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bài làm
In the mordern life , study plays an important part in our life . In oder to improve the children's education, many parents tend to force their children to study after school hour. From my point of view , I appreciate the way student's self study at home highly than they have some extra classes after school.
First of all , children are not a machine and their ability can not completed by the parents.When attending too many exra classes t, this leads to the lack of time for kids to relax for kids or hang out with their friends . Hence, their ability to communicate with others will be a serious problem for parents . Besides learning , children need to attend activities such as swiming,singing, dancing......to improve social skills .
Secondly , with the expectation of parents from their children , they put the children under a lot of pressure because they always want their children to be at the top of classes and get high mark every test. Many students have to suffer from anxiety and depression ( thêm em vài câu ạ ,ngắn quá mà bí)
Last but not least ,the tuition is also a problem of extra classes , it cost a lot of money to pay enough. (thêm giùm em ạ)
It is true that taking extra class will improve our knowledge . However, it will be ineffective if we don't learn by ourselve at home. Everything we learn is easy to forget so we have to revise everyday
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bài làm
In the mordern life , study plays an important part in our life . In oder to improve the children's education, many parents tend to force their children to study after school hour. From my point of view , I appreciate the way student's self study at home highly than they have some extra classes after school.
First of all , children are not a machine and their ability can not completed by the parents.When attending too many exra classes t, this leads to the lack of time for kids to relax for kids or hang out with their friends . Hence, their ability to communicate with others will be a serious problem for parents . Besides learning , children need to attend activities such as swiming,singing, dancing......to improve social skills .
Secondly , with the expectation of parents from their children , they put the children under a lot of pressure because they always want their children to be at the top of classes and get high mark every test. Many students have to suffer from anxiety and depression ( thêm em vài câu ạ ,ngắn quá mà bí)
Last but not least ,the tuition is also a problem of extra classes , it cost a lot of money to pay enough. (thêm giùm em ạ)
It is true that taking extra class will improve our knowledge . However, it will be ineffective if we don't learn by ourselve at home. Everything we learn is easy to forget so we have to revise everyday
