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Teachers and students are invited to listen to the young bamboo radio program of the Nguyen Binh Khiem Squadron to celebrate the 79th anniversary of the founding of the Ho Chi Minh Youth Team (May 15, 1941-15 / 5/2020).
First of all, on behalf of the entire Regiment, we would like to send our best wishes and best wishes to the teachers and students!
First of all, we would like to invite teachers and friends to listen to some outstanding information about the school and Nguyen Binh Khiem Junior High School Team.
It is a great honor and pride for our school to be named NBK, a cultural celebrity, Trang Trinh Nguyen Binh Khiem. NBK Secondary School is located at 304- Mai Dang Chon, located in Hoa Quy Ward, NHS District, Da Nang City. In September 1993, the school was established on the basis of separating from Hoa Hoa II secondary school with a small number of students.
The school year 2019-2020, the school has 25 classes with 1085 students. Continuously for many years, the Party's Party Committee of the school has achieved cleanliness and strength and is an advanced school awarded certificates of merit by the People's Committee. In addition, in the past year, NBK Junior High School has been recognized as a national standard school by workers. The Union consecutively won the Council of the workers with a strong title, excellent thousands of good jobs. The reason for this is because the school has the wise guidance of the Party cell, the executive committee of the school union and the school's pedagogical association. The teachers all meet the 100% standard and above the professional standard; have good teachers at district and city levels. With the love for children, teachers always focus on innovating positive teaching methods, thinking, and creating teaching aids for lessons to become more vivid. Therefore, teaching and learning in schools are always highly effective.
Dear teachers and friends, on September 5, 2020, in harmony with the exciting atmosphere of students across the country, students of Nguyen Binh Khiem Secondary School were extremely excited to start a new school year.
That day, the school gate was open to welcome 1085 students to enter. The song `` Tuoi Hoc Troi '' resounds to make the atmosphere of the school day more exciting and joyful. The teachers at the school open their arms to greet them as the hearts of a mother and father to their children. The team also organized a ceremony to welcome 6th grade students with great joy, hoping that they will be in harmony with the new learning environment and consider it as their second beloved home - where teachers She and her friends always care and love them.
During this school year, our team has been carrying out many activities such as contemplating fruits, lanterns, performing arts, celebrating festivals and many other activities. The team also launched a campaign to raise pigs to help you go to school. This movement, though small, has great significance to help disadvantaged students to continue going to school. I myself see this is a very meaningful movement. Every month, the Coalition also organizes activities to celebrate big holidays to help us have fun and understand the meaning of these holidays. Therefore, I am very happy and proud to be a student at Nguyen Binh Khiem Secondary School.
 
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Teachers and students are invited to listen to the young bamboo radio program of the Nguyen Binh Khiem Squadron to celebrate the 79th anniversary of the founding of the Ho Chi Minh Youth Team (May 15, 1941-15, / 5/2020).
First of all, on behalf of the entire Regiment, we would like to send our best wishes and best wishes to the teachers and students!
First of all, we would like to invite teachers and friends to listen to some outstanding information about the school and Nguyen Binh Khiem Junior High School Team.
It is a great honour and pride for our school to be named NBK, a cultural celebrity, Trang Trinh Nguyen Binh Khiem. NBK Secondary School is located at 304- Mai Dang Chon, located in Hoa Quy Ward, NHS District, Da Nang City. In September 1993, the school was established on the basis of separating from Hoa Hoa II secondary school with a small number of students.
The school year 2019-2020, the school has 25 classes with 1085 students. Continuously for many years, the Party's Party Committee of the school has achieved cleanliness and strength and is an advanced school awarded certificates of merit by the People's Committee. In addition, in the past year, NBK Junior High School has been recognized as a national standard school by workers. The Union consecutively won the Council of the workers with a strong title, excellent thousands of good jobs. The reason for this is because the school has the wise guidance of the Party cell, the executive committee of the school union and the school's pedagogical association. The teachers all meet the 100% standard and above the professional standard; have good teachers at district and city levels. With the love for children, teachers always focus on innovating positive teaching methods, thinking, and creating teaching aids for lessons to become more vivid. Therefore, teaching and learning in schools are always highly effective.
Dear teachers and friends, on September 5, 2020, in harmony with the exciting atmosphere of students across the country, students of Nguyen Binh Khiem Secondary School were extremely excited to start a new school year.
That day, the school gate was open to welcome 1085 students to enter. The song `` Tuoi Hoc Troi '' resounds to make the atmosphere of the school day more exciting and joyful. The teachers at the school open their arms to greet them as the hearts of a mother and father to their children. The team also organized a ceremony to welcome 6th-grade students with great joy, hoping that they will be in harmony with the new learning environment and consider it as their second beloved home - where teachers She and her friends always care and love them.
During this school year, our team has been carrying out many activities such as contemplating fruits, lanterns, performing arts, celebrating festivals and many other activities. The team also launched a campaign to raise pigs to help you go to school. This movement, though small, has great significance to help disadvantaged students to continue going to school. I myself see this is a very meaningful movement. Every month, the Coalition also organizes activities to celebrate big holidays to help us have fun and understand the meaning of these holidays. Therefore, I am very happy and proud to be a student at Nguyen Binh Khiem Secondary School.
Hầu như là đúng hết á chị.Chị học tốt ^^
 

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Teachers and students are invited to listen to the young bamboo radio program of the Nguyen Binh Khiem Squadron to celebrate the 79th anniversary of the founding of the Ho Chi Minh Youth Team (May 15, 1941-15 / 5/2020).
First (First of all), on behalf of the entire Regiment, we would like to send our best wishes and best wishes to the teachers and students!
First (First of all), we would like to invite teachers and friends to listen to some outstanding information about the school and Nguyen Binh Khiem Junior High School Team.
It is a great honor and pride for our school to be named NBK, a cultural celebrity, Trang Trinh Nguyen Binh Khiem. NBK Secondary School is located at 304 - Mai Dang Chon, located in Hoa Quy Ward, NHS District, Da Nang City. In September 1993, the school was established based on (on the basis of) separating from Hoa Hoa II secondary school with a few (a small number of) students.
The school year 2019-2020, the school has 25 classes with 1085 students. Continuously for many years, the Party's Party Committee of the school has achieved cleanliness and strength and is an advanced school awarded certificates of merit by the People's Committee. Also, in the past year, NBK Junior High School has been recognized as a national standard school by workers. The Union consecutively won the Council of the workers with a strong title, excellent thousands of good jobs. The reason for this is that (because) the school has the wise guidance of the Party cell, the executive committee of the school union and the school's pedagogical association. The teachers all meet the 100% standard and above the professional standard; they have good teachers at district and city levels. With the love for children, teachers always focus on innovating positive teaching methods, thinking, and creating teaching aids for lessons to become more vivid. Therefore, teaching and learning in schools are always highly effective.
Dear teachers and friends, on September 5, 2020, in harmony with the exciting atmosphere of students across the country, students of Nguyen Binh Khiem Secondary School were extremely excited to start a new school year.
That day, the school gate was open to welcome 1085 students to enter. The song ``Tuoi Hoc Troi'' resounds to make the atmosphere of the school day more exciting and joyful. The teachers at the school open their arms to greet them as the hearts of a mother and father to their children. The team also organized a ceremony to welcome 6th-grade students with great joy, hoping that they will be in harmony with the new learning environment and consider it as their second beloved home - where teachers She and her friends always care and love them.
During this school year, our team has been carrying out many activities such as contemplating fruits, lanterns, performing arts, celebrating festivals, and many other activities. The team also launched a campaign to raise pigs to help you go to school. This movement, though small, has great significance to help disadvantaged students to continue going to school. I myself see this is a very meaningful movement. Every month, the Coalition also organizes activities to celebrate big holidays to help us have fun and understand the meaning of these holidays. Therefore, I am very happy and proud to be a student at Nguyen Binh Khiem Secondary School.
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như : a small number of bạn nên thay bằng a few hoặc some
Teachers and students are invited to listen to the young bamboo radio program of the Nguyen Binh Khiem Squadron to celebrate the 79th anniversary of the founding of the Ho Chi Minh Youth Team (May 15, 1941-15, / 5/2020).
First of all, on behalf of the entire Regiment, we would like to send our best wishes and best wishes to the teachers and students!
First of all, we would like to invite teachers and friends to listen to some outstanding information about the school and Nguyen Binh Khiem Junior High School Team.
It is a great honour and pride for our school to be named NBK, a cultural celebrity, Trang Trinh Nguyen Binh Khiem. NBK Secondary School is located at 304- Mai Dang Chon, located in Hoa Quy Ward, NHS District, Da Nang City. In September 1993, the school was established on the basis of separating from Hoa Hoa II secondary school with a small number of students.
The school year 2019-2020, the school has 25 classes with 1085 students. Continuously for many years, the Party's Party Committee of the school has achieved cleanliness and strength and is an advanced school awarded certificates of merit by the People's Committee. In addition, in the past year, NBK Junior High School has been recognized as a national standard school by workers. The Union consecutively won the Council of the workers with a strong title, excellent thousands of good jobs. The reason for this is because the school has the wise guidance of the Party cell, the executive committee of the school union and the school's pedagogical association. The teachers all meet the 100% standard and above the professional standard; have good teachers at district and city levels. With the love for children, teachers always focus on innovating positive teaching methods, thinking, and creating teaching aids for lessons to become more vivid. Therefore, teaching and learning in schools are always highly effective.
Dear teachers and friends, on September 5, 2020, in harmony with the exciting atmosphere of students across the country, students of Nguyen Binh Khiem Secondary School were extremely excited to start a new school year.
That day, the school gate was open to welcome 1085 students to enter. The song `` Tuoi Hoc Troi '' resounds to make the atmosphere of the school day more exciting and joyful. The teachers at the school open their arms to greet them as the hearts of a mother and father to their children. The team also organized a ceremony to welcome 6th-grade students with great joy, hoping that they will be in harmony with the new learning environment and consider it as their second beloved home - where teachers She and her friends always care and love them.
During this school year, our team has been carrying out many activities such as contemplating fruits, lanterns, performing arts, celebrating festivals and many other activities. The team also launched a campaign to raise pigs to help you go to school. This movement, though small, has great significance to help disadvantaged students to continue going to school. I myself see this is a very meaningful movement. Every month, the Coalition also organizes activities to celebrate big holidays to help us have fun and understand the meaning of these holidays. Therefore, I am very happy and proud to be a student at Nguyen Binh Khiem Secondary School.
Hầu như là đúng hết á chị.Chị học tốt ^^

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