B: Oh yes, I know, I will make the flan! And, who else is going to be there?
A: I think everybody in the class.
B: So, What does the party include?
A: I think the party have a DJ, foods, drinks, games, flowers and anything. I think so!
B: Wow, It's fascinating!
A: Yes, and see you at the party, Goodbye!
B: Bye.

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