Let's chat in formal english

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time_0017

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To improve English writing skill there're a lot of methods, it depends on each person's qualification. To me I choose practical way that is chatting. Frankly speaking I got good results by this way and now I create this topic to find more good partners to share experiences of English. Certainly I can't meet you and you do too so chatting is the most convenient way to express our thoughts, our interests, our views, etc. So if you feel interested in this contact me. Finally I want to say that this topic is created with the main purpose is to serve our study, therefore I highly recommend you use a formal writing style when we chat with each other, and chatty words mustn't be used because I hate it very much. I think this will be good for both of us.
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ted_ted

I agree with you Ithink that, chatting is a popular activity in our life.So everyone can join in this topic so that all of us can to be together
 
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amaranth

time_0017 said:
To improve English writing skill there're a lot of methods, it depends on each person's qualification. To me I choose practical way that is chatting. Frankly speaking I got good results by this way and now I create this topic to find more good partners to share experiences of English. Certainly I can't meet you and you do too so chatting is the most convenient way to express our thoughts, our interests, our views, etc. So if you feel interested in this contact me. Finally I want to say that this topic is created with the main purpose is to serve our study, therefore I highly recommend you use a formal writing style when we chat with each other, and chatty words mustn't be used because I hate it very much. I think this will be good for both of us.
My nick:time_0017
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Câu thứ nhất:
Em không thể dùng dấu , để ngăn cách hai mệnh đề độc lập; chỉ có thể dùng dấu ; hoặc dấu , kèm với 1 trong 7 từ sau: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so
Câu thứ hai:
For me chứ không phải to me, và sau đó phải có dấu , trước khi vào mệnh đề chính
pratical way là danh từ số ít đếm được, cho nên phải đi với mạo từ (a, an, the) hoặc tính từ sở hữu (my, your, his, her...)
dùng to chat hay hơn chatting để khỏi hiểu lầm là hiện tại tiếp diễn.
Câu thứ ba:
Như đã nói, phải có dấu , trước khi vào mệnh đề chính
phải có dấu , trước 1 trong 7 chữ for/and/nor/but/or/yet/so để phân cách 2 mệnh đề độc lập
experience đi với on hay hơn với of
Câu thứ tư:
Như đã nói, phải có dấu , trước khi vào mệnh đề chính
Như đã nói, phải có dấu , trước 1 trong 7 chữ for/and/nor/but/or/yet/so để phân cách 2 mệnh đề độc lập
I can't meet you => you can't either chứ không phải you do too
Câu thứ năm:
Như đã nói, phải có dấu , trước khi vào mệnh đề chính
Câu thứ sáu:
Như đã nói, phải có dấu , trước khi vào mệnh đề chính
sau with không thể là một mệnh đề; with the main purpose of serving mới đúng
Trước therfore phải là dấu . hoặc ; và sau nó phải có dấu ,


Đấy mới là formal academic writing style
 
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tuyetphan

Theme: If you have 1000$,what will you do??:))
I'll.................................................................
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o0honeybaby0o

Uhm...I'll save this money by putting it in a bank and I'll have interest rate once a month. Oh my God! Money...money...I love money so much!!! :))
 
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o0honeybaby0o

I think that this topic is so interesting but there is the reason why there is nobody to join in this topic ?!
 
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yiin

o0honeybaby0o said:
I think that this topic is so interesting but there is the reason why there is nobody to join in this topic ?!
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yeah! juz becauz the name of the topic is that "chat in formal english" ;)). Moreover, our students study english so much but they aren't confident in using it (like me :)) )
Thank you for creating this thread, I have found the place like this for days :x and today, I have come to the destiny :))
I'm sure that I'm excessively bad at English :(( but now, I think I have enough wisedom to practice to improve my skill. I'm not shy any more.
New environment have trained me to become a "shameless" person :))
And I hope you, maybe my younger sisters and brothers, should learn this attitude to study a new language better.
You shouldn't be shy. Try to be shameless :D. Juz say anything you like and you know, whether it's right or not. Becauz you can learn a lot from mistakes ;)
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o0honeybaby0o

Oh! Thank you for your idea!
And now I want to ask that "WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THE FEAR? AND WHAT ARE YOU AFRAID OF?"
 
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o0honeybaby0o

Now this is my idea about this topic, can yiin help me to correct it?:D Thank you very much.

"The fear is a part of our life, there are many different fears. However, as for me losing the love of my family is the thing that I am afraid of most.

When I’m sad or want to have a place which I can rely on, my family is the first place which I think of. When sitting beside my family, I feel very easy and peaceful in my soul. Because this is the place, which always protects me, form the waves of life. My family keeps my soul always warm and becoming stronger. My family, which is always full of love and I love it most. So, that is the reason why I’m afraid of losing the love of my family. I can’t image that one day, if I lose it, I don’t know whether I can be faced with the waves of life alone…

Each of us has our own family, and I think that family is the place, which is the safest, and it will defend you. And your relatives will love you by all their heart. So don’t waste time! Tell your family that you love them very much with all your feelings, right now!"
 
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yiin

o0honeybaby0o said:
Now this is my idea about this topic, can yiin help me to correct it?:D Thank you very much.

"The fear is a part of our life, there are many different fears. However, as for me losing the love of my family is the thing that I am afraid of most.

When I’m sad or want to have a place which I can rely on, my family is the first place which I think of. When sitting beside my family, I feel very easy and peaceful in my soul. Because this is the place, which always protects me, form the waves of life. My family keeps my soul always warm and becoming stronger. My family, which is always full of love and I love it most. So, that is the reason why I’m afraid of losing the love of my family. I can’t image that one day, if I lose it, I don’t know whether I can be faced with the waves of life alone…

Each of us has our own family, and I think that family is the place, which is the safest, and it will defend you. And your relatives will love you by all their heart. So don’t waste time! Tell your family that you love them very much with all your feelings, right now!"
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:( You pointed me to "correct it" for you, but i'm not sure whether I can do that completely or not :(. Therefore, if I'm wrong, everyone may help us, ok? :D
I'll try my best :">.
****"The fear is a part of our life, there are many different fears. However, as for me losing the love of my family is the thing that I am afraid of most."
>>>> When you first use a noun, it hasn't been definite yet. Therefore, u shouldn't use "the" at the beginning.
Only when u use it secondly, u should. I think so :D.
"The fear is a part of our life" and "there are many different fears" >>>> I personally think that these two sentences are independent, so u cannot put it together with a comma between. U should use a point "."
"as for me" >>> :( this is the first time I've seen this phrase :( I think "for me" is enough. :D

When I’m sad or want to have a place which I can rely on, my family is the first place which I think of
When there are "the first", "the last", "the most"... in adj clause, we are obliged to use "that", not "which" :D
"a place which I can rely on","when sitting beside my family">>>> I find this point having problems, but I'm not sure, so I don't dare to tell you anything, sorry :((. Maybe, it doesn't seem natural. :(
keeps my soul always warm and becoming stronger.
>>> always keep me warm and stronger
(You should notice parallelism when writing :D)
*ADV comes before normal verb.
*keep + adj
*keep + bare infinitive. :D

And some small mistakes of the left part which relate to "Relative clause", the way you use commas. :D You should look back again on your lesson (me 2 :)) )
E.g: Family, which is always full of love and I love it most
"Family" is a general noun in this case, and it hasn't been definite yet. Therefore, if you use relative clause "which is..." you cannot use "," in front of "which"...
>>>> So that the knowledge is more clearly, you should read more in book. I don't have enough ability like books to express all my the ideas for you, dear :D :x
 
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o0honeybaby0o

Thank you very much, I'll acquire your idea, but do you think if I should write another essay about this topic?
 
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