Hi everyone, my name is T.A. I'm a high school student. Usually, I have to go to school and extra class every single day except for Sundays. On Saturday, I spend all of the afternoons studying at school, then I have a day off. And it's the day that I look forward the most of the week. Today is Saturday, so I just have to go to school in the afternoon. I want to spend the morning going to buy something online. Summerbreak is coming up soon, so I need some sport clothes. In this day, I occasionally prepare dinner for my family instead of letting my mom do it. During the week, I hardly ever have time to help her with homework. During the meal, all of the members show ourselves issues, so we can solve them together. After eating dinner, I go to wash the dishes then I'm back to my bedroom and study English. Because tomorrow is a day off, tonight I can stay up late a little bit to watch my favorite movies. On Sunday morning, I'm awake by 4:30 or 5:00 and then I run 10 miles, I get up early because I don't want to waste my day off. I run until 6, I'm back home and have breakfast with my family. I spend a long time cleaning up my home and tidying up my studying table. In the afternoon, I spend2 hours playing football with my teammates. I'm always encouraged to do this to stay fit and healthy. In the evening, I have a delicious dinner. After that I come back to my room and prepare for the next busy week. This is my weekend. How about you? em viết bài này mong mn sửa giúp và đánh giá ạ!
AnterHi everyone, my name is T.A. I'm a high school student. Usually, I have to go to school and extra class
es every day except for Sunday. On Saturday, I spend all of the afternoon studying at school, then I have a day off.
That is the day I look forward the most
in a week. Today is Saturday, so I just have to go to school in the afternoon. I want to spend the morning
buying something online. Summer break is coming up soon, so I need some sport clothes.
On this day, I occasionally prepare dinner for my family instead of letting my mom do it. During the week, I hardly ever have time to help her with
housework. During the meal, all of the members
talk about their issues,
so that we can solve them together. After eating dinner, I go to wash the dishes then I'm back to my bedroom and study English. Because tomorrow is a day off, tonight I can stay up late a little bit to watch my favorite movies. On Sunday morning, I'm awake by 4:30 or 5:00 and then I run 10 miles, I get up early because I don't want to waste my day off. I run until 6, I'm back home and have breakfast with my family. I spend a long time cleaning up my home and tidying up my studying table. In the afternoon, I spend 2 hours playing football with my teammates. I'm always encouraged to do this to stay fit and healthy. In the evening, I have a delicious dinner. After that I come back to my room and prepare for the next busy week. This is my weekend. How about you?
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