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Đề Do you like living in the countryside or in the city? Why?

I like living in the country side because of these reasons. first, life in the city is very fast and complex but life in the countryside is simple and comfortable. second, there are fewer factories in the countryside than in the city so there is no air pollution . it is better for everyone's health. in addition, the people here are very friendly and hard-working. when i come to the countryside i always feel peaceful, close to nature and people around me.For these reasons, i prefer live in the countryside than live in the city.

 

[Angrybirdpm123]

các bạn sửa giúp mình với:
Đề Do you like living in the countryside or in the city? Why?

I like living in the country side because of these reasons. first, life in the city is very fast and complex but life in the countryside is simple and comfortable. second, there are fewer factories in the countryside than in the city so there is no air pollution . it is better for everyone's health. in addition, the people here are very friendly and hard-working. when i come to the countryside i always feel peaceful, close to nature and people around me.For these reasons, i prefer live in the countryside than live in the city.

câu cuối em sửa lại nhé
would prefer to do sth rather than do sth hoặc prefer doing sth to doing st đều được

 

[diemlinhphuong]

các bạn sửa giúp mình với:
Đề Do you like living in the countryside or in the city? Why?

I like living in the country side because of these reasons. first, life in the city is very fast and complex but life in the countryside is simple and comfortable. second, there are fewer factories in the countryside than in the city so there is no air pollution . it is better for everyone's health. in addition, the people here are very friendly and hard-working. when i come to the countryside i always feel peaceful, close to nature and people around me.For these reasons, i prefer live in the countryside than live in the city.

I like living in the countryside because of these reasons. firstly, life in the city is very fast and complex while life in the countryside is simple and comfortable. Secondly, there are fewer factories in the countryside than in the city, so there is no air pollution . It is better for everyone's health ( mình nghĩ chỗ này dùng our health thì hay hơn) . In addition, (bỏ the)people here are very friendly and hard-working. when i come to the countryside, i always feel peaceful, close to nature and people around me .For these reasons, i prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the city.

 

[jehinguyen]

Theo mình là chữa một số đoạn như thế này ^^
I like living in the countryside for many reasons (tránh lặp these reasons ở câu cuối). firstly, life in the city is very hectic (dùng từ này sẽ hay hơn, nghĩa là : cực kì bận rộn) and complex while life in the countryside is simple and comfortable. secondly, there are fewer factories in the countryside than in the city so there is no air pollution and the air here is fresh . Therefore, it is heathier to live in the countryside. in addition, the people here are very friendly and hard-working. whenever (để nhấn mạnh) i come to the countryside i always feel peaceful, close to nature and people around me.For these reasons, i prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the city.

 

[diemlinhphuong]

Theo mình là chữa một số đoạn như thế này ^^
I like living in the countryside for many reasons (tránh lặp these reasons ở câu cuối). firstly, life in the city is very hectic (dùng từ này sẽ hay hơn, nghĩa là : cực kì bận rộn) and complex while life in the countryside is simple and comfortable. secondly, there are fewer factories in the countryside than in the city so there is no air pollution and the air here is fresh . Therefore, it is heathier to live in the countryside. in addition, the people here are very friendly and hard-working. whenever (để nhấn mạnh) i come to the countryside i always feel peaceful, close to nature and people around me.For these reasons, i prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the city.

Jehi này, mình nghĩ là bạn kia dùng chữ complex sẽ phù hợp hơn chữ hectic vì vế sau có chữ simple > < complex. Hơn nữa cụm no air pollution tức là không có ô nhiễm và cũng gần nghĩa với fresh: sạch. Vậy nên mình nghĩ dùng thì sẽ bị thừa đấy

 

[jehinguyen]

Jehi này, mình nghĩ là bạn kia dùng chữ complex sẽ phù hợp hơn chữ hectic vì vế sau có chữ simple > < complex.

Mình dùng hectic để thay cho fast mà ( hectic life là collocation), dùng sẽ hay và đúng hơn ^^

Hơn nữa cụm no air pollution tức là không có ô nhiễm và cũng gần nghĩa với fresh: sạch. Vậy nên mình nghĩ dùng thì sẽ bị thừa đấy

Ừm ^^