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There are a lot of activities that you can do in your leisure time. Some people spend their leisure time to resting and sleeping after they going back to their workplace.Others spend their free time on their favourite activities. For example: they often listenning to music, hang out with their friendsl, go on a picnic, travel , go partying…Some people like me choose sports to enjoy their free time, among different kinds of sports, I often go to swimming.
When you go to swimming, it help you fresher, more than taller and relax. When you swimming , you need all of your body activities maximum so it will very great for your nerve as much as your body.
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After a day from school. I am very refreshed and more alert. When I got home from school, I just finished reviewing the homework and started to relax with a tiring class. When I finish my homework, I watch TV and play useful games. Like plowing, jumping rope and running competition.
Bạn tham khảo nha ^^
There are a lot of activities that you can do in your leisure time. Some people spend their leisure time to resting and sleeping after they going back to their workplace. Others spend their free time on their favourite activities. For example: they often
listenning--->
listen to music, hang out with their
friendsl---->friends, go on a picnic, travel, go partying…Some people like me choose sports to enjoy their free time, among different kinds of sports, I often go to swimming.
When you go to swimming, it
help--->helps you fresher, more than taller and relax. When you swimming , you need all of your body activities maximum so it will very great for your nerve as much as your body.
Listening to music is my favourite leisure activity. After studying or working hard, I would relax by listening to music. It makes me happy, satisfied and fall in sleep easily. Besides, English songs can also help me improve my English. Some meaningful songs encourage me when I feel upset. For these reasons, the music is not only entertaining but also a good way to learn many interesting things or a soul remedy. So, I choose listening to music for my leisure time
-Hơi ngắn cậu có thể tham khảo và thêm một số ý cũng được, chúc cậu học tốt-
Listening to music is my favourite leisure activity. After studying or working hard, I would relax by listening to music. It makes me happy, satisfied and fall in sleep easily. Besides, English songs can also help me improve my English. Some meaningful songs encourage me when I feel upset. For these reasons,
the music---->music is not only entertaining but also a good way to learn many interesting things or a soul remedy. So, I choose listening to music for my leisure time
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