[Writing] Advantages of extended family

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Family is one of the most important parts of society. In my opinion, although living in extended family are not so popular because of the difference in viewpoints, beliefs, but it brings us many advantages. Firstly, families now face higher costs of housing and heavier pressure of both childcare and elderly care so living under the same roof can be a good idea to reduce household expenses. It's hard to pay all the expenses: Internet, electricity bill,... alone, but it's not a problem when you live in an extended family, you can share it with everyone. Secondly, extended family is good for childcare and education. Children will have opportunities to know how to learn, grow up and they also get advice from older people about history, traditions, social skills, etc. Besides that, children living in extended families tend to be good at school, more sociable, responsible and sympathetic. Finally, all the family members can spend time together to share all worries, thinkings, and everyone can understand each other more. The family will be more happy and relationships between them will be maintained. In short, I think extended family is a good choice for everyone.
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[jehinguyen]

Theo em là như thế này ạ ^^
Family is one of the most important parts of society. In my opinion, although living in extended family is not popular because of the differences in viewpoints, beliefs, etc, [không cần but nữa, có although phía trước rồi ] it brings us many advantages. Firstly, families now face higher costs of housing and heavier pressure of both childcare and elderly care than ever so living under the same roof can be a good idea to reduce household expenses. It's hard to pay all the expenses: Internet, electricity bill,... alone, but it's not a problem when you live in an extended family because you can share it with everyone. Secondly, extended family is good for childcare and education. Children will have a great deal of opportunities to learn how to learn, grow up and they can also get advice from older people about history, traditions, social skills, etc. Besides that, children living in extended families tend to be better at school than the others - more sociable, responsible and sympathetic. Finally, all the family members can spend time together to share all worries, thinkings, and everyone can have a chance to understand each other . The family will be more happy and the relationships between them will be maintained. In short, I think extended family is a good choice for everyone.

 

[Nguyễn Như Tuyết]

Theo em là như thế này ạ ^^
The family will be more happy and the relationships between them will be maintained. In short, I think extended family is a good choice for everyone.

mình nghĩ là more happy-> happier mới đúng chứ.

 

[Phạm Dương]

Family is one of the most important parts of society. In my opinion, although living in an extended family is not so popular because of the difference in viewpoints, beliefs, but it brings us many advantages. Firstly, families now face higher costs of housing and heavier pressure of both childcare and elderly care so living under the same roof can be a good idea to reduce household expenses. It's hard to pay all the expenses: Internet, electricity bill,... alone, but it's not a problem when you live in an extended family, you can share it with everyone. Secondly, an extended family is good for childcare and education. Children will have opportunities to know how to learn, grow up and they also get advice from older people about history, traditions, social skills, etc. Besides that, children living in extended families tend to be good at school, more sociable, responsible and sympathetic. Finally, all the family members can spend time together to share all worries, thinkings, and everyone can understand each other more. The family will be happier and relationships between them will be maintained. In short, I think an extended family is a good choice for everyone.
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- although không đi với but
- Idea 1: điều này thực ra khá là vô lý. Với 1 đại gia đình, các chi phí sinh hoạt đều cao hơn, bởi có người già và trẻ nhỏ, lực lượng lao động sẽ phải gánh vác nhiều trách nhiệm hơn trong việc chăm sóc và chi phí chi trả. Người già có nhiều người không có lương hưu, trẻ nhỏ thì làm gì có công việc, san sẻ kiểu gì? VD như gia đình ở VN thường sẽ có 2 vợ chồng đều có việc làm, 2 đứa con nhỏ và bố mẹ già, vậy lực lượng lao động chính là 2 vợ chồng phải gánh hết. chứ không phải chỉ người vợ hoặc người chồng phải gánh vác.

 

[doanchi2014@yahoo.com]

Family is one of the most important parts of society. In my opinion, although living in extended family is not so popular (common) because of the differences in viewpoints (points of view), beliefs, .. it brings us many advantages (it provides us with an amount of benefits). Firstly, (modern day) families (now) face higher costs of housing and (are put under the) heavier pressure of both childcare and elderly care so living under the same roof can be a good idea to reduce household expenses. It's hard to pay all the expenses: water bill, electricity bill,... alone(on your own), but it's not a problem(issue ) when you live in an extended family as you can share it with everyone. Secondly, extended family is good for childcare and education. Children will have opportunities to learn, grow up and also get advice from older people about history, traditions, social skills, etc. Besides that, children living in extended families tend to be good at school, more sociable, responsible and sympathetic. Finally, all the family members can spend time together to share all worries, thinkings, and everyone can understand each other more. The family will be more happy and relationships (tie/ bond)between them will be maintained steadily. In short, I think extended family is a good choice for everyone.