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Children are expected to spend a lot of time studying both in and after school and have a little time to relax. Does this have positive and negative effects on children and our society? Write an essay of 250 words.
As you know, nowadays, some people say that young people do not make good use of their leisure time and that they spend too much time inside surfing the Internet and playing video games and that they should rather spend more time outside engaging in physical activities. Without a doubt, the development of technology has significantly ameliorated the human’s life. However, it is sometimes argued that the appearance of these modern means of communication will affect to families’ happiness. I partly agree with the opinion. One the one hand, I agree that people's life will be disordered by on modern facilities. First and foremost, people should spend almost time outside engaging in physical activities, but every member wholeheartedly devotes our attention to laptop, playing video games or smartphone screen with many personal reasons instead of taking part in outdoor activities or meetings. With the help of the Internet, modern technology today (smartphones, tablets), moreover, every person can easily searches fully fascinating entertaining resources (game online, new songs, films), which brings amenities of world entertainment for him other than outside engaging in physical activities. Nevertheless, I believe that thanks to modern tools, members’ affection public is unceasingly tightened together. First, especially for those working far away from home, due to geographical distance hinder them from conversing with their family, smart phones today help them be able to talk, share with close relatives. Secondly, for those who are too busy in working, the kinds of special mean of communication become a prosperous tool to enable them to ask after, encourage their children or parents. As a result, the love among people under the same roof becomes increasingly affluent. In conclusion, although modern technology has a significant impact to lifestyle in families, I do not believe that the love among people will be paranoid.
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As you know, nowadays, some people say that young people do not make good use of their leisure time and that they spend too much time inside surfing the Internet and playing video games and that they should rather spend more time outside engaging in physical activities. Without a doubt, the development of technology has significantly ameliorated the human’s life. However, it is sometimes argued that the appearance of these modern means of communication will affect to families’ happiness. I partly agree with the opinion. One the one hand, I agree that people's life will be disordered by on modern facilities. First and foremost, people should spend almost time outside engaging in physical activities, but every member wholeheartedly devotes our attention to laptop, playing video games or smartphone screen with many personal reasons instead of taking part in outdoor activities or meetings. With the help of the Internet, modern technology today (smartphones, tablets), moreover, every person can easily searches fully fascinating entertaining resources (game online, new songs, films), which brings amenities of world entertainment for him other than outside engaging in physical activities. Nevertheless, I believe that thanks to modern tools, members’ affection public is unceasingly tightened together. First, especially for those working far away from home, due to geographical distance hinder them from conversing with their family, smart phones today help them be able to talk, share with close relatives. Secondly, for those who are too busy in working, the kinds of special mean of communication become a prosperous tool to enable them to ask after, encourage their children or parents. As a result, the love among people under the same roof becomes increasingly affluent. In conclusion, although modern technology has a significant impact to lifestyle in families, I do not believe that the love among people will be paranoid.
Tham khảo nhé bạn, chúc bạn học tốt nha ^^
As you know, nowadays, some people say that young people do not make good use of their leisure time and that they spend too much time inside surfing the Internet and playing video games and that they should rather spend more time outside engaging in physical activities. Without a doubt, the development of technology has significantly ameliorated the human’s life. However, it is sometimes argued that the appearance of these modern means of communication will affect families’ happiness. I partly agree with the opinion. One the one hand, I agree that people's life will be disordered by modern facilities. First and foremost, people should spend almost time outside engaging in physical activities, but every member wholeheartedly devotes our attention to the laptop, playing video games or smartphone screens for many personal reasons instead of taking part in outdoor activities or meetings. With the help of the Internet, modern technology today (smartphones, tablets), moreover, every person can easily search for fully fascinating entertaining resources (game online, new songs, films), which brings amenities of world entertainment for him other than outside engaging in physical activities. Nevertheless, I believe that thanks to modern tools, members’ affection public is unceasingly tightened together. First, especially for those working far away from home, due to geographical distance hinder them from conversing with their family, smartphones today help them be able to talk, share with close relatives. Secondly, for those who are too busy working, the kinds of the special mean of communication become a prosperous tool to enable them to ask after, encourage their children or parents. As a result, the love among people under the same roof becomes increasingly affluent. In conclusion, although modern technology has a significant impact on lifestyle in families, I do not believe that love among people will be paranoid.
 
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