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Mình nghĩ phần ideas khá đơn giản với bạn, nên mình sẽ đưa bạn phần structure.

Cấu trúc
- Xác định topic, phân tích topic và identify key words
- Có mở bài, thân bài, kết bài như ta viết văn tiếng việt thôi
- Khi viết thân bài, ta xác định phần đầu viết về lợi ích, phần thứ hai viết về phần 'không lợi ích' và phần ba, trong thể loại này, bạn nên nêu quan điểm nên dùng như thế nào cũng như kinh nghiệm của bạn (bài sẽ phong phú cũng như trôi chảy hơn)
- Khi mở thân bài, bạn phải viết rõ quan điểm, giới thiệu về thân bài. Còn khi viết kết luận, trong thể loại này, bạn phải viết ngắn gọn và súc tích.

Ideas/ notes
- Hãy sắp xếp ý tưởng của bạn ra
- Khi viết về quan điểm, hãy nêu ví dụ trong thực tế để chứng minh bài văn của bạn có dựa trên cơ sở, có nghĩa, không lệch đề, cũng như lôi cuốn người đọc hơn.
- Bạn cũng có thể nên đưa thêm data, statistics để nhấn mạnh vấn đề bạn đang nói.


Bạn hãy thử viết theo structure rồi đăng bài lên đây, chúng ta sẽ cùng nhau sửa.
Còn nếu bạn cần bài tham khảo, bạn có thể nhắn Bella.
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Mình nghĩ phần ideas khá đơn giản với cậu, nên mình sẽ đưa bạn phần structure

Cấu trúc
- Xác định topic, phân tích topic và identify key words
- Có mở bài, thân bài, kết bài như ta viết văn tiếng việt thôi
- Khi viết thân bài, ta xác định phần đầu viết về lợi ích, phần thứ hai viết về phần 'không lợi ích' và phần ba, trong thể loại này, cậu nên nêu quan điểm nên dùng như thế nào cũng như kinh nghiệm của cậu (bài sẽ phong phú cũng như trôi chảy hơn)
- Khi mở thân bài, cậu phải viết rõ quan điểm, giới thiệu về thân bài. Còn khi viết kết luận, trong thể loại này, cậu phải viết ngắn gọn và súc tích.

Ideas/ notes
- Hãy sắp xếp ý tưởng của cậu ra
- Khi viết về quan điểm, hãy nêu ví dụ trong thực tế để chứng minh bài văn của cậu có dựa trên cơ sở, có nghĩa, không lệch đề, cũng như lôi cuốn người đọc hơn.
- Cậu cũng có thể nên đưa thêm data, statistics để nhấn mạnh vấn đề cậu đang nói


Cậu thử viết theo structure đi, sau đó cậu up lên diễn đàn, tay nghề cậu sẽ lên cao đó.
Còn nếu cậu cần bài tham khảo, cậu nhắn mình, mình gửi cậu cho ^^
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Write a composition of 80-120 words in length on the following topic: advantages and disadvantages of using computers
Computer plays an important role in this information era. However, while bringing certain advantages, this high-tech device has its own limitations.
First of all, computer has become a useful tool and an intelligent device in every aspect of life. For example, thanks to Computer and Internet, new technology in medicine is created and applied worldwide i.e. Minimally invasive surgery, microsurgery, and laser surgery. What is more , industrialization could not make its miracle jump without the support of computer and Internet. New constructive materials, new robots, and new fuels are all made with the help of information technology. That is to say computer has made our life become modern, more convenient and civilized. Moreover, computer and Internet is a great means of communication. Distance is no longer a matter of concern when we can send mails within a few seconds or make cheap internet phone call. We can also update ourselves with the latest occurrences in the world with just some simple mouse clicks. In addition, Internet is becoming so popular that having Internet access is no longer a luxury.
Granted that Internet is an indispensable part of life in this high technology era, it has its own limitations. The troubles, however, do not stem from computer or the Internet themselves but the users. The new technology is entirely positive but the users take its advantage for negative purposes. Some people use computers to do nothing but play games, chitchat, spam, create dirty information on the Net. They directly or indirectly detract Internet from its benefits to the community. Many people are scared of using Internet because of their fear of being abused, or spamed. or becoming Internet addicts. In addition, sitting in front of the screen for long hours can lead to obesity, backache, and short-sightedness. Besides, people paying too much attention to online activities may become passive, sluggish in real life because of their lacks of communication, and manual labor.
In short, everything has its two sides, so does computer and Internet. Therefore, it is necessary that we use it for right purposes.
Tham khảo nha. Chúc bạn học tốt ^^
 

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Computer plays an important role in this information era. However, while bringing certain advantages, this high-tech device has its own limitations.
First of all, computer has become a useful tool and an intelligent device in every aspect of life. For example, thanks to Computer and Internet, new technology in medicine is created and applied worldwide i.e. Minimally invasive surgery, microsurgery, and laser surgery. What is more , industrialization could not make its miracle jump without the support of computer and Internet. New constructive materials, new robots, and new fuels are all made with the help of information technology. That is to say computer has made our life become modern, more convenient and civilized. Moreover, computer and Internet is a great means of communication. Distance is no longer a matter of concern when we can send mails within a few seconds or make cheap internet phone call. We can also update ourselves with the latest occurrences in the world with just some simple mouse clicks. In addition, Internet is becoming so popular that having Internet access is no longer a luxury.
Granted that Internet is an indispensable part of life in this high technology era, it has its own limitations. The troubles, however, do not stem from computer or the Internet themselves but the users. The new technology is entirely positive but the users take its advantage for negative purposes. Some people use computers to do nothing but play games, chitchat, spam, create dirty information on the Net. They directly or indirectly detract Internet from its benefits to the community. Many people are scared of using Internet because of their fear of being abused, or spamed. or becoming Internet addicts. In addition, sitting in front of the screen for long hours can lead to obesity, backache, and short-sightedness. Besides, people paying too much attention to online activities may become passive, sluggish in real life because of their lacks of communication, and manual labor.
In short, everything has its two sides, so does computer and Internet. Therefore, it is necessary that we use it for right purposes.
Tham khảo nha. Chúc bạn học tốt ^^
The computer
plays an essential role in this information era. However, while bringing certain advantages, this high-tech device has its own(bỏ đi) limitations.
First of all, the computer has become a useful tool and an intelligent device in every aspect of life. For example, thanks to computers and the Internet, new technology in medicine is created and applied worldwide, i.e. Minimally invasive surgery, microsurgery, and laser surgery. What is more, industrialization could not make its miracle jump without the support of computers and the Internet. New constructive materials, new robots, and further fuels are all made with the help of information technology. That is to say, and the computer has made our life modern, more convenient and civilized.
Moreover, the computer and the Internet is an excellent means of communication. Distance is no longer a matter of concern when we can send mails within a few seconds or make a cheap internet phone call. We can also update ourselves with the latest occurrences in the world with just some simple mouse clicks. Besides, the Internet is becoming so popular that having Internet access is no longer a luxury.
Granted that the Internet is an indispensable part of life in this high technology era, it has its limitations. The troubles, however, do not stem from the computer or the Internet themselves but the users. The new technology is entirely positive, but users take advantage of harmful purposes. Some people use computers to do nothing but play games, chitchat, spam, create dirty information on the Net. They directly or indirectly detract the Internet from its benefits to the community. Many people are scared of using the Internet because of their fear of being abused or spammed or becoming Internet addicts. Also, sitting in front of the screen for long hours can lead to obesity, backache, and short-sightedness. Besides, people paying too much attention to online activities may become passive, sluggish in real life because of their lack of communication, and manual labor.
In short, everything has its two sides, so does computer and Internet. Therefore, we must use it for the right purposes.
 
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Write a composition of 80-120 words in length on the following topic: advantages and disadvantages of using computers
About the advantages
1.broaden your knowledge about the world, the technology,the wildlife,....
2.decress the pressure after studying hardby listenning to music,watching movie,.....
3.help yourself to keep up with the changes of the world by how to use gps,....or the new trend of fashion,...
4.make the distance between people and people closer and convenient
5.have more friends

Let's have a see about the disadvantages
1.easy to addict to the online games,comic,movie,novel,........
2.decline in education
3.ignore the relationship with other members in your family
5.have the effects to your health:eyes notron,...
5.your time was wasted very unsuitable:rongcon1:rongcon1:rongcon1
 
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